not much to say really im just a new writer to the expanding community
Expect the unexpected is what most explorers would say but how would one expect a group of multicoloured talking ponies? well we shall see what happens when this happens when a group of explorers find said ponies (based on ideas i had at night and ramblings with my server)
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"Right then it's settled Jacob you and me are going underground looking for ores.Ryan you head to the east try to find a dungeon .Zak You try to find a Sky island. Are we all clear on what we're doing?"
Ryan simply replied "Toby when did we make you in charge?"
Toby thought for a second and came up with "Well if we all have copper items and we need better items then ores are important thus due to us having the most important job me and Jacob are in charge!"
"Jacob and I" Zak Spoke in his general meek manner and as usual he went unheard
Ryan began his journey east through field that was once a forest a few saplings remnants of what once was before they arrived
Maybe one day the forest would return. These were the lonely thoughts Ryan pondered on his often lonesome journeys through this unusual land.
It was only a week ago that they arrived here none of them new each other but soon they banded together through will of survival fear of death making friends or whatever they had managed to build a house well more a village nearby there point of arrival. Of course they would have known none of this if it weren't for Tanner resident guide and idiotic prick but he helped when he wasn't opening doors for slimes.
Speaking of slimes Ryan hadn't wandered far before he came across his first swarm of the gelatinous creatures. They burnt like hell if they could touch you as evidenced by burn marks on everyone. By now though the slimes were more of a nuisance then a threat. Ryan readied his spear, it wasn't well made, being bent at the shaft and blunt on the tip, it was still better then the copper short swords everyone else carried around, however no one else knew about the spear. After a few minutes with Jacob and Toby
He found them irritatingly stupid yet strangely cunning as he made a mental note to watch out for them
Zak wasn't strong willed and he wasn't brave, honestly he seemed useless, yet as they soon saw Zak could make exceptional structures. Now Ryan he was always a fighter he took kendo back home wherever that was but alas he knew how to wield a sword and other weapons to good effect.
Once more Ryan realised he was getting lost in his own mind so he trudged on or rather he was going to before he was interrupted by a cry for help "That didn't sound like the others." he said aloud increasing in speed. As he got closer
he could make out a vague shape and could only think is that a unicorn?
Probably want to add the bolded and continue or delete the underlined sentence
interesting concept, but it needs a HELL of a lot of work.
Love the good start but maybe you should make them a little bit longer