Wow, that was very emotional.

One of the reasons why Spike should be included since he’s one of the favorite characters most bronies love.

Twilight should’ve been grounded for a week, but I’m guessing that’d be kinda harsh.

I feel bad for spike. Like, really bad.

I am interested to see how things go. And for what he discovers when he leaves

KO awesome new story, Spike sure is going through a lot of one with any powers and always felt under to Twilight and the others though that may not be the case for long. Also hope you’ll add the Dazzlings, Celestia and Luna, and Moonlight Raven to the harem!

Truly a very interesting first chapter, I have a feeling that this is going to be a good story. I'll leave in your hands Wildcard, I will track this story very near cause the plot is interesting and many situations and things can appear on this scenario. Let the fun start hahahahahaha

It hits different I want to know more

And so it begins!

She picked up the bracelet she made for Spike and knew this would only remind him of how she let him down.

But, on a flip note, it will also remind Spike how much she thinks of him.

Outside the room stood Twilight who had been listening in on what her mom and brother were talking about felt more guilty than ever. No matter how she came off, she never intended to make Spike feel so inferior to her. She knew if she wanted to make it up to Spike now, she'd really have to think hard on it.

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Got that right

Not sure why I'm getting My Hero Academia vibes from this, but that's a plus in my book!

Nice Homeward Bound reference by the way.

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I'm on the same boat as you, thinking that this is inspired by Izuku/Deku's stories of MHA.

Oh dear. Looks like Spike's never gonna speak to Twilight again. Was this based on a show or did you make it up?

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If it wasn't for the title I would have thought this was a midoria somehow gets teleported to Equestria as a child just from looking at the picture

Wow, what a brutal start, this is definitely the story of yours that has hooked me the most from the beginning, everything is masterfully written, I couldn't express everything I feel in a single comment.

“Don't act like you don't know. You always find a way to leave me out of going anywhere with you, especially places for fun and relaxation. But this one time I was actually invited by someone else, but you couldn't even commit that to your memory that seems to have so much room for all your book facts and studies?! Now I'm never gonna get a chance like this again. It's your fault! IT'S ALL YOUR FAULT!” Spike threw down the bracelet Twilight made him and stormed off.

“Well, until you do I suggest you think extra hard on it.” Velvet said, as she and Night Light left the living room leaving Twilight to herself ridden with guilt. She picked up the bracelet she made for Spike and knew this would only remind him of how she let him down.

Outside the room stood Twilight who had been listening in on what her mom and brother were talking about felt more guilty than ever. No matter how she came off, she never intended to make Spike feel so inferior to her. She knew if she wanted to make it up to Spike now, she'd really have to think hard on it.

Seriously, Twi is going to need to do something extremely suitable for Spike to make up for everything.

I think Celestia needs to find out what her student forgot, it would be fun to read her reaction.

Seriously, even I felt Spike's sadness and anger, it would be great if in the next chapter, Spike gets angry again and accidentally releases green fire, thus proving that he has fire magic.

I like these stories were it shows a spike that gose though struggles due to the world around then. We're the others want to do right by him but they don't know how

Well, now we have Spike really letting someone know his frustration. Now, we wait to see what pushes him over the edge. I look forward to reading more.

Men I love a story already please continue want we all want to know what happens next.

Twilight screwed up BIG time!

Came here for the spike and rainbow shipping, stayed for the drama

Outside the room stood Twilight who had been listening in on what her mom and brother were talking about felt more guilty than ever. No matter how she came off, she never intended to make Spike feel so inferior to her. She knew if she wanted to make it up to Spike now, she'd really have to think hard on it.

Twilight, you left him out of things you knew he wanted to be a part of AND called him a nuisance to his face. HOW DID YOU THINK HE'D END UP FEELING?!

I have experienced these kind of things before, not only it is bad for emotional healthy, but that also leaves a terrible image of people who are supposed to be close to us