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This story is a sequel to Ocellus gets stranded


When Smolder hears of a Haukland attack on the Dragon Lands, she can't believe it. Who in their right minds would attack dragons? How can any griffon think he can defeat them?

However, she quickly finds out that the ruler of Haukland is stubborn and proud, just like dragons, and will not back down. And there are creatures on both sides pushing for war, some of them with more malicious intent then others...


As always, the story uses Equestria at War lore, but knowledge of EaW is not required to enjoy the story; it was written to be enjoyable by everyone, not just fans of the game.

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One of the guards noticed her and flew to meet her and block her way, but she was ready for it. “Hey, you! My grandma is tougher then you! You sure you wanna try to stop me?”

Ok smolder I know you're tough don't get me wrong but there are limited that sometimes you cannot handle and that's strengthwise

“Yes, actually, what’s with the stupid rumors? About war and all that? Can’t you tell everyone to stop them, or something? It’s becoming annoying.” Smolder would never admit to also being unnerved and slightly scared by these rumors.

Yeah me too kid

“Death. It was death. I tell you, an ancient spirit possessed that griffon and came to punish us for our sins.” Another dragon said, a smaller, red one. Both his legs had multiple, smaller gashes on them.

Apparently death is really been busy lately and some of the young six encounter him which that's pretty scary 😨

“We’re not your friends! You just slowed us down! If not for you, we would kick his ass” The other two dragons protested.

Hey don't be like that if you guys were not friends you would have just abandoned her and let the other one die to defend itself but you didn't

She missed Yona. The yak was the only one in the group with a dose of healthy, strong pride in her nation. If her friend was here, she would just smash the dragons until they started being reasonable. And it would probably work. Of course, that would still leave the griffons, but if all her friends were here, she could count on them to make them stop attacking.

I'm sure all of you kids could you did learn from the best especially after season 9 the mid finale

“Well, it got you to stop you pointless shouting, right? So I say it worked. Now, I have an idea how to fix the problem, if you can spend five minutes without screaming that is.” Another thing she and Yona had in common was lack of respect for authorities when they act stupid. Smolder had no problem listening to adults – after all, they were older and much more experienced, and elders like Torch were absolutely worthy or respect. However, if said dragons acted like idiots, and she, a kid, could see it clearly, then something was clearly wrong.

I would definitely see how yona and smolder will have in common with each other they're kind of very prideful and thinking they're tough it can be good but sometimes ignorant will be there downfall

While flying north, Smolder once again tried to understand what made her decide to do this. She was a kid, and she was on summer break! She should be taking lava baths or sparring with other dragons (or searching for rare gems for professor Rarity to use in her new dress), but instead she was flying to a country that just attacked them and had at least one, if not more superpowered griffons who could tear through dragon scales like nothing.

Yep it felt like this is like a thing for you kids when you want to start something fun on your summer vacation something bad happens kind of sound familiar doesn't it

“I have a name, it’s Smolder, thank you very much.” She answered. She then turned around and exchanged goodbyes and hihgh-fives to her new friends, before following the tense guard inside.

Hey at least she made friends with them so despite the rocky start it was pretty worth it I guess whatever you want to call it 😅

The guard visibly hesitated, looking over the small, but muscular dragon who could probably rip him apart limb from limb if she wanted to. Graf just sighed, visibly annoyed. “I have her word she will cooperate. Unless you changed you mind?” He asked her.

Your
And this dude is very annoying and he's trying to instigate

To calm herself down, she tried to focus on something else. The memories of her friends appeared in her mind, and she found herself thinking about them. What were they doing? Probably sitting and relaxing in their homes. She could imagine Yona playing in the snow, Silverstream swimming in the ocean, Ocellus reading yet another book, Sandbar... probably singing, and Gallus procrastinating and lying in bed all day. Al that while she was here, in this dark cell, waiting for whatever may happen next.

If only she knew what was going on with her friends they will share the same feeling with her especially since there's summer vacation has been shot for all of them

“Are you?” She countered. This guy, she decided, was just rude for no reason. She really had enough of it. “Or maybe judging someone by their race is actually just stupid? One of two. Or maybe both.”

Yep sometimes you just hate these kinds of racist comments

Smolder only needed one look at the newest arrival to feel weird sense of unease. He seemed quite normal at first glance, a young griffon with dark-orange feathers, wearing a plain black robe. However, something felt wrong about him, and no matter how much she looked at him, she couldn’t place it. But it was definitely unnerving.

Oh boy I feel like he's been showing up a couple times 😰 I mean I don't blame her I'll probably be scared too

“I am something you cannot comprehend. I am Death.” The cold suddenly took over the room, bringing with it strangely calming fear. “And you served me well all those years. Rejoice, for your prayers have been answered. I have come to bring you peace.”

Perfect upload timing, just as I finish Silverstreams' story!

“Not as amazing as yours. It all started when my train was stopped…”

Well try to give you some some credit sandbar let's see what your day of summer vacation turned out

So at this point it's time to become a running thing right now especially for these kids so smolder wanted to make sure what was going on here especially hearing some rumors about the dragons almost got themselves killed by a griffin she was going to talk with dragon lord ember and after a couple missteps she talked with her and she was going to talk with the injured dragons they told smaller about how this Griffin almost kill them even with their strong scale which that's pretty worried some for the dragons so smolder decided to go over to the land of the Griffins called Haukland a very prideful Griffins and luckily after saying that she was the Ambassador they let her through to talk with the leader name Graf Meyer and and while the conversation was going on he kind of put the test on her and put it in jail see if she tried to escape or anything but she didn't so she gain a little respect from him so she tried to convince him to stop with the war and everything before things get ugly but before this thing goes going on another creature was coming in and his name is Hademar but he's been giving out some weird vibe like you really want to stay away from him and saying something about this whole preach about Maar which that's a little unsettling and not only that smolder still thinks she can try to convince Graf Meyer not to go to war and if he needed protection he can Ally with the other countries as well but then she needs to figure out about this Hademar so she had a plan which it's going to be very tricky so after a while Graf Meyer called Hademar that he doesn't need his assistant anymore and he wants to not do anything with him and of course he did not take it too well and he was about to kill the leader and he revealed himself that it's the same creature that Ocellus face off it was death again and he was about to make his attack while he tried to break him smolder surprised him with that attack and of course it didn't and both of them tried are hard as to stop him but he was just too strong luckily the gold sword that he forgotten pierced through the monster and he screaming pain and left again and both smolder and Graf Meyer we're pretty happy they won over that and also becoming allies so the war was ended and her friends were pretty impressed how she handled the situation but what really scares them is how death just showed up just only Ocellus and smolder and the others did not encounter him but it felt like they're going to soon because death is not done yet it looks like he's preparing for something well I got to say this was a pretty hectic one and it was a pretty good one now I wonder how sandbar's vacation went I guess that's another story keep upthe good work

“They all want to race. All of them. It’s like hundred copies of me. I never thought I will have enough racing.” Rainbow slowly sat down on the bed, wincing.

I forgot something yeah if you ever went to the mirror pool that's probably how that would sound like 😅

“And, if yes, can I use it to save the Princess?”

What princess??

Bro, you really hypping me up to play all the other griffon countries. Amazin' story!

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Ok smolder I know you're tough don't get me wrong but there are limited that sometimes you cannot handle and that's strengthwise

She was just trying to annoy the guard and make them act unreasonable. Trust me, Smolder understands the value of strength and the value of being smart, and of course the power of friendship on top of it.

Apparently death is really been busy lately and some of the young six encounter him which that's pretty scary 😨

Oh, death is very busy these days. You can probably guess that it's not the last we see of his manipulations.

Hey don't be like that if you guys were not friends you would have just abandoned her and let the other one die to defend itself but you didn't

Ever met people who are generally good at heart, but play tough to impress their friends? ;).

I would definitely see how yona and smolder will have in common with each other they're kind of very prideful and thinking they're tough it can be good but sometimes ignorant will be there downfall

Yeah, I always saw them being best friends over their shared pride. Don't get me wrong, but Ponies, while proud of Equestria, are not really 'that' proud of it to the point of fighting others to prove it, Gallus lived in a forgotten and ruined place, Ocellus is too timid for anything, and Silverstream is similar to Sandbar in that regard.
But I can absolutely imagine Yona and Smolder sparring over 'Yaks best! No, dragons best!'. Friendly, of course, but it's a kind of friendly rivalry they can both understand and it helps them bond.

Yep it felt like this is like a thing for you kids when you want to start something fun on your summer vacation something bad happens kind of sound familiar doesn't it

Smolder: That Tree sure likes playing with us, doesn't it...
Mane Six: (either deep in the tropical, insect-filled swamp, freezing, with hangover, or exhausted): You don't say?
Tree: <Is very happy with itself>

Hey at least she made friends with them so despite the rocky start it was pretty worth it I guess whatever you want to call it 😅

Count on our Students to find friends everywhere. And it helped them solve problems many, many times.

Also, typo fixed, thank you!

Yep sometimes you just hate these kinds of racist comments

Yeah. Sometimes they just get under your skin, and the best part is that while Graf here is being annoying and irritating, he's not even doing this on purpose. It's just normal to him. But Smolder won't have that :).

“Not as amazing as yours. It all started when my train was stopped…”

Well try to give you some some credit sandbar let's see what your day of summer vacation turned out

Sandbar has massive self-esteem issues. As you will see when his chapter is posted. Fortunately, his friends are here to help.

“They all want to race. All of them. It’s like hundred copies of me. I never thought I will have enough racing.” Rainbow slowly sat down on the bed, wincing.

I forgot something yeah if you ever went to the mirror pool that's probably how that would sound like 😅

Yep. Rainbow Dash is the best ambassador to Haukland, alongside Applejack, and she will remember these days fondly in the future... once her wings stop hurting horribly.

well I got to say this was a pretty hectic one and it was a pretty good one now I wonder how sandbar's vacation went I guess that's another story keep upthe good work

Thank you! I am currently writing a chapter for a different thing (juggling 4 stories to update now, this, By Starlight, one non-MLP story on AO3 and one not posted yet), but I promise to get to writing next chapter when I can.

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Thank you so much for the comment! I'm happy you liked these stories so much :).

And regarding EaW: Mechanically, Haukland's campaign is hard. You have little industry, not much of an army, low ponypower, and not the best research, while your first enemy is one that you have to naval invade (but they are much weaker then you, so at least there's that). But plot-wise, it's amazing. Definitely recommended if you are good enough to power through these difficulty issues.

“Yes, actually, what’s with the stupid rumors? About war and all that? Can’t you tell everyone to stop them, or something? It’s becoming annoying.”

You should borrow Yona for a bit. She'll just throw the dummies behind all this down a hill and that'll be the end of it. :trollestia:

Cultural issues. Since when did she start using all these big words?

You probably picked them up from Ocellus. It certainly wasn't either of the boys at least. :ajsmug:

She missed Yona. The yak was the only one in the group with a dose of healthy, strong pride in her nation. If her friend was here, she would just smash the dragons until they started being reasonable. And it would probably work.

See, that's what I'm talking about! :rainbowlaugh:

Think positive thoughts, think positive thoughts, I hope he falls down these stair and breaks his stupid arm

That's thinking positively all right! :trollestia: (EDIT: and somewhat prophetic, even. I mean, he didn't fall down some stairs, but he DID break his arm)

“But you control your anger. You do not let it control you, instead. Interesting. You must be one of the calmest members of your race.”

Besides, you haven't met Spike yet, Mr. Meyer. :ajsmug:

"And not only you got rid of them, but instead of looting and attacking, you just take a tax from the ships passing around the islands.”

“Protection fee.”

Same diff.

“How can you possibly fight me?” The monster took one step forward, slowly getting closer to his prey. “I am inevitable. I am Death. All surrender to me, and none can escape.”

You're also a one-trick pony, apparently, always talking about yourself. You're Death, we get it, you can stop trying to squeeze in the reminder every sentence already. I mean, who knew Death was so...egomaniacal? :rainbowlaugh:

“Nah. Dragon Lady would have my head for it. Dragons are forbidden from doing anything that would make us act lose control or get even more aggressive. Drunk dragon is a big problem, you know. Imagine Torch drunkenly starting an earthquake.”

Never thought about it like that, actually. Then again, I had always figured dragons weren't as easy to get so tipsy in the first place, so...

“Yona never meat meanie Maar. If she did, she would smash him!”

Or throw him down a hill. That seems to work too. :trollestia:

“It can be someone posing as him. You know, posing as an ancient evil to hide their true nature?” Ocellus suggested.

“Nah, that makes no sense. Who would have done something like that?”

In his realm, Discord had a weird feeling. Like someone was talking about him critically.

Hey, I liked that whole Grogar twist, personally. It wasn't often that MLP actually floored me like that, and I much rather have stories that surprise me than ones I can already guess precisely where it's going to go, y'know? :twilightsmile:

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I missed this comment it seems. Well, all I can say is that you will see the Princess mentioned here in a story after Sandbar's :).

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“Yes, actually, what’s with the stupid rumors? About war and all that? Can’t you tell everyone to stop them, or something? It’s becoming annoying.”

You should borrow Yona for a bit. She'll just throw the dummies behind all this down a hill and that'll be the end of it. :trollestia:

You really liked Yona's story, didn't you? Not that I mind, I'm flattered actually that you enjoyed it so much :).

Cultural issues. Since when did she start using all these big words?

You probably picked them up from Ocellus. It certainly wasn't either of the boys at least. :ajsmug:

Ouch. Burn.

“How can you possibly fight me?” The monster took one step forward, slowly getting closer to his prey. “I am inevitable. I am Death. All surrender to me, and none can escape.”

You're also a one-trick pony, apparently, always talking about yourself. You're Death, we get it, you can stop trying to squeeze in the reminder every sentence already. I mean, who knew Death was so...egomaniacal? :rainbowlaugh:

Well, easy for us to say, we get to see him saying it multiple times. Most of the time, it's kind of hard to escape him, so he makes his monologue and the victim dies, the end. Seeing this multiple times, yeah, it can get a 'little' repetitive. And our 'friendly' god of death has some issues, as you can probably see. And you will see more of them.

“Yona never met meanie Maar. If she did, she would smash him!”

Or throw him down a hill. That seems to work too. :trollestia:

... you REALLY liked Yona's story XD. Don't tempt me into making her actually throw Maar down the hill ;).

Hey, I liked that whole Grogar twist, personally. It wasn't often that MLP actually floored me like that, and I much rather have stories that surprise me than ones I can already guess precisely where it's going to go, y'know? :twilightsmile:

Yeah, this bit was not supposed to be critical of the Grognar/Discord plot, but it came out like that accidentally. I was also one of (it seems very few) people in the fandom who weren't mad at the reveal. I understand why a lot of people hated it, and having Mane Six fight the legendary necromancer would be fun for sure, but it was a surprising plot twist, biggest and most unexpected in MLP.
And besides, there is some charm in seeing Discord failing so bad at everything friendship-related despite all his superpowers.

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And besides, there is some charm in seeing Discord failing so bad at everything friendship-related despite all his superpowers.

And even misguided as it was, Discord did have good intentions behind it all--he just underestimated the craftiness of the villains he was working with. Were it not for that, we might have yet gotten that reformation story so many apparently wanted after all.

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Yep. He was just too arrogant, which is a running theme for him (Fluttershy got him to reform despite everything he did, then Tirek defeated him easily, and then the final trio of villains did that as well). His plan had some merits, but, again. Arrogance. One thing that never changed even after he was reformed.

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