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The map called Twilight and her friends for the first time, altogether. The 6 of them journey out to this never before heard of place, brimming with magic. Once there, they discover just why the place is so magical. It's the home of an alicorn, lost to time and seemingly forgotten about. An alicorn that seems to be abled to perform the most powerful magic with ease and hasn't a clue about the very basics of friendship. Together, they try to reintroduce the pony into society.
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This won't end well of course. Never does
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You have my attention.
I'm intrigued I only hope that in the end that Starlight dose not get banished or tuned to stone. Keep up the great work look forward to next chapter.
Hmm...well this is interesting. I wonder how Starlight got to be so much older than Twi. After all, in the series they are roughly the same age, give a year or two. Is it a Starlight from the future, returning to the past? Or a different pony entirely?
Either way, I am intrigued and interested to see what comes next.
this is looking really interesting!
It has a strong start to it. Very descriptive without going overboard, nice use of the characters and how they would act, and a mysterious place with a shocking first encounter. I look forward to the next chapter to see how things will unfold.
im willing to see more of this!
Hello thanks for the update. What a chapter I'm more curious about why Starlight has been in some kind of exile. I wonder if she has done something wrong the possibilities are endless as to why she is here. I wonder what kind of trial Starlight has got planned for them? I hope we don't have to wait long for the next instalment keep up the great work.
Self imposed exile? Or done because everyone else left, and as their magic developed nobody ever came back? How interesting. I look forward to more and how things will develop from here.
Thanks for the update I was getting worried. I wonder what Princess Celestia and Luna know about Starlight Glimmer? Also I wonder what Starlight is the Princess of I.m very curious to know. I also hope in the next chapter we can find out how Stralight becoame an Alicorn and why she was in exile. I hope we won't have to wait too long for the next chapter to be posted. Keep up the great work looking forward to the next instalment because I need to know more as I'm hooked
I hope we learn why starlight thinks that alicorns aren't welcomed. Looks like news travels really fast considering they just got to poynville and now they have meet the princesses.
That picture of starlight looks like it was taken from an episode of courage the cowardly dog.
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Well, it was intended to be slightly unnerving so I'll take that as a confirmation I succeeded lol
Hum this story is a real gem I'm really interested.
Thanks for the update. It's getting very interesting it looks look like we are in for a flash back in the next chapter can't wait to see what happen to Starlight's village and if this is how she became an Alicorn trying to save it. Keep up the great work I hope we won't have to wait long for the next chapter keep up the great work.
Whoa wasn't expecting that. I thought maybe stupid people blame her for something like not being able to do something when they were in trouble but nightmare moon destroying the village.
I hope the next part arrives sooner.
Hum well that's interesting I wonder where this is going.
Ah, well, I hope you'll be able to return to this story some day! It sure as heck got me hooked!
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