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Doug Walker (Nostalgia Critic) doesn't like ponies.
He said on Facebook that he respects all people that try out different cartoons once in a while, but he isn't into MLP.
91096 I never said he liked ponies and I already know that fact. I was merely doing a parody of Kickassia.
Take it as what it is.
Really? Kickassia? Of all the things to crossover...I love this community.
Oh boy where to begin. You really should find another way of having two people talk to each other besides, "celestia said this, then Discord said this, then Celestia said this, then Discord said this". I didn't say to change your format (sentence, enter key, sentence, enter key), just add more to the scene then two people talking.
And for the love of TGWTG.com try to keep them in some kind of order, remember what you like about each person and try to get their 2 cents in where is needed. If you really are doing just the kickassia arc I recommend watching it over between each chapter you write because kickassia has a lot of characters fighting for the spotlight and if you leave anyone out of conversation for too long fans will call you out on it.
One last thing, don't make a big deal between out of [humans in Equestria], remember they all have in cannon powers that they got from games or comics or movies, talking ponies should not have an entire chapter or half chapter dedicated to it.
That was actually a pretty accurate re-telling of Kickassia with your own unique bit about Jester, which is a nice touch. I look forward to chapter 3
95586 You have no idea how happy I am to hear that. I barely got a wink of sleep last night because I was worried people wouldn't like it. Clearly those fears are unfounded. I sincerely thank you all for reading my story. You've certainly put a smile on my face.
Use spiders :D always the best plan!
A pony crossover with Kickassia??? Oh goody!
OMG You included the Dr Insano moment using Luna and had Dr Smith show up and talk about SPIDERS!!!. Oh man this chapter was hilarious
I really enjoy this crossover, Discords Plan was funny and the interactions of all these characters is priceless
111759 You know, it's people like you that bring a smile to my face.
I was doubting if I could pull this off, with so many character I had to juggle around. But it seems I was wrong. You people seemed to have enjoyed it.
Thank you all. That's all I have to say.
I was re-reading your excellent Kickassia crossover. Then I realized something. Where's Screwball? you mentioned her last chapter and she sprung to mind since I've been reading the Button Stitch/Screwball stories again.
Granted you are including a lot of characters so you could probably make a joke out of it in the next chapter.
Oh god my sides, they hurt so much from all the chuckling and laughing this story has made me experience.
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Dr Smith was used well and Screwball as Diamond's sister was actually a very nice touch. I laughed at the bit with the Cannon, I was wondering how you would make Discord and his army retreat + now I get to look forward to the next chapter where they all lament on their failed attempt at conquest and then rally for a second attempt
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Also the Celestia, Discord romance is a nice personal touch to the story, gives plenty of opportunities for romantic comedy and goofiness
. And that mysterious presence at the start talking to Screwball adds some ominous tones too 
.
*Spoilers*
This story ends when after Discord and Celestia get back together and Dr. Smith unleashes his legions of spiders and kills them all! I'm calling it here and now, its gonna happen! Spiders, legions of spiders! Dooming us all and eating our vital fluid like in Spideress! Mwahahhaha!
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*walks away*
Me *reads Equestrian Deadpool's comment*
*Slowly backs away*
Kickassia, Marik´s evil concil of doom amd MLP this is fricking fantastic.
This is amazing, I love all of it. especially DR smith and his Spiders. I laugh out loud so much.
"SCARING THE LITTLE FILLY!"
who else got that reference.
So...Much... WIN!
This was a brilliant chapter, I can't believe so many of the little and major things I suggested, made it into this awesome story
. Then again perhaps you already had most of it planned already
.
And there were so many other little things that were just nice or fit in really well with this story, the history between Blueblood and Surprise, The CMC learning Dragonshouts/words of power, Screwball flying, The Master referencing the Time War, Carrot Top stealing Phelous's scene and Dinky and Sparkler being looked after by Twilight
. And so many other tidbits that make this story one of my favourite crossovers 
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Awesome as always!!!, I can't wait for Luna to give into mthe madness. aslo SPIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIDERSSSSSSSS!!!!!
I like the Discord and Celestia dealo, also I see you were quick in include Flim and Flam, nice touch. Keep up the good work!
woot flim and flam my favorite charactors
The FlimFlam's are my favourite characters to hate
. They remind me of those piano guys from Family Guy.
Great chapter, Discords Army vs Chimera Ponies? Things aren't looking up for Discord at all, the self-sabotaging, lovable Chaos Spirit that he is
IT,S TIME!!!!!!
Ok next chapter, you better include intoxication, discord's drunken army storming (staggering blindly into) the canter-lot gates yelling valiantly (random expletives). Also I assume Gilder would be pleased.
"You're kingdom." should be "Your kingdom," but I can think of no other criticisms for this first chapter.
awsome song ^_^ is it a parody? i wanna hear it
YOU! (Points at Evowizard25) How did you do it? You wrote a song, I read a song, but I swear I could hear it playing
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And it was awesome nice work Evo, loved this chapter, and you've hinted at so many things. Are Lunanites some sort of pro-luna cult? like Discord's cult that Celestia disbanded. And Luna's Royal guards are loyal solely to her, a nice touch I might add
. It shows that Luna isn't just around the Palace, she actually has real power both politically and magically.
183927>>184007 Okay, the song that you guys heard was a parody of Gaston! I doubt I could write a song off the top of my hat. (Possibly, but I would have to have music to guide me.) And yes, the Lunanites are like Discord's group but different.
Giving away a couple of spoiler for Resistance: Equestria here, but Discord's cult is not entirely loyal to him. One half want Equestria to become a care free, playful land, much like Discord wants it to be, while the other half want to go with a more destructive kind of chaos.
Luna's guard are not like that. They are solely loyal to Luna and do not sway in different groups. The Lunanites are a solely unicorn cult that use the power of the moon to aid them in their magicical abilities.
(And to be a spoiler, they are based off of the Mooninites from Yugioh Abridged who are based off of something else. I can't remember the name.)
I hope you all enjoyed it.
Until next time,
Sincerely,
Evo
Nice Spongebob reference and Beauty and The Beast reference. Other than that, it was just a real nice chapter. I'm not really good at making long or descriptive comments, can't wait for next chapter.
134517 I got that referance!
I
you so much for making this story.
Let me see if I got this.
Discord - Nostalgia Critic
Trixie - Cinema Snob
Princess Luna - Spoony
Diamond Dogs - Angry Joe
134517>>223322 Congradulations, you both got the reference.
223328 Eyup. That's the characters they are kind of based around in this story, although, I'm trying not to just copy the whole thing. (Hey, aren't you that guy on youtube? I think we've met before.)
223331 Eeyup, That's me. Do you like my videos?
223345 Of course, I love your videos.
Yugioh abridged and FIM are both so awesome and you put them together so well.
172211 Oh yeah, those guys on Family Guy. I think I'll make a spoof about that on Youtube now.
Of course, I think Flim and Flam are the baddest villains in this series so far. Sure, Trixie, Gilda, and Blueblood were rude, but Flim and Flam actually tried to kick a family out of their home. That’s just unforgivable. Am I right?
223741 Well, yes. They did try to do just that, but I still found them really enjoyable, even more so, dare I say it, than Discord. I like to write him, but the brothers are more entertaining, and let's not forget about their song. Among the best in the show, if not one of my favorite songs of all time.
I really, enjoyed this chapter. Adding Humans to the mix is kinda... meh.
Still overall I liked the chapter, Chimeran Ponies are awesome
. Also are those three members of the inquisition based of an old British TV comedy? I think I've maybe seen it once, something about the soft and hard chair. But the name escapes me 
. I think it had Rowan Atkinson in it.
229071 Of course, I did get them from Monty Python's The Spanish Inquisition sketch.
)
Also, humans don't play an important role in this story, so don't expect to see much of them, if any, in future chapters. (Don't let it get yo down...Darn, I feel as though I've just upset my best friend. I'm sorry.
229078 It's cool Evo. I figured with the Lunanites, Royal Guard (Celestia & Luna's), Elements of Harmony, Discord's army, Chimera Ponies, The looming threat of Discord and a possible return of Nightmare Moon. The story didn't need Humans bogging it down XD. Still knowing you Evo, I'm sure you can pull something Epic out of all this.
And now we have the Celestial Inquisition to spice things up (The fun hast been Doubled), throw in the fact they have some background history with Twilight and that they're a parody of something from Monty Python and I know you can blow my mind.
NOONE EXPECTS THE SPANISH INQUISITION
I LOVE THIS STORY!
I certainly didn't expect it...
Keep up the good work!
First!
Please keep writing more. I can't wait for the part where Luna gives into the madness.
What's this? A Chaotica update?
That was a fun chapter, Rarity being kidnapped so easily, they really need to bump up security in Canterlot Castle.
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yey 