Hey you guys! I'm Pinkie Pie! Party planner and baker from Sugarcube Corner? Or, as others know me, Pinkamena, the murderer from the story "Cupcakes"... I DO NOT APPROVE OF THIS! It's a lie! A lie I tell you, a lie!!! Ever since that mysterious little story popped up at the library, everybody has been running away from me and acting all cray-cray! So sit down with Auntie Pinkie, and I'll tell you how one story could ruin a pony's life... Oh yeah, and I'M NOT A MURDERER!
My first ever one-shot. This is my little parody of "Cupcakes". Since everybody (or pony) always makes prequels and sequels and takes on the story, I thought I'd do my own (with a completely different concept)... I hope you enjoy.
I had this Idea Forever, and was gonna make a story about it, but decided against it. Good to see someone with a though process similar to mine.
Ponies appear to be highly susceptible to gossip.
It is all great except for one thing. the ending is rushed, serioulsy rushed.
I would recomend that you gave the ending a small re-write. flesh it out a bit, and actually get it to make sense.
This is actually the ONLY take on cupcakes i have enjoyed
for that you deserves a star.
Let's rate it.
The story is fantastic. You could however have made the changes to pinkie a bit more distinct. make her stop bounching at ifrst, then getting VERY sad and so on.
Your way of writing is funny. Some rambling here, an of hoof comment there... You actually made it sound like Pinkie Pie.
Please fix te ending to get the 5th and maybe the 6th spike
Let's see. 1 gren thumb, 1 yellow star and 4 of 6 spikes
This had potential.
Then, you limed.
*sigh*
I'll just...
Go get some brain bleach.
Thanks you for writing this.
"and let's just say that we've been licking the icing off each other's cupcakes every week ;D "
O.O
WHAO
that has got to be the greatest innuendo i have ever seen
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It was doing really well...
And then sexual innuendos and double shipping.
Eh... Still pretty good.
Thank you Pinkie. I can now get to sleep at night.
<--This is not Pinkie Pie
<--This is Pinkie Pie
Know the difference!
You're a PinkieDash shipper too eh?
I loved the randomness here! This is exactly how Pinkie would talk!
Silver out!
That was a freakishly huge amount of gramatically incorrect story writing, but I like the idea... but I'm not so sure about the PinkieDash shipping cuz my bff is supposed to be pinkie pie and im supposed to be dash!
nope not gonna do it not gonna do it oh i can't help it BAHHAHAHAHAHHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA GIVE THE PONY NAMED PINKIE PIE ALL YOUR FOOD? HAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHA
this is very good, i like your writing-style!!
lol, PinkieDash or RainbowPie.
Aww, I found this really cute! >U<
That was never a lie it true and it must be stop
pessbian
2028751 AHHHHHHHHHHH PINKIMEANA FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU
most amusing xD and i had to read the whole thing in Pinkie's voice and now Im reading and thinking everything in her voice, including this Dx
1900741 heh-heh.....Pinkiedash?.....I liked this book...although...its kiiiiiiiinnnnnnda true...kinda not true...anyway, I liked it and I love the PinkieDash ship....wuv u Dashie
just stop...
this story was really amusing and very to read!
that was realy amusing and
Pinkie Pie and I can relate when it comes to trying to write Applejack dialogue. (You: ) No I'm serious. (You: ) (Both of us: )
Oh my God! Ues! I love comedy parodies of cupcakes. The real story I hate, but you made just the right parody!
Cupcakes is literally everything wrong with this fucking fandom (well that and clop) And basically ruins the character for the entire FANBASE and As someone who think the character is underrated I fucking hate it
Enjoyment
This was awesome! You got Pinkie's voice down spot on Also....PINKIEDASHHHHHH!!!!