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A Past Returned - TacoTues4Eva



A past Sunset doesn't remember comes searching for her, but will it be for the better or for the worse.

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Thursday Dec 22 b

The frigid air outside of the mall gave Sunset a bit of a shiver when it first hit, making her thankful she took the offered coat from Susan. It was kind of surprising to see all of the cars parked out there, yet Sunset didn’t really see anyone milling about except for what she assumed was a mother with a very young daughter as well as some teenage boy both heading into the mall from slightly different directions. She couldn’t help but wonder if all of these people were in the mall.

“What do you know about Will?” Irma croaked as they walked down the sidewalk, but they actually had to walk a bit since they parked pretty far away. They did manage to get a spot not far off from the picnic area which, unsurprisingly, was empty. The area was actually clean of snow thanks to the roof overhead where people from the food court could sit when they wanted.

“Irma, I’m still trying to figure out where to start.” Sunset sighed as she stopped walking. “Susan, do you think you can put my guitar in the car while I take Irma over to the picnic area to talk? Nobody is around with the cold so I think it should be safe to talk there.”

“Are you sure you will be okay honey?” Susan asked, a look of worry etched into her face.

“I will be, don’t worry.” Sunset said, gingerly handing over her guitar to Susan.

“I’ll be right back.” Susan said, giving Sunset a hug then turned to Irma. “Irma, what Sunset says might sound unbelievable, but what she tells you is the truth.”

Susan felt a little worried that Sunset was facing Irma by herself with their discussion, or at least the start of it. It did sound like Sunset just needed a few minutes alone to get started and did want Susan to come back as she didn’t ask to wait for a call to return. Susan hurried out toward her car to stow the instrument and was nearly there when she felt as if somebody was watching her. It sent a shiver down her spine as she finally got there and carefully put the gig bag in the back before making sure the car was locked up.

Playing with her keys, she looked around debating if she should just get in the car and drive back to where the girls were. She decided she was being silly as she wrote it off as being paranoid, or even as another shopper probably staring at her. She was used to the looks after all, she was a little taller than average putting her at almost a head taller than her daughter at the moment as well as being very attractive.

Yet, something seemed off to her. Swallowing as she saw a large shadow pass by her, she thanked whatever instinct that came over her, making her jump out of the way as the car she was passing exploded in a ball of fire, barely missing her. She still felt the force of the explosion and heat as it washed over her, yet thankfully left her unharmed. Looking up, she wasn’t sure how long that would be as there, floating above her was a man made of ice and a woman made of fire.

“Nerissa wants the Heart.” The woman growled angrily.

“Give us what our Mistress wants, or suffer.” The man added.

“I don’t know what you are talking about.” Susan said, taking a step back as she looked at the two in fear. She could hear sirens coming from the distance, but a purple dome appeared over a large portion of the lot, blocking off any sight to the outside world, with the only light being what was cast from the dome and the woman made of fire.

“Then I guess we do this the hard way.” The fire woman chuckled darkly as she created a large fireball over her head. “It isn’t like we need the mother of the keeper to find the brat.”

“Ms. Vandom!” Cornelia screamed in horror as Taranee and Hay Lin were running toward her as the fire woman unleashed the large fireball at Susan.

“MOM!” Sunset screamed as she appeared in front of Susan with a ‘POP!’ sound as if out of thin air, crossing her arms as if to shield her from the fireball. The woman watched in horror as the fireball engulfed Sunset as Susan and four teenage girls watched helplessly.

“You will pay for that!” Cornelia said, tears falling as she glared up at the two laughing.

“She shouldn’t have gotten in our way.” The iceman laughed. “Give us the location of the heart and Nerissa will have mercy. Otherwise, you all die!”


“So, Irma, nice weather we’re having.” Sunset said as she stuffed her hands into the coat’s pockets while looking around everywhere but at Irma.

“No, not really.” Irma said crossing her arms, “You said you would tell me about Will.”

“First, I should apologize to you. When I learned the truth, I wasn’t sure I wanted anything to do with any of you.” Sunset croaked out, her throat feeling very dry at the moment.

“What does that have to do with Will? What truth?” Irma demanded, her eyes tearing up, making Sunset kick herself mentally.

“Please listen until I’m finished, then you can ask questions.” Sunset said, finally locking eyes with Irma who after a few moments slowly nodded in agreement. “I found out I had a mother that loved me, something I dreamed about my whole life yet I didn’t want to deal with my past. I didn’t want to deal with girls I personally didn’t know even though I guess you could say they were my best friends at one point in time. I didn’t realize what was wrong, or at least what I thought was wrong the whole time.”

“Are you okay? If you need a few minutes we can take a break.” Irma suggested, the gesture actually touching Sunset as the girl was willingly sacrificing immediate answers to give the firey haired teen a moment of respite.

“No, I’m fine.” Sunset said, wiping the tears in her eyes away. “I was feeling old insecurities and fears that those friends were happy I was gone. That my mother didn’t want me, it’s why I can’t even call her mom despite knowing we love each other very much. Seeing you on the verge of breaking down made me realize that regardless if I’m ready to face my past or not, you deserve at least some closure. You deserve to know the truth.”

The two were interrupted as an explosion caught their attention and looked toward it before looking back at each other. Silently they nodded and ran toward it with fear growing as a dome was forming and they barely made it inside as it closed around them. They saw Susan staring in horror at a large fireball heading right at her and Sunset realized there was just no way to reach her in time making it seem as if time had frozen around the teen. Old instincts kicked in and she used a simple teleport she learned as a unicorn to appear in the fireball’s path though she had no idea what to do about it. It didn’t matter as all Sunset had time to do was scream before the fireball engulfed her. “MOM!”

She didn’t feel any pain as the fire washed over her, burning all round her as she stood in the center. She could feel the warmth from it even as it left her hair, clothes, everything about her unharmed. She felt so powerful at that moment, almost as powerful as she did back in Equestria when she surpassed all of her peers in her chosen specialty in magic. With a grin, she realized she had full access to her unicorn magic as the fire was making her feel her mana pathways blazing brightly throughout her entire body. And to top it off she had the advantage that shocked even Princess Celestia if the fire washing over her was any indication. After all, there was only two ponies known in Equestria that were immune to fire, and one of them was the Princess herself. The other, the student of the sun and magical prodigy extraordinaire.

Sunset was ripped from her musings in shock as she heard the strangled cry from Cornelia, “You will pay for that!”

“She shouldn’t have gotten in our way.” Tridart laughed cruelly. “Give us the location of the heart and Nerissa will have mercy. Otherwise, you all die!”

An evil grin spread across Sunset’s face as she decided it was time to show these foolish elementals what happens when they attacked someone she loved. And maybe with a little theatrics could put the fear of the Sun into them. Giving off the best maniacal laugh she could manage, everyone on the battlefield froze, including the guardians who were preparing to transform. All eyes turned to the flaming pyre that shrunk down and absorbed into Sunset.

“You think your pathetic little matchstick could hurt the student of the Sun? Lady, I burn hotter than the Sun in the middle of July, and I’m about to show you what real fire is!” Sunset snarled as she summoned flames above both hands that everyone could feel the heat from. She threw a fireball with each statement as she glared at the fire elemental who looked scared out of her mind. “Don’t!” Fireball! “Touch!” Fireball! “MY MOTHER!” A double fireball Ember managed to dodge only for it to strike Tridart evaporating him instantly.

“How? How can you be so powerful?” Ember screamed in horrified panic as the other girls only stared in awe.

“I’m about to show you, GUARDIANS UNITE!” Sunset screamed in fury, thrusting out the Heart and transforming all the girls. Though unlike usual, their outfits were a little different while their wings were bigger. The five's outfits seemed to cover a little more skin as well as had their elemental symbols on their top with Sunset's having the most changes. Gone was her skirt and replaced with a bodysuit. Sunset’s top was a light purple with her elemental symbol in a darker purple that was displayed on her chest. The sleeves of her top split at the elbows and flared open and past her hands. She also now sported a pair of elbow length, black fingerless gloves with a gold bangle resting loosely on her wrist. Coming down from her middles, the light purple angled down to right above her waist to show off a blue area of her suit that went down to her thighs ending in a wave-like pattern with the tips of the waves right below her waist. The body suit then covered the rest of her legs with a light blue color that went down and covered her feet. Her hair stayed much the same, but her bangs now extended past her face to frame her face.

Cornelia’s hair didn’t change much at all, besides being longer, her new look was the simplest of them all however. The top above the waist was the same light blue from Sunset’s suit that fully covered her arms and hands with her symbol on her chest in the darker blue and also had a gold ring on her wrist. The suit turned a pinkish/purple at her waist that went down her legs.

Taranee’s top was very similar to Sunset’s, but the sleeves stopped just past her shoulders and left her arms bare, but did have a pair of gloves that covered some of her fingers, but left the ends open. And like Sunset’s, her symbol was the same darker purple and also on her chest. However her top, while curving down like Sunset’s, left her belly open. Her dreadlocks greatly grew in number and extended all the way down to match Cornelia’s hair length. She now had a blueish and tight mini-skirt that ended just at her waist, but had her legs covered in lighter blue and turquoise striped leggings that went down to her feet.

Irma’s hair grew as well, but not as long as the others, stopping a couple inches past her waist. She now wore a blue top that showed off her shoulders with her symbol a darker blue on her chest. The collar of her top showed off a bit more of her neck then Cornelia’s did. Irma’s now had gloves as well, but hers started halfway down her upper arm and went all the way down to her hands, covering them much the same way as Sunset’s and Taranee’s. Her top though covered her upper body that turned into a long skirt that opened on either side that let her move her legs around. Her legs also had the same leggings that Taranee's has.

Hay Lin’s hair grew to the same length as Cornelia’s, but was parted down the middle, letting her bangs frame her face in a way similar to Sunset’s, but one side was longer the other. Behind her hanging bangs she now had two buns on either side of her head above the ears. Her top was sleeveless and blue like Irma’s, alongside having her own symbol on her chest, but had the collar split open a bit to show off a tiny bit of her neck and stopped halfway down her chest. Covering her arms and wrist was a long strip of cloth that wrapped around her arms and matched the color of her top. She also had pink-ish/purple strips of cloth covering her lower belly that turned into a long skirt around her waist that covered her legs. She also had a set of legging, but hers started a bit lower than Taranes’s and Irma’s, but ended at her feet just like theirs did. She also had a set of fingerless gloves, but hers didn’t go very far up, just past her wrists and was under the strips of cloth that were around her arms.

Besides them all having their element symbols on their chest, their wings had changed as well. Not only were they bigger, but instead of being yellow fading to blue at the edges, these were mainly blue that faded into yellow and looked to be significantly stronger then their previous wings.

“Will!?” All the girls cried out with shocked voices while Sunset glared at the fire elemental as the dome started cracking.

“Irma! Hay Lin! Put the fires out!” Sunset ordered as she risked a glance back at her mother, who was watching in worry. “Cornelia! Taranee! Protect my mom!”

“On it boss lady!” Hay Lin saluted before flying off and creating vacuums around the smaller fires, depriving them of oxygen and putting them out while Irma used her powers to drown the larger flames before they could spread to anymore vehicles.

“Stay away from me you monster!” Ember screamed as she was throwing fireball after fireball at Sunset who just kept absorbing them and closing in on the last elemental, her fists crackling with lightning.

“Boo!” Sunset snarled as she shoved her face inches from Ember who shrieked and flew off bringing the dome the rest of the way down. She flew back to her mother where Cornelia and Taranee was watching in awe and Susan was crying holding her hands over her mouth with worry clear in her eyes. Irma and Hay Lin quickly joined them as the barrier finally shattered into pieces where they could see police surrounding where the dome was. Sunset quickly grabbed her mother and told the others to touch her before she teleported them all to the only place she could think of, their living room.

“Oh sweetie, are you okay?” Susan asked, checking over Sunset searching for burns, cuts, bruises or any evidence of what just happened.

“I’m okay Mom, are you okay?” Sunset asked with worry doing the same.

“Y-You called me mom?” Susan asked as new tears formed, only these were tears of happiness.

“Of course I did, you’re my mom and I love you.” Sunset said, feeling drained all of a sudden. She realized teleporting them all before the police caught them was probably pretty dangerous as it drained a lot of power. “Can you do me one favor?”

“Of course, honey.” Susan agreed, happy everything seemed to be okay and that Sunset was finally calling her mom.

“Catch me.” Sunset said as she finally fell forward in a dead faint making Susan catch her as the teen and the other girls changed back to normal.

“A little help would be nice.” Susan said, breaking the girls from their shocked state as the girl who looked like Will changed back to the fire haired teen. They all rushed to help the woman get Sunset over to the couch to lie her down.

Author's Note:

I wanted to thank Sunny Scriber for once again doing such a great job proof reading because no matter how much I try to find all the mistakes I still manage to miss a bunch of them. I also want to thank him for all the advice on improving my writing and scenes in the story to make it better as well as writing the descriptions for the girls new transformation. I also want to thank HarmonicPriest for all the help and story ideas he has given as well as the awesome omakes that can be found in the comment sections of Tuesday Dec 20 d and Wednesday Dec 21 d. Thank you both very much!