For years, Hitch Trailblazer believed many things about Unicorns and Pegasi that he now realizes were complete lies. After escaping Zephyr Heights, he sits by a campfire and talks with his former enemies. Can this be real? Yes, it is. And now it was time for him to do better.
But sleep? Ah, sleep is a more difficult thing to achieve when one has emotional turmoil. Wouldn't you agree? And what is more, looking back to the past can be most painful. Does Hitch have to face this guilt alone? No. There is one who may be able to comfort him.
A certain white pegasus princess.
(Hitch X Zipp Oneshot)
Chapters (1)
I tried to warn you. I can’t keep associating with somepony who breaks every rule and causes chaos wherever she goes. I’m the Sheriff!
All of that pony unity stuff was just a foals bedtime story made up by your dad.
I’m the last real friend you’ve got in this town. You really wanna lose me too?
Yeah I remember that how hurtful that was I mean I get what he's coming from but still it was pretty painful to say that
“Cancer.” Hitch said with a frown. “Sunny was devastated. At least I was there for her then. I just…couldn’t let her be alone. When we were younger, those two were inseparable.
It is so sad that's sunny lost her father there was so many theories about that but still doesn't change the fact that he is gone
I got to say this is a pretty nice story especially your first story not bad so we kind of know what happened during the scene of the camp with the main five but hitch is starting to feel guilty for what happened in the past and specially what he said to Sunny after the disaster of the Canterlogic and basically staring at the stars trying to make himself feel better but he still feels guilty until Zipp came along and they basically talk to each other how they felt about this whole situation and how they've been taught throughout their years about other ponies which both of them still regret for what happened although he was kind of cute that both of them kind of like each other lol yeah I like those shipping between those two but anyway he's starting to feel better same with zipp whatever happens throughout their Journey they're going to face it together again very nice story especially your first time keep up the good work
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I appreciate your kind words. This was the first completed Fanfic that I have written, and I decided to post it here. Thanks for giving it a chance.
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No problem 😊
Still not enough Zitch on this site.
And stories like this make me only want more.
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One of the reasons I wrote, and posted this Fic. Not enough StormBlazer stories. Plenty of PippXHitch and SunnyXHitch, a few IzzyXHitch(which i actually like to see sometimes), but when it comes to ZippXHitch, it's really rare here. So I thought I would contribute.
Always a pleasure to see another Stormblazer story. I was actually a Pitch shipper when G5 started out but Hitch and Zipp have so much chemistry in the movie/show that it made me come around.
Very sweet story. Though I can't help but feel this point would be a little too early for them to develop feelings for each other. And Hitch blurting out about how beautiful he thought Zipp was felt really awkward. But nevertheless, very good and well written story and another win for the Stormblazer community!
Nice work.
While I have to say that the dialogue is a little awkward at times, overall this isn't half bad for your first story. And I know I'm not the first to say it, it is nice to see another Stormblazer fic. Well done.
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Yes, I figured some would say that, and honestly I agree. As I was writing, I realized that it probably would have been fine to just have them talking and not have any 'shippy' moments between them. Regardless of that, my original intent for writing this was to have a StormBlazer shipping story, and I would have been damned if I didn't fulfill that.
Ah, nice story, thank you for writing this.
As a shipper of Hitch and Zipp, this story gets my thumbs up.
That was nice little story extending the campfire scene in a fun way.
That was cute!
To the tune of high on a feeling:
I really enjoyed that!
I really liked it!
Pony cha cha pony cha cha!
This was fantastic! This little interlude was EXACTLY what I was hoping to see in the film; slightly more mature moments and more character development. Went back and reread it three times. SO much better than my own work; I'm envious.
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I’m flattered, really, but I consider your writing to be far superior to this. I appreciate the kind words though!