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DanishDash


Why do I write? Because it's fun! :D

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This story is a sequel to Fallen Knight


Called to save a defeated clone army, Padawan Liam Valar and his master find themselves transported to Equestria with their entire clone legion. 

Taking place two years before the events of the show, Equestria suddenly has to fight a war they didn't want. Lurking beyond the horizon is the looming threat of an entire droid army. Coming to their defense is the Jedi and clone legion.

Unexpectedly, the arrival of the Jedi has not only changed events, but awakened the Force in Equestria. Now the Jedi must fight to protect Equestria, and see if they can find a way home, or make this world their new home.


Please note this is not a sequel to my original story, this is a complete rewrite of the original story.

Also be aware that I am a big Star Wars fan, but I won't go into every bit of lore detail, and so on. This is a fan fiction between two worlds who has nothing to do with one another. Don't read this if you are looking for crazy details about Star Wars.

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 40 )

This is before Revenge of the Sith/Order 66 Betrayal?

I just hope that communications are damaged, so it will ironically save the Jedi Duo from the Clones.

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For how long?

Because the Clone Wars is basically just over three years.

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It will be explained later on, but it isn't a spoiler. The story takes place about a year before the Revenge of the Sith, give or take.

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Thanks.

You know, it will REALLY SUCK that even if they defeat the incoming droids.

The Clones will be a potential hazard to Equis/Equestria, as well. For the new Imperial Galactic Empire, IF they get the order, or still have those inhibitor chips.

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Exactly. But for now there is a lot that will be explained over time, and discovered.

But that is for later chapters. :eeyup:

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Hopefully the surgical pod in the medical bay is still intact.

Pitty, another intresting story i won't read thanks to the dreaded black tag. Though, i have to wonder, why is this anthro but the prequeal not? Shouldn't they be the same?

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I'm sorry you won't read it, and the anthro part is a deal breaker for you. I get that is not for everyone. Well, when I wrote the first one there was a lot I wanted to do, but it didn't work for me. So when I ended it on an open ending, I wanted to do a complete rewrite. When I planned the story I could not make it work with regular ponies, so I decided to put the black tag on there.

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Okay, thanks for the explanation. Luckily enough, you have plenty other good stories. Like Highscore for example.

Jedi Master Ven Allusis was a tall imposing figure. Broad shouldered, strong looking. He had a hard face, despite the fact he was a kind and gentle man.

Love that you used Belth Allusis likeness from Star Wars The Old Republic. Wonder if this is a descendent of his or just a coincidence XD

His eyes met Rainbow Dash's for just a moment. He could sense her through the Force, then, for just a moment, he felt as if she was reaching back.

To quote something from an awful sequel trilogy, “There has been an awakening.”

Interesting. So Dashie is a possible force sensitive? Wonder how that’ll play out. That and I’m instantly reminded of another Star Wars story on here where Dashie was a force sensitive lol. It’s been ages since I’ve read it, but I bet it’s floating around here somewhere.

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My original version of this story, Dash was Force sensitive, and became a Padawan. Will tap into that in this story too.

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Is Dash the only pony that is force sensitive?

Just find it weird that only one element bearer is force sensitive, but not the rest of her friends?


And technically, everybody in the Star wars Galaxy has the living force inside them. It just depends on how many midichlorians you have, and you need hard-earned training from either Jedi or Sith.

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Well you are jumping to some conclusions are little early.

As Liam already explained, the Force is everywhere, and in everyone. Not all can tap into it though. We also have not gotten in that far to say which of the girls are Force sensitive or not.

But right off the bat I can tell you I've excluded all Unicorns.

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What do you think the chances of the Order 66 transmission reaching Equestria are? When the time comes of course.

This makes me wonder if Celestia would be pro Republic or Separatist. Hmm…

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I highly doubt of Pro-Separatist, when and if the Droids attack first.

A new DanishDash story, and I'm only just discovering it now?! I must fix this oversight on my end lol

I am loving this so far, the world needs more good star wars crossovers.

Heyo, finaly that rewrite came!

I am glad! It was my favorite story of yours, interesting you included the clones in equestria now, i am eager to se how it will develop.
I am specialy eager how the Jedi will they will react to equestrian magic.

Allusis stood, and moved closer to the hologram. "This is the known galaxy, and how we have divided everything. The closer you get to the center, the more we know, the more we have explored. The farther we move out from the core, the less we know."

Technically only the core has been fully explored, and most everything to the galactic east has been explored
The deep core and places like the Koornacht Cluster have not been fully explored by the time of the clone wars

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oh that IS really good damm question
because it can be both

Marcaroni and cheese this is good

Good story added to my read list! :twilightsmile:

The armor struck her ass oddly, she'd never seen the like before.

I would assume you meant to write "The armour struck her as odd".

The imagery in this typo is interesting, however.

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NNNNNOOOOOO! OH MY GOD! NO! THAT IS FUNNY!! XD

And embarrassing, but mostly funny!

I've caught up with this one now, can't wait to see it continue.

Comment posted by Mikail deleted Oct 4th, 2024

With one final look at Rainbow, the gunship flew back towards the Venator.

I have a bad feeling about this...
Also the story is fire. I see you have improved much since the Fallen Knight...

"I have a bad feeling about this," Liam sighed.

Great. Now something bad is going to happen.

"I have a bad feeling about this," Liam sighed.

He said it!

Lets hope that Twilight doesn't become so obsessed with learning of the jedi and their crew that she deviates from the path to becoming the element of magic, as this seems to be set a good few years before Nightmare Moon's return.

"I have a bad feeling about this," Liam sighed.

Allusis placed his large hand on Liam's shoulder. "Keep your concentration on the here and now where it belongs. Be mindful of the living Force, my young Padawan."

"Yes, master."

literally ripped from Episode 1 but it's a good set of quotes

"I have a bad feeling about this," Liam sighed.

Please, use more prequel memes. I beg you! It would be such a shame.

"Ah, and these are our esteemed guests." Celestia said to a young and elegantly dressed mare. She wasn't alone, as the stallion beside her was the young Fancy Pants who had been visiting them regularly.

Also, how did I not notice, but now, that the stallion is named Fancy Pants? Is it a ref or just a coincidence?

Chapter is, from a critic's point of view, outstanding. Great writing, maybe a little bit more room for the clones wouldn't harm, but, overall, great. Just... Keep up the good work! :pinkiehappy:
(and use prequel memes pls)

Short but sweet. Glad to see this updated ^_^

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