Consciousness slowly returns to you gradually in small doses. Your head rolls to the side and you feel a soft pillow lying underneath it. Your eyes open a small fraction and yet you still see only darkness. Confused, you open them even further. You can see small patches of light seeping through something that seemed to be blocking your vision. Were you blindfolded?
You hear the clopping sound of hooves on tile, accompanied by voices. The first voice sounded distinctly masculine.
“It’s not good Miss Sparkle,” says the voice. You want to speak out, but you’re still so tired. You take a calm breath before your eyes close once again.
“Please, just give it to me straight doctor,” Twilights voice is the last thing you hear before you fall back into a dreamless sleep.
When you’re roused from unconsciousness for the second time you hear a number of different voices in mid conversation.
“Ah just can’t believe she’d do somethin’ so reckless!” That voice and familiar country twang belongs to Applejack. She sounds quite angry. From experience you know that an angry Applejack is a scary Applejack.
“I agree darling, but you know I think it just goes to show that this whole ‘pranking’ thing has outstayed it’s welcome! I mean we’re all full grown mares! I think it’s time to put such foalish behavior behind us!” That was Rarity’s voice.
“I…I just can’t believe something like this would h-happen…I mean the number one rule when it comes to pranking is, nopony gets hurt….” That was Pinkies voice, which stands out to you the most. Even in dire times Pinkie Pie is usually able to maintain a cheerful and optimistic demeanor. But with what you just heard, she sounds like a completely different pony. Her voice was so shaky and melancholy that if you didn’t recognize the voice as being hers, you would have thought it had come from a completely different pony. They all sound so sad and upset. Why though? You feel as though it has something to do with you. Where are you right now?
You open your eyes fully and see that you’re staring through some sort of cloth. You try to raise your hand to your face to remove it, but when nothing happens you let out a groan.
“-elp,” you try to ask for help but it comes out a laborious gasp.
“I think he’s awake!” You hear Twilight say. “Applejack, can you go get the doctor?”
“Sure thing Twi,” you hear the farm pony reply as she leaves the room. You hear the sound of multiple sets of hooves approaching you.
“Anon, are you awake?” Questions Twilight.
“Y-yeah,” you reply softly. “I can’t…see…anything…where am I?” you gasp out.
“Oh, you’re in the hospital darling,” says Rarity.
“Yes, and the doctors put bandages over your eyes. We have to leave them there for the time being,” explains Twilight.
“W-why…what…hap-pened?” There’s a moment of uncomfortable silence as you wait for a reply.
“There was…an, there….there was an accident Anon.” A spark of panic shoots through your veins. Twilight sounds so broken. Something terrible has happened, but it happened to YOU. It’s clearly serious as you’ve never seen any of your Ponyville friends sound this sorrowful before.
“Accident?” You manage to get out. “With…me-e?”
“That’s right.…”
“H…how bad?” You wait for a response and receive none for several moments.
“I think that’s it’s best if the doctor explains it to you.” You breath openly through your mouth. You don’t like this, not at all. You try to remember what had led up to this moment. You were in an accident, that you’ve been told. But what happened? You can only recall bits and pieces of lying on the ground, and being found.
“H-w, how long ago?” It’s the most you can get out.
“Y-you’ve been in a coma for almost a week,” explained Twilight.
A week? You’ve been lying on your ass for a week? You obviously have bigger issues at the moment, but you’ve never felt as lazy as you do right now. So much time wasted. But that’s just you. You obviously needed time to recover but you hate wasting time and lazing about. You wonder to yourself when you’ll be able to get back to your normal routine.
Before you can ask anymore questions, you hear two sets of hooves entering the room.
“Ah, I see Mr. Anonymous is awake,” states a masculine voice. You recognize it from earlier from when you were barely conscious. You hear him approach you. “How are you feeling?” He asks.
“Th-thirsty,” you reply.
“Ah, of course, let me,” he is interrupted by Rarity.
“Oh please, allow me!” You hear the sound of magic being used, and your pillow being elevated enough to crane your head. You feel a cool glass being placed to you lips and water pours down you throat. You gulp it down before letting out a refreshed sigh.
“T-thanks,” you say as you are lowered back into a full lying position.
“Oh course, think nothing of it dear.” The doctor then speaks again.
“So, Mr. Anonymous, other than that how are you feeling. Are you in any pain?”
“N…no I…I-I…I don’t….I-I can’t…feel…an-an-any….anything,” you struggle to get out. You hear a few sniffles, and if you listen closely you think you can hear the soft sound of Pinkie crying. “I…I can’t…move….” You hear a few sad gasps.
“Yes, well um…uh first things first,” he says and you can hear the sparkly sound of magic being used. You can feel whatever was covering your eyes being gently removed. When the masking is peeled away, your eyes are overwhelmed by the fluorescent lights above. You reel away with your eyes closed.
“Ah yes, sorry about that,” the doctor apologizes. “Give your eyes a second to adjust.” You do just that, gradually separating your eyelids to let in small portions of light. Eventually you are able to open them all the way, allowing you to stare up towards the ceiling. You attempt to crane your neck in order to make out the ponies in the room.
“Let me help with that,” says the doctor as he uses his magic to hit a button near your bed, causing it to recline upward, raising you into a sitting position. Now finally, you can see all those present in the room. But something was wrong. You were having a horrible case of double vision. Everywhere you looked there where two of everything, with objects overlapping each other. You look at Twilight and see Rarity occupying the same space as her, with them both also being completely separate.
Your eyes felt both relaxed and strained at the same time. Turning your head was nauseating. But though your vision was now split, you were able to focus one at a time on the individuals in the room enough to make out their expressions.
There was the doctor, a brown unicorn stallion with an auburn mane and a pair of glasses wresting on his muzzle. Then there was Twilight, Rarity, Applejack and Pinkie Pie. Despite you having just woken up, none of them seemed particularly happy to see you. They all have looks on their faces ranging from anxious to downright miserable.
Twilight and Applejack look the most put together, Twilight giving you a look of worry, while Applejack looked at you with…pity.
You didn’t like that look, you don’t like being pitied.
Rarity was trying to keep a brave face, but you could tell her mask was slipping. And Pinkie…Jesus, she looked the worst of all. You have never seen her this way before. Her bright pink colors were dulled and darkened, her mane and tail were hanging strait down. She looks like she’s just recovered from a bout of crying.
“Now, I’d like to run a quick test with you Anon, if that’s alright,” said the doctor as he used his magic to raise up a small spoon shaped object.
“S-sure,” you reply. The stallion uses his magic and places the testing device a few feet from your face.
“I want you to try to focus your eyes on this right here.”
“O-okay.” You try to align your eyes to focus on one single spot. Though you are able to catch the object in both of your eyes, you are unable to merge the two sets of images into one.
“My…ever-everything is double,” you say. “My eyes…I can’t….”
“I was afraid of that. You’re eyes are experiencing some misalignment from the accident. I want you to follow the paddle as best you can, alright?”
“…kay.” The doctor raises the testing device upwards. You are able to follow it, and then when he lowers it, your eyes still manage to trace its movement. Up, down, left and right. Though you are able to follow the movement accordingly, your eyes remain unaligned and independent of each other.
“Well your eyes still work independently, but the rectus muscles in your right eye have been severely weakened,” said the doctor as he put the testing paddle away. “But fortunately that is something we can work to correct at a later date.”
With the test complete, you let out a shuddering breath and wait for the doctor to tell you what happened to you.
“Well Anon, I think it’s about time we told you what was going on.” You can see the other ponies in the room tense.
“I am not sure how much you remember, but well…you were struck by a bolt of lightning.” Your eyes go wide, and you let out a weak gasp. “You were brought here by Twilight Sparkle, and you were rushed into the emergency room.”
You remember a bright flash of white. Pony faces were looking at you in alarm. Twilight was one of them. She looked so afraid. And why wouldn’t she be, you were struck by lightning after all. But you survived. Perhaps that was a feat to be proud of. But no one back on Earth ever just shrugged off a lightning strike, if they survived at all. But how did this happen? It wasn’t storming out. In fact, you remember the skies being clear as day.
“How…am I…how bad?” You struggle to ask through heavy breaths. The doctor opens his mouth for a brief moment and then exchanges a look with Twilight. Judging by her expression she knows the diagnosis and they are wordlessly deciding who should break the news to you.
“I-I can tell him,” concedes Twilight, who steps up closer to your bed. She looks you in the eye with a solemn expression.
“I’m so sorry Anon, but the damage was severe. A few of the nerves in your spinal column were overloaded and damaged to the point that they are no longer functional.”
You jerk as much as you are physically able to, with your eyes wide as can be.
“I’m sorry Anon, we did all we could,” said the doctor as he stepped up. “But you’ve been paralyzed from the neck down. There might be something we could attempt down the line but as it stands the damage seems to be indefinite.”
“I…I’m paralyzed?” It all hits you hard. Your head is dizzy and on fire, your breathing is erratic. You can feel tears start to flow down your face as the world around you stops turning. Pinkie Pie embraces you in a comforting hug, which is joined by Rarity and Applejack. Twilight remains near the Doctor, staring down at her hooves, forlorn. The doctor appears to be trying to explain something, but you can’t hear him. All you can focus on is the new reality that has been forced upon you.
‘How did this happen? What are the odds of being struck by lightning?’
“Para-al-al…alyze….ed,” you manage to get out. You aren’t sure who’s crying more, Pinkie Pie, Rarity or yourself. You think they’re offering their condolences but you can’t hear them. The world has separated itself from you and all you can focus on is this moment. But then you remember something. Another face staring down at you as you lay on the ground.
“W-where…is…Ra-rainbow…Dash?"
(... Two things, one, your author's note comment made me smile and chuckle.
And second, for the rest of the story? The opposite... the worst case scenario, of course, would be death. But dang... this is bad to. Poor Anon... I can only hope that, well, SOMETHING happens to make it better, but... well... the tragedy tag is there, I presume for a reason... again. Dang...)
From the neck down. God that is horrifying. Imgaine just being in a prison of your own body. And, what Rainbow couldn’t stand to see what she did? Typical.
Straight
overstayed its welcome
Was Pinkie's voice
Never heard any of
Would add more but don't want to be overly critical. Nice addition so far. Also wow, an entire week. I can only imagine how everyone felt during that time..
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Overstay and Outstay are the same thing, some people just say one over the other.
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Either that or the other girls do not want to be in the same room as her, or they want her to stay away from Anon for the time being.
Rainbow is going be figuratively dead.
I don't know if I could stand to live paralyzed from the neck down. It seems like it's one of the most awful things that could happen to you. Something that not only ends all semblance of your old life, but removes all aspects of your ability to care for yourself. You can't even end it if you want to without asking someone else.
One thing I will say, I'm glad Anon seems to have some pretty great friends around him who clearly care about him.
Just ask for euthanasia at that point, Jesus Christ...
Just cover him with clay and make him a self guiding Golem
where fluttershy?
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You could bite off your tongue. It might take a couple of tries, and it will hurt. But it's not any different from slitting your risk. That's only if you really cannot stand living like that. I just had a dark thought. What if he asks Rainbow to do it?
Oooff! The neck down.
No mention of Flutters so my guess is she's probably with Dash, either trying to reassure her that she isn't a monster, trying to coax her into seeing Anon, or she's making sure Dash doesn't do anything drastic.
♫ Hold my breath as I wish for death ♫
♫ Oh please God help me ♫
Were gonna need some cybernetic augmentations up in this bitch.
This is the best way I can possibly sum up reactions to this chapter:
Well that's gonna take a lot of fixing, but hey, his senses are largely intact aside from the lazy eye, that's something.
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Thank you for the info, I didn't realize outstay was an actual word.
Jeez talk about a tough spot to be in, will Anon want Euthanasia? Do the equestrians know what that means? I mean can't blame him if he wants it. I wonder how they would react, if he request it.
Ouch! Paralyzed from the neck down? Talking about the worst that could have happened. If he was from the waist down he would still have a pass, but that is already the worst that could happen. Although I don't know who is going to be worse, Anon or Dash? As nice as Anon is, I highly doubt she'll forgive the cyan pegasus after this.
Let's cross our fingers that it is the rare case that it can be cured; and that Dash be the one to take care of him until she recovers.
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If it came to that, he could simply be turned to stone until a cure can be developed.
Plus the 2021 Annual comic had a diamond dog doing unicorn-style magic with some kind of wizard staff, which made me wonder if it could work for other species. With the tech level in Equestria, that's pretty much the only thing I can think of that would allow someone in that condition to have a not-horrible quality of life.
Well, that's bad. Maybe he could get some magical augmentations, but that may be a bit ahead of Equestria. Ouch.
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Even though they are officially canon those season 10 comics are mostly recognized as hot garbage and ignored by most due to the writing and Discord being the super douche behind everything again and once again being let off without any real consequence to him.
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Well, Cozy Glow also sprouted a horn after absorbing magic from Grogar's bell. So the show also has some precedent for artificially granting magical abilities.
I think only elements of harmony could
Heal thus severe damage
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Wow. That would be a turn.
Rainbow’s final act of friendship would be to end his state of life, which is the way it is because of her.
Well they were WRONG, this story is amazing and I can't wait to see more of it.
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....
All that I see
Absolute horror
I cannot live
I cannot die
Trapped in myself
Body my holding cell
.....
Has Taken my arms
Taken my legs
Taken my soul
Left me with life in Hell
"One" Metallica
So how is Rainbow going to get out of it? She ruined his life, her life, her friends' lives. Let him finish what he started. Taking care of the living dead is hell for him and her...
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Yeah that sound absolutly terrifying. Don't know for how long I would last, before I would be begging for a bullet.
Honestly.... If I was in RD's position, I would not feel that I deserved to be in their presence, if I just accidentially severly injured one of friends.
I would assume they would not want to even see me, much less want to hear what I have to say.
I would wait till they call upon me and I would drop whatever I am doing to heed the call.
I would also be scared as hell from not knowing for certain how bad my friends state would be.
I know this is the reaction I would have because of a situation I was in.
Story time...
I was the driver in a car accident where I struck a teen on a bike (who was in the middle of the road) while doing somewhere between 60-65 km/h (36-40 mph) in a 80 zone (50 mph) on a winding paved countryroad.
The response to the accident was 6 police cars, 3 ambulances and an ambulance helicopter.
I was
scaredterrified for what I did to the kid.Apperantly the police who talked to me told me 2 hours in my statement / decompresion talk that their colleges could not do it any better than I did in that situation, when they tried to re-creat it.
I did not calm down untill they contacted me later that evening that the teen only suffered some minor scuffs and a mild concussion.
It was after this that I started worrying what legal repurcations there would be.
In the end what happened was that due to all of the statements, I would get no repurcations because the kid was in a place he should not be and I did what I could do to evade it.
But my bet is that she is either on (self-imposed?) house arrest or in Ponyville jail, while feeling lower than dirt.
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could be worse some people can get paralysed and only have eye movement left, sometimes not even that, their brain is still working, they are fully aware but they cant move anything.
"Rainbow Dash, your life is over."
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Seen is used to refer to more than just physically seeing. It's also commonly used to
(and by one of it's definitions) refer to simply being aware of something (usually in person) so long as ones own senses perceive it even if by other means such as touch or sound.
This can, in fact, happen. It's called a "bolt from the blue".
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Thanks!
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You learn something new every day. Thank you.
I wonder if Rainbow's gonna get charged by that
Hmm the biggest issue is always that… Discord exists… and he CAN solve practically anything.
Neck down?! Wow just imagine how mentally stressful that is. The panic and fear he must be feeling at that moment.
Waking up finding out you were in a coma and you are paralyzed from the neck down. Dashie really messed up big time
Yikes. That is WAY worse than I thought.
Good job word-smith!
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I like to think that Discord couldn't fix something as delicate as this. He's powerful, sure, but he also exclusively uses chaos magic, which I would imagine is anything but delicate. Assuming Magic even COULD heal him, I feel like something as severe as a spinal injury like this would only be able to be healed with magic wielded by an extremely competent and powerful magic user, who also uses it with major surgical precision and has the medical knowledge necessary, which I think Discord, as powerful as he is, lacks.
Of course, it's also MLP we're talking about here, where the canon changes like the weather and Discord is interpreted wildly differently from person to person. I just think there's a few good reasons why he couldn't just fix it, and it'll be a hundred times more interesting that way.
Can a lightning strike paralyze a person from the neck down?
Not trying to question the drama of the story. I'm just curious.
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I had always assumed that there was a logical reason that neither Scootaloo nor Tempest ever bothered to ask him for a cure. Plus if healing spells were a thing, then the plot of "Read it and Weep" couldn't have happened.
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Reminds me of another story: As the Spring Bloom Withers
Basically, it re-jiggers the events of the episode "The Cart Before the Ponies": Apple Bloom becoming paraplegic as a result of the accident because Applejack wouldn't let her install a seatbelt (as it wasn't part of the traditional design she wanted). After several chapters of Apple Bloom struggling to cope with the effects of her sister's criminal negligence, Twilight pleads with her not to write off AJ as dead to her. Yet Twilight's arguments there amounted to little more than "But she's your family!", with no promise to do anything to address Apple Bloom's quality of life concerns. By any rational standard, the proper response there would have been "Either change your job title from 'Princess of Friendship' to 'Princess of Neuroscience', or start looking for another Element of Honesty!"
I want RD in jail.
hope they will just euthanized him and done with it if they can heal him. so that the healthcare resources can be use on someone that can give back to society.
I've got to wonder. Will he be mad? Probably. Will he fully blame RD? Perhaps. But I don't think it will be some over-the-top style hate anger, maybe a quiet disappointment. I do want to see how he goes forward (SPOILER: not with his legs).
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Thank you good sir!
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You addressing that to me or RD? She deserves to be de winged and in jail.
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RD.
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Kill RD, she removed a useful citizen.