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CalmBreezes


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An attack on Equestria leaves Applejack as the last remaining Guardian of Harmony as all her friends and the four Princesses vanish. The world is broken, Equestria is without a leader, and a threat rises far away across the seas. Applejack alone must save Equestria and her friends, no matter the cost.

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Comments ( 19 )

... Equestria is doomed. AJ is better than Rainbow for sure. But still. Should be fun either way.

This is an intriguing start.

If anyone of the mane 6 is gonna be dropped in an "end of the world" situation, AJ is definitely my first pick. Twilight, Rarity and Fluttershy would over-worry, while Rainbow and Pinkie have the opposite problem. AJ is the most likely to keep her head, i think.

Applejack's head was starting to hurt again. When it rains it really does pour until the proverbial river bank crumbles and your entire farm is swept away. "The problems just keep piling up."

This summarizes the situation quite well.

Boosting the Appul fic.
It's a neat little thing you got going on. :ajsmug:

This has been a good read so far. It's engaging.

I’m glad to see this continuing with such regularity.

This is getting good. I also really, really hope there are consquences for all of this.

I kind of hope The other's don't come back because the consquences for all of this are really spicy.

Or...if they do come back let them also be changed and keep magic gone! The amount spice it would generate...I mean would the princesses be immortal? still?

"Yeah yeah, Applejack. She's supposed to be the element of honesty."

"No no, she's the element of loyalty. Rainbow Dash is the honest one."

Kek. This got a good laugh out of me. Be careful, there were a lot of typos in this chapter (the-s instead of she-s, words outright missing, etc.) It didn't hamper my enjoyment that much, but there were one or two times where I had to think what you really meant. Excited to see the next chapter.

Comment posted by CalmBreezes deleted Jul 26th, 2023

And so the Equestrian Industrial Revolution starts.

What an ominous way to end this chapter.

Four aircraft carriers? This should be interesting.

He rested her cheek on her hoof

She

The second locks a magic word lock

second lock's a
Pretty good going only having so few typos so far.

Okay, I've read the rest of the chapter. Damnit. Couldn't be so easy.

Fancy Pants through for a second, and then clapped his hoof on the ground.

thought?

How in blazes we're we supposed

were

I’m excited to see what happens next.

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