Rarity The Tomboy by FluttershyRocks and Madforce Entertainment

Rarity is the most popular girl at Canterlot High but she has a secret that no one else knows about. That is she is a tomboy and she also has a crush on Spike but once he finds out her secret he accepts it.

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Charlie_K

Charlie_K #1 · Jan 8th, 2023 · · · Rarity’s Backstory ·

Tomboy Rarity?

I approve of this idea.

FluttershyRocks

FluttershyRocks #2 · Jan 8th, 2023 · 1 · · Rarity’s Backstory ·

Yeah thanks it is my very first fanfic that was approved and this other guy is helping me out with it too.

Magic135

Magic135 #3 · Jan 8th, 2023 · · · Rarity’s Backstory ·

I like this idea.

FluttershyRocks

FluttershyRocks #4 · Jan 8th, 2023 · 1 · · Rarity’s Backstory ·

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Yeah thanks I came up with it and had help too.

narusakufan

narusakufan #5 · Jan 9th, 2023 · 1 · · Rarity’s Backstory ·

This is a really great idea. I can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work.

FluttershyRocks

FluttershyRocks #6 · Jan 9th, 2023 · 1 · · Rarity’s Backstory ·

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Yeah thanks it is a good story so far but got to come up with what is going to happen in the next chapter.

Richard79

Richard79 #7 · Jan 9th, 2023 · 1 · · Rarity’s Backstory ·

I remember this idea being talked about. It is a different twist on Sparity.

FluttershyRocks

FluttershyRocks #8 · Jan 9th, 2023 · 1 · · Rarity’s Backstory ·

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Yeah it definitely is and a great idea too.

Dalek-Galvo

Dalek-Galvo #9 · Jan 22nd, 2023 · 1 · · Rarity’s Backstory ·

This is a very good story, good job on your part.

FluttershyRocks

FluttershyRocks #10 · Jan 22nd, 2023 · 1 · · Rarity’s Backstory ·

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Yeah thanks very much still trying to think of what is going to happen in Chapter 2 though.

Mystic Sunrise

Mystic Sunrise #11 · Apr 16th, 2023 · 4 · 4 · Rarity’s Backstory ·

Rarity The Tomboy

Here's the story title done correctly.

Rarity is the most popular girl at Canterlot High but she has a secret. She is a tomboy, and she also has a crush on Spike.
Once he discovers it, however, he doesn't mind.

And there's your description fixed. It's a mess as you have it now. When it's this bad up front, I can't even imagine what needs fixing in the story itself.

Daybreaker218