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This story is a sequel to Smolder gets arrested


Sandbar did not expect to spend his summer break in tense political negotiations, but here he is. Fighting not only against experienced and manipulative politician on the other side of negotiating table, but also his own doubts and low self-esteem.
Out of these two, politicians may prove to be easier opponents.

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He wondered again what his friends were doing. He could imagine them all, doing their usual activities with friends and family. Or, in case of Gallus, probably lying in bed all day and procrastinating…

If he only knew

Sandbar, on the other hoof, felt really lonely and sad today. Unlike his friends, he wasn’t truly ‘special’. He wasn’t a member of a different race, someone hoof-picked for the difficult mission of learning different cultures and spreading friendship. He could not breathe fire, fly, change shape. He was strong, as every earth pony was by nature, but not as strong as some of his friends. He wasn’t the smartest, or the fastest. He wasn’t even the most empathetic, not when their group had a literal empath in it.

Aww Sandbar you got to give yourself some credit here and I'm sure you'll find something out there

No, stop that, he mentally said to himself, trying to force these memories away. Focus on everything else. You helped defeat Cozy Glow, you helped you friends many times. They value you a lot as a friend, and don’t care if you’re best at anything!

Yeah there you go sandbar I know you felt like that but I'm sure you your friends and even the teachers think highly of you

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I will answer all your comments later (it's literally middle of the night here where I live XD), but I just wanted to say something before sleep.
Getting a comment mere minutes after posting a story? Priceless. Thank you.

This was way too familiar to Sandstream. He could almost hear the same voice, just with slightly different words, in his head almost every day. “Hey, Silver Spirit, don’t say that. Your work is still important. Elements can’t be everywhere at once, and they too need help.”

Who's sandstream?

However, he did not expect the reaction that got. Instead of admiration or endless questions, Silver Spirit got visibly annoyed. “Great. So Princesses don’t give me even a modicum of trust. What did I expect? I guess I’m just not one of their precious Elements or their students. Whatever. The job is yours, enjoy dealing with these stubborn rockheads yourself.” He threw some bits on the table, and got up.

Whoa that escalated really quickly

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Yeah my notification went off and I saw your thing and I just starting reading it and no worries take your time

“I could have. Maybe I should have. I just thought you are somepony special, with all the hype around you. Guess I was wrong.” Silver Spirit took a deep breath. “I wish Pinkie Pie was here.”

😡

Among the books, there was one that caught his attention. He took it, and sure enough; a copy of Journal of Friendship, extended edition, third print. Huh. He didn’t expect to find that book here. He shrugged and almost put it back on the shelf, before he stopped. He remembered something, mentioned offhoofedly in a passing conversation.

Oh wow nice to see the Journal of friendship for better or worse like what happened back in the fame and misfortune

“Alright. You can stop with the speech here.” Silver Spirit straightened up. “I guess even Elements aren’t as good as they seem sometimes. And maybe I should stop looking up to them all the time. But how does it help us with the buffalo?”

I mean you can still look them up but also try doing your best what you're good at I guess that's the lesson of it

So we finally got to sandbars summer vacation and again change of plans of his vacation so he was on his way home he kind of wished to hang out with his friends but they all went home as well for the summer so he decided to do the same and he he's been having some confident issues lately but when he finally stopped at a city called Rockville he was trying to get something to eat and drink until he saw a pony who looks pretty down so Sandbar goodness of his heart to see if he can cheer him up and this Pony name Silver Spirit told him that he's doing a diplomatic treating with the Buffaloes and apparently sandbar tried to do his part despite how much this guy thinks how the elements of harmonies can do anything without anybody's help which this guy also has some confident issue as well so the conference was going on and it did not go very well and even the guy thinks that Sandbar was a joke and you're saying that to a kid that's kind of harsh now he's been having really conflict about himself how he could not be in the same level as his friends but then when he saw the Journal of friendship he has some idea and even remembering the lesson that he told silver spirits about not everybody can succeed in a day or even they failed and the conflict sometimes solve itself without the help of The Elements of Harmony and sometimes you just had to do your best of your own skills and how things work and somehow it really worked between the Buffaloes and the ponies in the city and they celebrated and it looks like the kids really have a very interesting summer vacation indeed especially they had to stop a major war between two lands or multiple and coming together even though the main six has to kind of fix this as well I really felt bad for the girls but at least the kids really did an amazing job and how much they took the lessons from heart and I really like that but meanwhile across the Equestria apparently there was a princess name Lycklig came to this land and seek out for help or anything to help her country boy this is a pretty good setup I wonder how this will work on I guess that's another story this was pretty good keep up the good work

“They are not infallible, and not flawless."

They even sang a rather catchy song about that. :pinkiehappy:

In the end, both Sandbar and Silver Spirit were invited to the official ceremony (and party) hosted in Canterlot, so instead of going home, he went back to Ponyville and then to the capital itself, ironically by the very same train he took previously to ride home.

So wait, where is Sandbar living? I thought he canonically lived locally in Ponyville. :rainbowhuh:

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He wondered again what his friends were doing. He could imagine them all, doing their usual activities with friends and family. Or, in case of Gallus, probably lying in bed all day and procrastinating…

If he only knew

It is a running theme in this series that no one of Student Six believes others could have these adventures too. But somehow, every single one of them had an amazing summer trip somewhere. What a coincidence, right? ;).

Sandbar, on the other hoof, felt really lonely and sad today. Unlike his friends, he wasn’t truly ‘special’. He wasn’t a member of a different race, someone hoof-picked for the difficult mission of learning different cultures and spreading friendship. He could not breathe fire, fly, change shape. He was strong, as every earth pony was by nature, but not as strong as some of his friends. He wasn’t the smartest, or the fastest. He wasn’t even the most empathetic, not when their group had a literal empath in it.

Aww Sandbar you got to give yourself some credit here and I'm sure you'll find something out there

He will play his part, for sure. He's just a little bit insecure, being surrounded by all these amazing creatures.

No, stop that, he mentally said to himself, trying to force these memories away. Focus on everything else. You helped defeat Cozy Glow, you helped you friends many times. They value you a lot as a friend, and don’t care if you’re best at anything!

Yeah there you go sandbar I know you felt like that but I'm sure you your friends and even the teachers think highly of you

They do. But for people with low self-esteem, it's sometimes hard to believe it. I can sadly relate a lot.

This was way too familiar to Sandstream. He could almost hear the same voice, just with slightly different words, in his head almost every day. “Hey, Silver Spirit, don’t say that. Your work is still important. Elements can’t be everywhere at once, and they too need help.”

Who's sandstream?

A result of not good enough proofreading, and lack of beta reader. Fixed. Typo, that is, still lack a beta reader and I think I could use one... I'll probably announce I need one soon and see if anyone's willing to lend a hand.

However, he did not expect the reaction that got. Instead of admiration or endless questions, Silver Spirit got visibly annoyed. “Great. So Princesses don’t give me even a modicum of trust. What did I expect? I guess I’m just not one of their precious Elements or their students. Whatever. The job is yours, enjoy dealing with these stubborn rockheads yourself.” He threw some bits on the table, and got up.

Whoa that escalated really quickly

Eyup. He was already angry, and seeing Sandbar in just situation just made him almost explode. Misunderstanding, as we see later.

Yeah my notification went off and I saw your thing and I just starting reading it and no worries take your time

Thanks! I must say, it was an amazing thing, seeing all these comments moments after posting. I fell asleep really happy tonight :).

Among the books, there was one that caught his attention. He took it, and sure enough; a copy of Journal of Friendship, extended edition, third print. Huh. He didn’t expect to find that book here. He shrugged and almost put it back on the shelf, before he stopped. He remembered something, mentioned offhoofedly in a passing conversation.

Oh wow nice to see the Journal of friendship for better or worse like what happened back in the fame and misfortune

Fame and Misfortune is such a controversial episode sometimes (although these days it seems much better then when it first appeared...). I must say that I personally liked it, although I can also see why a lot of people didn't, and it fit the story perfectly here. Mane Six themselves do not want to be seen as infallible heroes, and the Journal is popular enough to be accessible in most places. It helped a lot, as you can see.

“Alright. You can stop with the speech here.” Silver Spirit straightened up. “I guess even Elements aren’t as good as they seem sometimes. And maybe I should stop looking up to them all the time. But how does it help us with the buffalo?”

I mean you can still look them up but also try doing your best what you're good at I guess that's the lesson of it

Yep. Lamenting that you're not number 1 and 'the' best ever isn't going to get you that far. But if everyone just tried to be the best they can be, things would be so much better for them and everyone else.

boy this is a pretty good setup I wonder how this will work on I guess that's another story this was pretty good keep up the good work

Thank you! And you will see the Princess Lyckling in the next story when I post the first chapter, hopefully soon :).

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“They are not infallible, and not flawless."

They even sang a rather catchy song about that. :pinkiehappy:

Flaweless is such a good song. It's a shame Fame and Misfortune is such a controversial episode, I personally love it (but can see why a lot of people don't). But even aside from the episode, the song itself is great., and I was really happy to mention it here.

In the end, both Sandbar and Silver Spirit were invited to the official ceremony (and party) hosted in Canterlot, so instead of going home, he went back to Ponyville and then to the capital itself, ironically by the very same train he took previously to ride home.

So wait, where is Sandbar living? I thought he canonically lived locally in Ponyville. :rainbowhuh:

Not that is a question. We have one mention of him living in Ponyville, but we also see him board the train for winter holidays in Best Gift Ever. There are some theories that he moved recently, but in general we don't really know.
In the end, I decided that I needed Student Six to have adventures outside Ponyville, so it was logical that Sandbar goes 'home' to visit some relatives. And then the story happens.

In fact, we know very little about Sandbar. We don't know anything about his family, cutie marks, and barely anything about him in general. If I ever write more about him, I will probably expand his backstory and character a little here and there, but there is very little canonical information there.

Thank you for the comment, posting stories before sleep and then waking up to all these comments is a really nice feeling :).

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We actually have two mentions of him living in Ponyville--in season eight's School Daze, then again in season nine's Uprooted, where it's reminded that he lives "locally." The comics also verbally confirm he lives in Ponyville. In any case, I've never seen it disputed before that he lived anywhere but Ponyville.

But I suppose for the purposes of your story, it does make sense he needed a reason to, y'know, get out of Ponyville, so...

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Well, that's on me then, I must have missed this when doing research for the chapter. Thanks for correcting me!

But yeah, in this story he lives outside of Ponyville. As you said, I kinda needed him to go somewhere, and so he went south.

Oh I see you rated the sequel to m which I probably cannot because this is how far I go with the reading because I'm not really into those type of stories of super violence and one of those NSFW which I do not like so yeah I cannot read the sequel sorry basically my rating is e or t because I can't go beyond that

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It's not gonna have any sex-related stuff, and M-rating is more because of it being a little scary then any gratuitous violence. If you can stomach the beach scene from Ocellus story, then you can probably stomach that one as well, it's just a little bit scarier.

But if not, that's also fine! Thank you for being with me for these stories, and hope to see your comments again one day :).

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