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After Celestia and Luna defeated Sombra in the Crystal Empire their relationship took a turn for the worse. Celestia had suddenly become cold and distant from her sister. As Luna sought out a solution to the issue she stumbled upon a disturbing prophecy. A destined confrontation between the two is unavoidable. Inspired by Prince Whateverer's song "Ghost in the Sun".
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Thanks for the comment! More definitely coming!
Amazing story, a few typos but still a great read.
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Thanks for the comment! If you can let me know the typos I'll definitely fix them. I have trouble seeing so I miss them sometimes as I do this all on my phone.
Wow! I thought this was gonna be a simple role reversal fic and I was already pitying Celestia that she'll once again suffer a villainizing. Boy, was I wrong! You actually did that to Starswirl! And the whole thing about him being Sombra was an interesting twist. You didn't hold back in making him vicious. And in the end it was still poor Luna taking a long vacation on the moon. Really didn't see that coming.
This was a very well done one shot! Well done!
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Thanks for the comment! Yeah I had a lot of fun with this one. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
An interesting take on the whole banishment idea. Good work, author.
Blessings!
-Davidtin
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Again, thanks. I appreciate it!