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This story is an alternate take on the episode "Inspiration Manifestation."

After stealing a mysterious old book from the ancient castle of the princesses deep within the Everfree forest, Spike is transformed into a handsome unicorn prince. The drake then uses his new body to woe Rarity to make her believe he is a lost prince. With his newfound magic, he creates a manor in Canterlot to make the lies believable. But as his power increases and the lies become more elaborate. Twilight researches the truth about the enchanted book's origins and learns that Rarity is the only one who can break the curse. But that would also mean breaking Spike's heart.

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Spike you lying son of a dog you are going get so much trouble for this

Poor Spike.

It occurs to me that if he was a ounce less loyal, he could have took off without informing Twilight at all.

And that's going to be the thing that sinks his happily ever after.

The description alone makes me feel as though this is going to all collapse at the worst possible moment, Fawlty Towers style. I'm on for this ride.

This is a promising start and I’m looking forward to how this develops. Just some quick corrects you’re referring to a stallion at the beginning but if I’m not wrong Spike isn’t a stallion yet so it’s a bit confusing.

Hahaha oh boy! Spike is lucky, Spike is lucky this isn't rated more mature! Twilight is gonna go Chris Hansen on his flank! Not gonna lie, Twilight would do awesome in the FBI! She can smell fear!

Spike then galloped out of the house with his mane flowing over his body when he opened the door. Twilight turned towards the doorway and shouted, "and Spike!?"

"Yeah?"

Twilight glared daggers at him and said, "don't mess with Rarity."

Twilight sounds like she's gonna sliced off someone's dick if Rarity gets raped. :pinkiegasp:

But then the door to her library was suddenly thrown wide open as a rather sexy-looking unicorn stallion burst into the room. Twilight flew upward with her horn glowing as she shouted, "who the buck are you!? And what do you want!?"

Man Twilight is very protective of her home and herself, Doesn't matter how good looking they are, She isn't infatuated or anything and she looks like someone who would break someone's face if they tried to molest somepony.

It's so funny what's going on with Spike then you have that the question is he still the good guy

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Spike? No. He wouldn’t dare hurt Rarity.

I don't really know, what to say to this.

After stealing a mysterious old book from the ancient castle of the princesses deep within the Everfree forest, he is transformed into a handsome unicorn prince.

Am I the only one on here who thought that the synopsis referred to somebody other than Spike when they first read it?

Aww! I'm glad Spike is okay. Even if he's got no chance with her and should probably start looking for romance elsewhere.

The details of Blueblood's date are also extremely hilarious especially about that bit of Rarity having to mommy Blueblood.

I really don't know how that was going to end any differently.

Comment posted by Phetiamwantip deleted Apr 8th, 2023
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