Ponimon Adventure

by KaijinZero

Kyubiimon pt.1

"So...why are we doing this instead of staying at primary village again?" Terry asked Twilight.

"Well, Jijimon told us to look for Babamon Becasue she has'nt contacted him in a while." Twilight replied.

"Not only that, but our partners are also the Digidestined. If they were to stay at the village until the Legendary 4 could help, they wouldn’t be doing their duty to the Digital World" Velvet added.

"Yeah...I’m still tryin to come to grips with it." Spike said.

"Well, we'll be with you guys the entire way, so you don’t have much to worry about."Agumon told the baby dragon.

"Well, almost nothing." Fluttershy whispered. "What if we run into Allomon and Tyrannomon again?” she asked.

"Yeah, and?!" Rainbow said from a cloud she was riding with Veemon. "If those two come back we can just have Terry and Velvet Digivolve again, at least until Veemon here evolves."

"I bet I’ll be the coolest one out of us all! Maybe I’ll even skip a few levels and just go to Ultimate!" Veemon exclaimed, before almost falling from the cloud.

"Well I don’t know about you all, but I just hope that the Garuru village has a bath. I can feel the dirt trying to get stuck in my fur."

"I really don’t see how, considering that I’ve been carrying you since we left the primary village..." Renamon told her partner.

"And you should be proud, especially since you're only a Child." Rarity complemented.

Sighing, Renamon thought back to what Jijimon had told them after Terry and Velvet had devolved back to normal.

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"Well well, it seems that you are a very special group of young mares." Jijimon had said.

"Yeah well, you know..." Rainbow grinned. "This is nothing compared to what we do back in Equestria...it’s still pretty cool though!"

"Ya know Rainbow, a little humility doesn’t hurt once in a while." Applejack told the pegasus.

"Jijimon, what did you mean, special group?" Renamon asked. "I mean, they did tell us that they were the Elements of Harmony in their world, but..."

"Elements of Harmony? These six?" Jijimon asked.

"And I'm Twilights number one assistant." Spike added.

"Well that just confirms it. Lopmon..."

"Velvet Dawn now sir." Velvet corrected the old Digimon.

"Ah, a name! Very nice, but anyway Velvet, do you remember the tale that has been passed down for years?"

"Yes sir! It was from long before the Legendary Four came to the Digital World. It said that in a time where Darkness threatens two worlds, and if it wasn’t stopped, both would face eternal darkness."

"That sounds similar to the tale of Nightmare Moon..." Twilight said.

"Ok. So anyway, both would suffer many catastrophes before ten lights known as the Digidestined would come to bring Harmony back to both."

"So in other words," Gaomon said, "You six and the Legendary Four are meant to save the world!"

"Not quite Gaomon." Jijimon told the blue dog. "The Legendary four are excellent ponies, But none of them is one of the lights told of in the story."

"So we have to find at least three other ponies to help." Applejack reasoned. "But seein' how we're all here in this world, Ah don’t see how we can do it."

"Maybe not, but I believe my wife could help you all with that."

"Wait what!" Spike exclaimed. "You mean all this time, we could have been asking her for help!?"

"Sorry, but you did say that Shining Armor wanted you guys to stay here..."

"That doesn’t matter now." Twilight said, stepping forward. "We have a duty to Equestria as the Elements to keep it safe."

"Yay! Looks like it’s time for a super big adventure!" Pinkie was beginning to bounce from the excitement.

"Well...um...I guess since the worlds are depending on us. And there must be so many cute Digimon we could meet too..."

"That’s the spirit Fluttershy!" Patamon said.

"Well, I’m with Pinkie here!" Rainbow said with a flick of her mane. "Besides, if Spitfire sees that I saved this world too, I would definitely be in the Wonderbolts."

"Your world is a nice change of pace from the farm. Ah guess Sweet Apple Acres will be fine without me for a bit."

"Well...so long as I don’t get dirty too often, I suppose this is in my best interest." Rarity agreed. "Not to mention I may get a few more ideas for dress designs."

"Wonderful. Now I have a favor to ask. My wife Babamon went to the Garuru Village a few days ago, but I haven’t heard from her."

"So ya want us to go check on her, right?" Gaomon asked.

"Yes, in a sense. But if something is amiss, you can take care of it. One last thing, Velvet?"

"Yes Jijimon?"

"You said that you evolved to Sorcermon, am I correct?"

"Um...yes...what wrong."

"Many things actually. For one, your species normally don’t evolve to Sorcermon, so you may have Error Evolved."

"E-Error Evolved?" Fluttershy stammered.

"It may be nothing, but please, keep an eye on her Miss Sparkle. I wish you all good luck on your journey."

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Renamon's gaze had drifted to the brown rabbit now. 'I hope it is nothing like Jijimon said.' Renamon thought.

"So if you don’t mind me asking, could you tell us what's the deal with Error Evolving?" Rainbow asked her partner. "It doesn’t sound too bad."

"Well, Error Evolving is a pretty recent event, but it rarely ever happens. Sometimes, Digimon evolve to the wrong thing, and at first it was just a minor problem." He began

"But then, a few months afterward, one Error Evolved Digimon went berserk, and it took a lot of Digimon just to stop it." Agumon continued. "So now we have to be careful if a Digimon does Error Evolve."

"Well, lucky for us I didn’t feel like I was about to lose control." Velvet said, thinking about what would have happened if she did go wild while they were fighting Tyrannomon and Allomon. "But maybe it’s different for us since we evolved to protect our partners."

"Now that you mention it...I did feel a weensy minsy teensy weensy bit of a tug when Terry evolved to Gargomon." Pinkie said.

"Well, if it helps keep us safe...I don’t mind sharing some of my energy...as long as you don’t become really scary Patamon." Fluttershy squeaked out.

"But Fluttershy look at him!" Pinkie said, popping up next to the flying mammal Digimon and holding him to the pegasus' face. "How can something so cute become super duper terrifying?"

"Well I guess not Patamon."

"Please put me down."

As the group laughed at the pink mare's antics, a pair of yellow eyes began to eye them from a bush. The creature they belonged to flashed a toothy grin. It had just found its way into its boss’s good graces.

Comments

[SuperPinkBrony12]

Oh boy it's time for another battle.

[The Digital Guy]

Hey, I thought I would let you know that in the description you spelt their wrong. And now to actually reading it.

[The Digital Guy]

Here are some mistakes:

CH.1

Everypony except Pinkie rolled their eyes. "Still, I don’t believe it’s not Discords doin all this stuff." Applejack said as she took a sip from her apple cider. "

You need to get rid of that pesky quotation at the end.

Before we continue, there’s a law of the universe i should tell you about known as Murphy’s Law.

The 'i' between universe and should needs to be capitalized.

“You know Viximon, Gummymon and Kokomon aren’t the only sibling digimon! Prince Apollomon and Princess Dianamon are siblings.’

That last symbol needs to be a quotation, and not a... I seem to have forgotten.

There were six smells he was unfamiliar with, followed with six more he knew well. It appeared they hadn’t learned their lesson the last time, and this time, they bought* friends. He would eat well today, starting with the one who was close to him.

brought*

“Same here Demi Veemon. I do have to admit, that was pretty cool, but it wouls* be a lot cooler to live!”

would*

Like Wanyamon, Koromon had become vastly different from what he was, and now looked almost like Allomon, but was about Spikes size with read* bands on his claws.

red*

Twilight looked back to see a large blue dionsaru* like man with red flame inspired armor standing nex** to-"Shining Armor? what are you doing here!"

dinosaur* and next**

The line under that needs a capitalized I.

And that concludes chapter one! Join me tomorrow for more Grammar Nazi action!

[KaijinZero]

2733951...sir I just might have to make you a prereader...

[The Digital Guy]

2735526
Nope, I don't do that stuff, but I will be reading tonight, so watch out for another comment. (You are going to fix these, right?)

Anyway, I simply felt obliged to help since you recently joined my group.

[KaijinZero]

2739162 i know the difference, its a throwback to the subs(where they say Shinka, which means Evolve in Japanese). if im gonna use Jap inserts, im gonna use Jap terms.

[The Digital Guy]

2740637
Alright then.

Mistakes of CH.2 :

“What are ya talkin bout Lopmon!” the newly christened Terry said. “IT* does get kinda old calling us by our name, I mean, there’s** hundreds of Terriermon’s in the Digital World, what if we go into a village full of us?”

*Less capital on that 't'. ** 'there are' would sound much nicer, and make the story roll a little better.

“Well, from what I can tell, they aren’t the same; there are six this time, along with some stunted purple Tyrannomon as well. Flamedramon did come to their rescue though, so I bet one of thems* related in some way.”

*them's

Growling lowly, Allomon turned to the other set of footprints. “Well, they did embarrass me, so why should* we kill fourteen birds with fire?”

*shouldn't? honestly that line is a little confusing, but if you added that then I could manage it. (Or perhaps ", so why don't we go kill fourteen birds with fire?")

And that is chapter 2, tomorrow is my last day of school this year, so I'll see about correcting every chapter from there on out.