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Discord decides to visit Fluttershy at Sweet Feather Sanctuary only to discover an imposter inside her body. Confronting the interloper, he learns that a certain zebra decided to switch Fluttershy and Angel's bodies. Worried and annoyed by the arrangement, the Lord of Chaos rushes off to the Everfree Forest to save the 'bunny' from possible threats.

Day Seven of #FluttercordWeek2023: Free Day

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This scenario is just too good to resist! :fluttershbad::heart: All the interactions are very well-done per usual!

On another note, I think I can speak for everyone when I say that we will be looking forward to whatever else you bring to the table this year! Love your work!

"See how shy I am?" Fake Fluttershy said, holding her hoof to her cheek. "I talk to animals. I want to marry Discord."

Lol yeah that was the part that really got me there and basically raising the shipping fuel right there

:pinkiehappy: Here's a Special Somepony Cupcake ™ - I already have the Wedding Cake Designed too
:yay:
:pinkiegasp: Oh! got to go another Kissy kissy event coming, See you at Sugar Cube Corner later

:rainbowlaugh: Don't deny it, I caught you two swapping spit in the closet

:moustache::raritystarry: Rainbow Dash! Pinkie???? :pinkiesmile: Here's your Special Somecreature Cupcake™©®

:rainbowderp: Cupcake?

:pinkiehappy: Cupcake™

"I'll tell you this, little white demon, if anything has happened to Fluttershy, anything at all , I will personally see to it that you and Zecora will never see the light of day again.”

Ok Zecora didn't really mean any harm 😕

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I agree that she didn't. Discord is only acting this way because he takes the threat to Fluttershy's possible safety very seriously.

Oh wow this is a pretty different outcome if Discord was involved of the situation of this Freaky Friday Discord was about to visit Fluttershy but she's been acting really weird lately and he is not too happy of this imposter so he find out that it was Angel in Fluttershy's body and Angel told about the situation how him and Fluttershy switch bodies because of Zecora potion and Discord was not too happy and now he needs to find Fluttershy before she gets hurt in the everfree forest and Angel better fix the mistakes that he did meanwhile Fluttershy was having so much trouble try to get to Zecora but then things got worse when the Hawk caught her and she thought she was going to die and she never got the chance to tell Discord how she felt about him but luckily she has that chance because Discord saved her and she was happy to see him again and basically having their moment with each other despite how she's in Angel's body when they got back Fluttershy was still injured from the Hawk Attack but she recovered pretty good when she fed with the medicine and a little bit bandage and both Angel and Fluttershy understood each other which caused their bodies to switch back and it looks like both of them finally understood each other even though this stunt was a little dangerous but at least they understood and not only that Discord talk with Fluttershy about this whole relationship between them and she admitted that she was in love with him and well he was pretty happy and they officially tried to go on their first date and I will say this was pretty nice I like that keep up the good work

This was a great read!

It was a tad more dramatic than most fluttercordweek stories, but that is not a bad thing!

Hope you’ll write more!

I completely agree. And I tried writing something with Discord overhearing this, but I couldn't get it to flow well. You, however, did an amazing job. I'm glad we FINALLY have a "what if he overheard Angel?" fic!

I loved Cocky Discord at the end, being all coy like that. 100% amazing stuff right there. You even had him inspect his nails as he talked! Yes!

This was fun, fun, fun, thumbies up.

"See how shy I am?" Fake Fluttershy said, holding her hoof to her cheek. "I talk to animals. I want to marry Discord."

How did Dr. Fauna react to this bit of Fluttershy mimicry? Since no reaction was called out, can I assume that what Angel-as-Fluttershy said was no surprise? Everypony knows already?

  • How can "Anger began to boil" when just four short paragraphs he was already livid?
  • AFAIK, wrath may rain down but i sincerely hope it does not reign.

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If you watch the episode, Dr. Fauna quickly cuts 'Fluttershy' off right after the "I want to marry Discord" line is delivered. I personally see this reaction as her feeling uncomfortable and wanting to change the subject as soon as possible. Since it was in the show, I didn't feel like I needed to include that reaction in this fic. Also, the POV is Discord at this point in the story and because he fell out of the tree, he didn't see/hear Dr. Fauna's reaction.

Concerning how can he be livid and then have his anger boiling, that is because the emotion of surprise associated with Impostershy's confession replaced the anger he was feeling before. Once the surprise was over, the anger quickly resurfaced.

I fixed the typo.

Thank you for your comment. Good questions. I was running out of time to make the deadline for this story so if there's anything that seems rushed or unsatisfactory, I didn't have as much time to devote to combing over it. Again, thanks for the read and comment.

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Sorry -- I must have missed that episode! I did not realize you were riffing off of something cannon. If I had seen the relevant ep. I would have interpreted events within that framework and not bothered you with dumb question. Well, let me reiterate that this was an enjoyable story. Thanks for writing!

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