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Bolbrony
I am from Bolivia and I like read this fanficitions and I know enough english to understand the fics.
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Who's the blue mare with the the red hair? She is clearly the "devil side on your shoulder". 😏
fuck this chapter it was exciting
now there is a new enigma being that curse of the banished and i am curious to see if shiny will receive more karma in the future
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Is Lydia, the mare that betrayed him
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"Betrayed" him!? Damn, I have to read the previous story fully?
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if you want, but ironically in the previous one it was more in the background, now in this one it will have more presence
Is shining not going to be charged with attempted murder. Are they LETTING him get away with it.
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I see two possible karma that candice's son belongs to vic or that vic ends up fucking twilight
I can only say that things got pretty intense sooner than I imagined.
at least blue blood will go to jail even if he had left him in the stallion so that if he feels the terror.
Luna fucked up unbelievably.
Lydia has received a face-to-face course on life in prison.
and well we already know the origin of the exiles
In short, this is better than any showbiz drama I've ever seen.
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And then shining tries to offs cadence and vic's kid or attempts at kill him again.
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It is somewhat probable, although seeing what was discovered, Cadence is going to be furious with Shining and since what we will see next was inserted, there may be a solution.
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Don't doubt that Cadence is going to be furious with him... rather, that's going to trigger a lot of things...
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You'll see why Blueblood wanted the tartar before being with the mares in prison, hehe. and thank you, in dramas I specialize quite a lot.
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It's royalty....and they wanted this not to come to light, but, about the magazine and that everything is known....I think that the last thing the already weak public image of royalty needs is that its prince wanted to kill the one who mounted his wife.
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Eh, on the one hand your right. But on the other letting him go will only embolden his behaviour. And will hurt the royal image more if he isn't tried.
But you are the writer here. Not I so you do you.
Damn Gina was strong I hope that in the future she can have a happy ending and god lydia pregnant this really got intense now it remains to be seen how the hell they are going to get out of that magical alcatraz
The sunbeam thing, at least for him, if things went well, now that Starlight has seen the magazine, there's a chance she'll geld him if he ever looks at other mares unless she gives him permission to do so and for some reason i feel like she will be the boss in the relationship
From Shining, the cadence is too pious and at least shiny is man enough to admit that he screwed up but I still hope that karma gives him a well-deserved punishment
Heck, zebras don't mince words.
And seeing Twilight's reaction, I intuit two things that Flash surely no longer has a chance with her and when she sees Vic, she will surely want to kill him first and then she will want to rape him.
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Gina wrote it to be the strong one with a heart of gold. Lidya will learn to redeem herself if her innate stupidity doesn't stop her. Starlight will surely be the dominant one in public, but she will surely be super submissive in private, hehe. Cadence is in a sea of emotions that she doesn't understand and Shining is lucky to keep her balls as she deals with those feelings. Poor Flash will be lucky if he can ever show his face to a mare and surely he won't have sex with anyone for years, but the reputation that he established by fucking all the princesses will not be taken from him by anyone. And how will I use Twilight... hehe, let it be a surprise.
You need an editor man
Well, with this information from Gina, Zic better have something on hand so he doesn't end up like the griffon's ex.
yes, you had a horrible fate planned for blueblood.
With which Zic wants to go home, I have a feeling that the welcome will be quite "traditional"
and they are already showing the symptoms of the curse
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Is it so bad?
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I'm sure doing it standing up or facing her will be off the table when Vic is going to have sex with her, hehe. and Vic Zee will still have several temptations, and we'll see if she falls for them or manages to remain a good pony.
wow this was a crazy chapter
well the babies are born and hell with the alicorn genetics, cadence is pregnant with 3 stallions at the same time and well celestia who would say that at least one less baby is on the list of alimony
what a gallus thing that I did not expect and gives a valid reason to go to ponyville
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What can I say?. I like my stories to have that touch of madness but have logic within that little world, hehe. And the thing about having babies from 3 stallions... well, it's more than anything because of the potions, that with each bottle she drank of the pink potion, she released an egg ready to be fertilized. And Gallus has always been thinking, after all, I like to think about everything in the long term.
the story continues to maintain its quality
this was a moment full of "coincidences"
hell now chrysalis is joining this party and this just reminded me of something
SPIKE IF YOU REALLY LOVE RARITY FOR WHATEVER MOST YOU WANT, GET HER OUT OF PONYVILLE BEFORE SHE MEETS VIC
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small spoiler, Spike will not be able to stop what is inevitable, hehe.
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too bad for him, the good side smolder can comfort him
damn what a plot twist
at least red heart's "betrayal" was resolved.
so there was more context in that order who would say it and it seems that vic is slowly becoming the solomon of the zebras.
for some reason that of being mercenaries reminded me of the Dahomey amazons with which chrysalis already had a history with these zebras, also that these zebras are op.
and one question you already mentioned to me that twilight and rarity will end up meeting vic (I feel bad for spike but the good side still has a chance with girls like smolder, gabby and sweetie belle (I don't mention ember because two things 1 because I like shipping ember/thorax and 2 for one part of me wants Vic to fuck her) I have this question which manes are single and if so what would be the probability of ending up brandishing vic's Excalibur.
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In fact, he is going to meet them later, in one of the craziest parts of my fanfic, hehe, but yes, the mane six, if any of them were virgins, soon he is going to take their virginity, hehe
Well, Vic is going to have a hard time escaping from that place and now I have this doubt that it was sunset, well, since this is set years in the future, maybe she will pay a visit?
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He's going to enter Fallout charisma mode to escape from there, hehe, but with Sunset...I don't think so, it's going to see a lot of characters in this story and although I like Sunset, I don't like EG that much.
well there are 4 zebras and now there is only 1 left, wow vic knows how to think big
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He has it big, it is obvious that he would always think big.
Jejejej
Shouldn’t there be a space between sex and wild?
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Yes, I must have missed it in the translation.
Looks like Cadence's dark side is surfacing.
Never mess with a mother or her children.
Cadence's dark side has finally surfaced.
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yes, they finally broke Cadence.
well I feel happy that Kari-sha will be able to have a redemption regarding Zic, well there is how much she will keep her sanity and now I don't remember if I said it in the past but I wonder what Chrysalis is doing in the dungeon
This is going to get very ugly and Zinc has really tamed the matriarchs of the council
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she's coming back for the grand finale, hehe
Amazing chapter!!!
I wonder if Nightmare Cadance created that spell to ironically punish those who "accused" and "bothered" her?
Perhaps Cadance would have "grown" more because of the essence of Nightmare or because of the lust and "love" of the environment?
If Cadance manages to catch Vic-Zee, does she want to punish him with Snu Snu? (I mean, the atmosphere would indicate it that way, plus surely Cadance wants to "crush" him in what he is the best)
And let's not forget Chrysalis, who better to help them stop a mare releasing "love" and lust? XD
Although it will obviously be risky, let's at least hope that they reach the Crystal Empire without much problem.
Waiting for the next chapter!!!!!
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Thank you very much for commenting, unfortunately I can't answer you or it would be a spoiler, hehe, just saying that it will be crazy and there will be a lot, a lot of sex.
What a bumpy ride, isn't it?
Reviewing: the thing about changelings and false love is a curious argument, really.
Due to the effects of the field of lust, what a surprise it seems that the little bookworm has put into practice what she has seen in "specialized" books on the subject.
As for the communist, it doesn't surprise me, I say that she is a dictator of a communist town abandoned by the gods. It wouldn't be strange if those things happened
About the orgy, well, my condolences to the studs who try to flirt with the 5 Manes after this experience.
As for Twilight, it looks like Shining will have another strong karma docis sooner rather than later and Starlight, considering Lidya was in that orgy with Sunbert, it would be fun and poetic for Star to do it with Vic, it would technically be even for both of them.
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hehe, it was a fun trip though, but answering in order:
-YES, I really like changelings, and that's why I thought that even their love consumption system had to have rules to work correctly.
-And about Starlight and Twilight, well, remember that Twilight almost wanted to burn Sunburst's dick when she found out what happened in the castle, but Starlight surely intervened and one thing led to another and everything was resolved in a threesome.
-Yes, hehe, the mane six definitely stopped being virgins.
-You'll see what happens with Shining...it's going to be crazy, although I'm not going to give spoilers.
Anyway, thanks for commenting.
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So that happened and I have a feeling that it wasn't a one-shot thing and this will explain what Sunburst did when he helps Trixie and Starlight with their show. The truth is, this has the potential for a one shot or spint off.
Outside of that, who would say? Sunburst beat flash and zic (for the moment) in sleeping with the 4 princesses that nerd fills me with pride
and two things:
1 for some reason while reading this I thought of Shadow Tempest. I wonder what she was doing in this world.
2 touching on the sexual theme of a version of spiderman mia, an alternative idea that occurred to me to not always make the three-legged joke was because using stimulus manipulation increased the ladies' pleasure receptors in addition to influencing their subconscious to make them feel more pleasure, this idea can help you whether with oc or not, for example, here the banished have that gift to have an advantage against naturally more gifted creatures, for example, a medium dragon.
Another alternative madness was a tantric aura being something that allows the individual to be adjusted so that they do not die from snu snu in addition to giving them intuitive knowledge to know where to touch this can be applied to banished or changelings since tantric energy would make sense with the concept of that race
and yes I was a little horny that day when I thought about it
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1. You know, I didn't think about her either, hehe.
2. They are good ideas, but remember that the banished, their sperm is a quite powerful aphrodisiac, in addition to having 100% fertility, the sperm stimulates the ovaries of the mares to advance their ovulation and if they are already ovulating, it will cause there to be more eggs to impregnate, making a creampie from a Banished a guaranteed pregnancy.
And adding more things would be too much.
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As for the exiles, don't worry, I used them as an example. It is not necessary to use them in this story. In the stories that perhaps this idea is useful to you, are to name an example:
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/398053/three-ways
being something like a quality that distinguishes unicorns in the sexual sphere from pegasi and earth ponies.
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Thanks for the advice