Well, Equestria was saved, magic has returned to the land, and Cozy Glow is in Tartarus. Though there was one deep loss that can’t be overlooked.
The Young Six took a bit too long to save Starlight from being sucked into the void, so while most of the magic has returned to Equestria, Starlight has been sucked into another dimension: A dimension full of human contestants on a crappy reality show by some man known as Chris McLean. She’ll have to try and find a way to adjust to this new world while her friends in Equestria try to find a way to save her.
(Takes place after Walk Of The Egyptian Part 2)
Chapters (12)
Why did you choose that particular place?
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Because I want Starlight to be involved with a good amount of contestants left and I figured I wouldn’t lose much if I just started after Ezekiel got booted.
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How’s the story so far?
I can't wait to read more of this
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How come?
Welp... That scene in MLP really was uncomfortable for me and you've stirred up repressed memories with this story.
I was scarred quite a while back by this scene...
https://youtu.be/sWJ5z9a3doQ
And youve managed to make me view Starlight as Olga... well done, and by well done I mean I never wanted that comparison to happen and now I'm depressed.
Ayo wtf is this chapter? Discord can open portals to other dimensions I'm pretty sure that's show canon when he was gonna send pot pony to one. They aren't even gonna try?
And they got anti magic rings...
https://youtu.be/6yRVr4Sdrkk
I don't know how to feel about this. Clearly Starlight isn't happy. And she does have her magic? Some of it? I don't understand how she wouldn't immediately being looking for a way to get back.
Like I know it's a crossover and that would defeat the purpose just... Yeah.
Well me and Heather have one thing in common. We both know how incompetent the princesses are in canon.
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What anti-magic rings? The ring was just meant to shock her.
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What’s wrong with Starlight’s banishment?
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I gathered that from the next chapter. Why not just barrier?
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I replied to this with the video. Wouldn't call it banishment either.
Well this is obviously setup. I'll see where it goes.
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The next chapter’s already out.
Starlight seemed flippant there at the end even though she was more suspicious of Alejandro at the end of the last chapter. Wierd.
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Oh, she still has suspicions about him, she just doesn’t want to be rude.
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I haven’t read it yet. I’m waiting until this story is closer to being completed. Will this story have any fighting or violence in it?
This is gold and I love this so much
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Thanks, what do you like about it?
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I really enjoy Starlight's interactions with the cast, though I sorta wish we could have a little interlude showcasing Twilight and co's efforts in getting Starlight back
Personally, I think there's too much Starlight. Perhaps try describing her as "The lilac pony" instead in some sentences?