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Mockingbirb


A pony of mystery in the darkness. Or I forgot to take the lens cap off. (They/them is fine.)

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What if MLP G5 was "Fullmetal Alchemist" and also Shakespeare's "Hamlet?"

A specter with wings AND a horn instructs Zipp and Pipp to avenge their mother's death...with necromancy!

"And that's how I lost BOTH my BUCKING FRONT LEGS!" -- Zipp Storm

Ponykind cannot gain anything without first giving something in return. To obtain, something of equal value must be lost. That is alchemy's first law of equivalent exchange. In those days, we really believed that to be the world's one and only truth. -- AU Pipp Petals (definitely not some human kid named Alphonse Elric)

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My initial reaction: "What is this incomprehensible mishmash of different— Oh, it's Birb."

Looking forward to seeing where you go with this. I especially like this concept for how Old Equestria was unmade, and how to summon the specter of Sparkle.

For such a chaotic mishmash of tropes this is hanging together rather neatly. I look forward to seeing where this goes.

Twilight sighed. "I just hope this turns out better for you two than it did for the last pony who tried to use the Almaghest's treacherous magic." She sighed again. "Centuries ago, Zephyr Breeze hoped to win the heart of his sister's best friend...but he made a serious misjudgment, and destroyed Equestria, fracturing its remnants into three separate, petty realms."

:facehoof: Take your damn upvote and fav.

StraightToThePointStudio on YouTube is doing an Audio Reading of your Fic! Awesome!

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