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Non Uberis


These words were not written for you, but if they speak to you, they're yours to bear. (Patreon/Ko-Fi)

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Twilight Sparkle's years of study in the magic of friendship have finally culminated in her becoming an alicorn. Amidst the litany of changes that she is having to contend with in her life as a result of this, she comes to notice something alarming: no matter how hard she tries to limit herself, she is putting on weight at an alarming rate. It might have been an inevitability—considering how many ponies consider it in vogue to be overweight, she almost certainly would have followed suit sooner or later—but she remains uncertain of what it is that she truly wants. In her mind, she continues to be a mere scholar, not somepony worthy of the adoration that comes from so much bulk.

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Contains the following: fat and hyper, BBW/BHM, incrementally progressive weight gain, one (1) dream sequence of extreme weight gain and light slob and vore, blob sizes, mass compression, the usual emotional self-confidence rollercoaster, and surprisingly little overt sexual content for once.

Cover art by Dufel and myself. (DB ID 3073290)

Now translated into Spanish.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 13 )
ggg-2 #1 · Apr 6th, 2023 · · 1 · Day 47 ·

Don't really seeing the BHM side of things yet but keep it u[!

This is a good story, but I have one question. Are they ponies or humans? I'm seeing a decent amount of evidence showing both, which confuses me l. But other than that, it's pretty good

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There will be a few male characters but not for a few more chapters.

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They're anthro/anthropomorphic ponies (hence the "anthro" tag).

Thank both of ya tho!

Great start! Looking forward to more.

But why? Why would you do this?

Forty cakes? That’s as many as four tens!

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Must be a slow meeting for her if it’s only that

Great chapter. Luna is really well done here.

Having read more than a few of your works I have to say you do an absolutely phenomenal job of really capturing the sheer gravitas of what makes the weight and gaining there of as something to be enjoyed and indulged in. I don’t mean to make a pun out of any of that but just to comment that you really do capture what makes being so large something to both be concerned over as well as something to feel that mounting anticipatory joy about.

Another incredible story of yours that im glad to get to read, so thank you so much!

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Luna is probably one of my favorite characters to write so I'd like to think it shows in the quality of her characterization. Also dream world shenanigans are always fun to do.

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Thanks! I think that "gravitas" is a big thing I go for in any of these stories, examining the nature and implications of these fetishes is a large part of the appeal for me. Maybe to a fault this time, as I really wanted this story to put a lot into the societal worldbuilding and the behavioral necessities required to have a life like this, but I hope Twilight's arc was reasonable at least.

Once normal now Cadance enlarged to the point of needing magic to really grab anything in front of her. Almost feels like there is something more to explore there

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