Princess Celestia had spent ALL DAY with these ponies, and had learned more than she had ever wanted too. I mean, they were great ponies and she was sure that they were loyal friends to Twilight. It was just that... well frankly, they were annoying. Take the white one with the purple mane for instance. All she does is WHINE! And Luna complained about her whining! Bah! This pony was all 'But it'll mess up my mane! I'll get dirty! I'll be ugly, and it'll be the Worst. Possible. Thing!' Then there was the Rainbow coloured one. All she did was talk about becoming a Wonderbolt and pranking ponies, and how awesome she was and the difference between coolness and awesomeness. Oh, and something about a pony named Daring Do. The other pegasus (the yellow one) was adorable, but she didn't talk much, and when she did it was in a shy tone that made you feel awkward. Really awkward. Er.... Moving onward, the hardest pony to understand was the pink one, and whenever Princess Celestia saw her she seemed to be bouncing up and down in some sort of trance that still allowed for an excessive amount of forward motion. Also... she could have sworn that that pony had disappeared at least twice.
Princess Celestia's eyes then rested on the orange pony trotting happily in front of her. This one was... perfect. No flaws at all, with the exception of her strange accent, but Princess Celestia could dismiss that. Nopony wants to be ruled by a princess that judges her subjects on their accents. The only real issue Celestia had ever had with her was that one time when she'd received a letter from her claiming she hadn't learned a single thing. I mean seriously? Who does that? These are reports on what you've learned, not what you haven't learned. Sheesh.
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After a while though, Princess Celestia began to tire of discovering what Twilight's friends weaknesses and strengths were. She was beginning to get bored of learning and experiencing what Twilight's life was like. So naturally, Celestia decided that it was about time to end her very important 'Learning Experience'.
"Uh, guys?" She began. "I have something to tell you," I can't believe how scientific Twilight sounds when she's talking! She's like one of those psychiatrist ponies who listen to all of your problems and then talk to you in this matter-of-fact tone that makes them sound like they're a first-grade teacher.
"What's wrong, sugarcube?"Applejack looked worriedly at Celestia. "Is the about that nightmare y'all had?"
"Are you not feeling well deary?" Rarity fluttered her eyelashes at Celestia. I'm not really sure what she's accomplishing by her excessive eyelid movement, but oh well.
Pinkie Pie (wherever she came from) rolled her eyes as if all the ponies were complete idiots. "She's going to tell us she really isn't Twilight Sparkle! Duh! I mean, I dunno what you guys are talking about, but whatever it is, it's just plain silly!"
"I don't really think that's quite right Pinkie," muttered Fluttershy.
"Actually," Princess Celestia began. "Pinkie Pie is quite right. I'm not Twilight Sparkle at all."
"Then what in tarnation are ya? An alien?" asked Applejack.
"Applejack! There are no such things as aliens and you know it," scolded Rarity.
"There are too such things as aliens! They're called humans!" Aaand... everypony just ignored Pinkie Pie.
Princess Celestia personally had no idea what Pinkie was talking about with the whole 'human' thing (It could potentially be dangerous) but at least the pink pony had enough common sense to understand that she wasn't really Twilight Sparkle.
"I am not an alien, nor am I a 'human'. I am actually Princess Celestia," she said matter-of-factly.
"Well duuuh," Pinkie Pie interrupted, "Tell us something we don't know!"
Everypony just ignored Pinkie again.
"Well if you are the Princess," began Rarity, "Then pray tell us, how do you intend on getting back to normal?"
Celestia smiled. "I intend on visiting Twilight Sparkle."
Two hours later, Celestia and her five crazy companions were on a train headed towards Canterlot. It had taken quite a long time to get ready, as all of Twilight's friends had many questions to ask such as 'How are we going to get past the guards to see Celestia?' and 'What is our way of transportation?'
Princess Celestia had answers for everything, of course. Answering her subjects problems had always been her top priority. Well... almost always. Their current plan was to head to Canterlot and ask one of the guards to send a message to 'The Princess' saying that 'Twilight Sparkle' had arrived. If Twilight was smart, she would be willing to let Celestia in. And if not, well... Twilight's body was still capable of casting quite a few magic spells, and Celestia wasn't afraid to use them.
The only problem with their plan so far was that it was taking AGES to get to Canterlot. She had been fine with just sitting around back in Ponyville, but now that these ponies had understood that they were in the presence of the Ruler of Equestria, they became less entertaining.
Princess Celestia stifled the urge to groan. Soooo boring! I wish I at least had Luna to talk to. All of a sudden there was a blur of pink, and a hyper looking Pinkie Pie was grinning wildly next to her.
"Somepony seems bored! Do you want me to sing you a song?" Without waiting for an answer, Pinkie Pie burst into an explosion of song. Seriously, it was complete with background music.
"When you're feeling bored or blue,
The world seems like it's against you, It's true!
But sometimes we need to stand up high,
And fly into that sunny blue sky.
Sometimes the world can fall apart,
But don't let that rip apart your heart,
Cause even though life can get you down,
It doesn't have to make you drown! Yeah!
When you're a little worried,
When you're a little disappointed,
When you can't seem to understand,
and when this world seems a little bland,
You just need to stand up high,
And look for that sun in that Bright, blue sky!"
Pinkie Pie looked over at the other ponies. "Isn't that right?"
"Uh, yeah, sure..." Nopony was really sure how to react. Pinkie Pie never really cared about the Princesses being higher up than she was, she still just did whatever she wanted too. "So remember Princess! Even though Twilight made a bad mistake, you still don't need to banish her to the moon!"
"I wasn't going to banish her to the moon!" Princess Celestia countered. "I'm sure that no harm was done."
"I wouldn't be so sure about that," said Pinkie. "I'm pretty sure Princess Luna told her quite a bit about you."
Princess Celestia's face turned an almost white shade of purple.
Applejack has been declared flawless.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Applejack_lolface.png
Hope Twilight and Luna like bananas.
Old joke is old.
Oh, these chapters go by so fast....
Applejack is best Element.
Feel like they accepted her being Celestia. too fast. Like if your best friend walks up to you & says hey im Obama
oh hell pinkie's breaking the forth wall.... CONTENTIOUSLY!
WE HAVE TO SEAL IT IT UP BEFORE THE MULTIVERSE COLLAPSES...AGAIN!
CURSE YOU PINKIE!
Ponies
And now Celestia has realized that twilight has been with Luna the conversation that both of them will be having is sure going to be awkward as hell.
1356689 first thing i'd shoot him then check to make sure he was telling the truth. other than that yes you are right they accepted too quickly.
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Again? How many... nevermind.
I don't think I want to know.
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1356622 I concur.
Oh dear luna you seem to be in quite the mite of trouble.
I'm so sorry Princess, I really never intended for this...
Don't worry Twilight, I'm not going to imprison you.
YOu're not!?
Nope! For you, straight to the moon *banish*
"I'm sure that no harm was done."
"I'm pretty sure Princess Luna told her quite a bit about you."
....
"... and if you look out to your right, you'll see the planet you once inhabited."
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Yeah, but.. it's Twilight. This probably doesn't even make the list of Top 10 Crazy Things That Have Happened This Year Involving Twilight Sparkle..
(I do agree. The pacing is very fast here and everyone very uncritically accepts what's happening. I rather like the headcanon that this is because so much weird stuff happens everyone's just blasé about it.)
Celestia should have figured this one out already -- it is Pinkie Pie that you have to send to the moon.
Applestia? That's a ship I haven't seen before.
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Also Pinkie Pie......I have nothing to say about her anymore....every fic I read she does something like this....so keep it up
this just keeps getting better and better!
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This story is extremely flawed...
...but it is sort of amusing and the grammar is good. I can look at it without needing to gouge out my eyes. I'll continue watching for now..
Yeah, this chapter calls for this:
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At any rate... Twilight and Luna have some 'splainin to do!
Cool story. Too bad for Twilight though '' It's to the moon for you FOREVER! '' Ha!
Yay, update!
Applejack is flawless.
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It's a Tuesday. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Twilight_future.png
Seeing as nopony has broken their wings, somepony had to have swapped bodies.
"I wouldn't be so sure about that," said Pinkie. "I'm pretty sure Princess Luna told her quite a bit about you."
This sentence makes me give a thumb up..
GJ!
1357215 I HAVE!!!
Also... she could have sworn that that pony had disappeared at least twice. *Would sound better as "the pony" or else "the mare" or even changing 'that pony' to "she".
Sorry if I'm being overanalytical, but look I like to overanalyze, sorry.
Also, good story, hope you wright more, just slow down the pace a bit.
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My first thought: Banana bag.
Second one: Oh, right. I did buy bananas.
Story:
Hm... seems short. Oh-sing along! Nice!
Oh Pinkie Pie... you and your plot devices...
oh, wait...
1356591 It's because she is best pony
1356743 o.o It's another Raptor? *peers at RaptorCat* @_@ *assists in fourth-wall-repair* Raptor and Raptor Repair Crew
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but .. but ...
Bannana is the Safety Word!
The only thing I find even the slightest bit of confusion with is this: Rarity was awfully quick in accepting that Princess Celestia was in Twilight's body. Granted, Pinkie Pie's pronouncements may have inured her to the revelation, but still... Honestly, that was the only thing that stuck out to me. Everything else was awesome, as always.
The fourth wall is Pinkie Pies bitch
In Quantum Physics, There's A Possibility that The Big Bang Was Caused By A Crash between Two Universe From Different Dimensions.
Now Think About dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Pinkie_Pie_lolface.png And Her Power To Break The Fourth Wall So Easily.
What If Uses her Full Power. To Collapse ours and theirs
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coming Soon, this December, 21st....
Applejack is flawless...
I mean all she ever talks about is apples and how to make apples into different apple products and shes always saying
"I sell apples and apple accessories"
AND I FRICKING LOVE APPLES!!!
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Well Twilight and Celestia are a little out of character for the sake of comedy too.
I think Twilight would have simply went to Ponyville and Celestia, being the ancient, caring and wise goddess who has lived for thousands of years and thus is probably pretty experienced with spells gone wrong and with magic in general, would have been understanding and would have simply reversed the spell.
But hey! Then we wouldnt have much of a story here would we? so who cares!
Physics? What are physics?
This fic is...well, I dont' know. There's nothing really BAD about it, but, somehow, it's not...welll, how do I put this.
Needs to be about 20% cooler.
Something just seems...lacking. The characterizations seem way off, especially with Celestia. I feel like I want to smack her. It's an interesting concept, and I gave it a few chapters, but so far I'm disappointed. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Twilight_Sparkle.png
1357408 I see your pic and raise you this
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humans are now aliens
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I would click the LIKE button if Fimfic had one.
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Knowing Twilight, this is a regular occurrence. And it was only Tuesday
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My favorite desert is Apple Pie
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You know I would be out of character too if I woke up one morning in twilight Sparkle's body. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/lolface_Celestia.png
...I'm not sure how the whole,” banishing to the moon” thing would work, since Celestia doesn't have the power to do that because she isn't linked to the Elements anymore. But I don't know how being in twilight's body would change that. Same goes for Twilight. also,i have to agree that the mane 5 were quick to accept. seems wierd.
Well that was torture, one massive cliffhanger. Twilight Sparkle is going banish Celestia to the moon? You're telling me that's going to work out well?
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Neat pic Babycakes.
Well so far I'm enjoying this story. We'll see how it goes. For the most part this isn't my typical cup of tea, especially how Celestia is being created for this, but that's just my own personal preference.
Otherwise I'm really enjoying this... as I said...
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Huh?
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I was saying, I like the pic, to the left of the text which is your comment.
Then i called you Babycakes.