This story is a sequel to Gleeful Vengeance
It’s time for a vacation. A much needed one at that. A few weeks after the Glee Club incident they all do just that. Four guys, seven girls, and an unwanted last minute guest go on a long distance vacation to a large beach area in a tourist town to unwind.
Will Zephyr Breeze’s presence completely ruin it? That remains to be seen. Romance, shenanigans, drama and fun in the sun will ensue in this slice of life story about friendship, love and crazy fraternity guys.
[Set in an alternate universe]
Chapters (6)
What a nice start! This is some great setup for what’s to come and I’m thoroughly looking forward to it.
I’d forgotten just how irritating Zephyr Breeze is. I don’t know what your overall plans are for him but I really hope somebody slaps him xD
I’m once again very gratified to have Dusk part of the story. It’s adorable seeing his relationship begin to develop with Rarity. Can’t wait to see more!
Once again, another fun chapter! It’s nice to see them all still enjoying themselves. It helps that Zephyr is off doing his own thing. I won’t lie, I took some satisfaction in seeing him strike out.
Highlights: the laser tag game. Just some fun character moments between the two different couples. Also, seeing Sunset and Flash get some sort of steps towards maybe patching things up. I always felt the movies kind of shoved Flash off to one side after the first one and it’s nice to see him involved with the group.
Onto the next one!
Oof Rainbow. This is one of those situations where her anger is both understandable but also unfair. Yes she has every right to be annoyed with Zephyr being there, but it’s not like Singer knew how bad he was until now. Hopefully she can find a way to make amends with Singer and Twilight, then everyone can come together towards their true friendship: collectively hating Zephyr Breeze xD
Overall, once again a fun chapter. Little bit of drama to spice things up, but everyone still making the best of it. It was rather cute the couples all had to share rooms. Dusk making a pillow barricade is definitely something he would do at this stage in the relationship. Looking forward to more!
Thank you for your review, Alpha. I’m glad you’re liking it so far.
This was another fun chapter, but also good for resolving some outstanding issues. Namely the conflict between twilight, singer and rainbow. I was seriously expecting it to escalate following the accidental spike, but I’m happy to see it was resolved fairly amicably. Shame the boys lost but at least it was hilarious.
Hmmmm… yeah, i can only wonder what Iscorde is going to do. I like the twist on his name, by the way, made me chuckle. Looking forward to seeing where this goes!
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Lengthy chap, but altogether an entertaining read. The character interactions continue to be the highlight, of course (which is the main point of the story, so cheers), but the addition of new plot elements sprinkled in here and there is also keeping things engaging. Among everything else, I'm surprised to see Timber make an appearance.
It'll be interesting to see where things go from here. Obviously drunk shenanigans are about to ensue, so I'll go ahead and make myself some popcorn so I can watch the fireworks.