• Published 8th Jan 2023
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Rarity The Tomboy by FluttershyRocks and Madforce Entertainment - FluttershyRocks



Rarity has a secret that no one knows about that is she is an tomboy

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Rarity’s Backstory

Author's Note:

Check out my very first story on my own and say what you think of it.

Long ago Rarity had a secret that no one else knew about and when she was little. She loved to play with all of the boys, she also loved to play football and played on her local sports teams too.

Rarity and her friend Trixie were sitting around on the playground of their elementary school

“Rarity what do you want to play today?” Trixie asked

Rarity thinks, “Why don’t we play with action figures and I heard that the most popular ones out there now are GI JOES”

“How do you know about those Rarity?” Trixie asked with a raised brow.

“My older brother Fancy Pants has a whole collection of them and I like to play with them in secret.” Rarity replied snarking.

Trixie laughed, “Oh that is really amazing Rarity I will definitely want to go and see if I can find them or buy some at all if I am able to.”

They heard the bell rings. “Well Trixie recess is over, we have to go back inside our classroom before our teacher Cinch gets mad at us for no reason again like she always does.” Rarity sighed, wanting to play with her friend.

“Yep, I can see her coming already.” Trixie stood up off the ground.

Trixie and Rarity run back to their classroom and they see that Cinch is teaching a class and reading a story. But during that time Rarity is secretly reading a Power Ponies comic which she really likes a lot.

Rarity fell asleep and started dreaming about being in the world of her comic book.
she saw the Power Ponies in the flesh then Rarity was speechless. “Wow I can’t believe it, I am interacting with the Power Ponies! This is really incredible and awesome!”

Rarity has a great adventures in her comic book and then she suddenly wakes up from her nap, by an angry Cinch. Rarity returned home after having detention for napping in class

Rarity returned to an empty house, because her parents were on their honeymoon, No her brother was out. Rarity decided to go out and have some fun. She decided to wear a purple leather jacket, with a hat, purple jeans and a black t-shirt.

“Ah I am really hungry, hopefully I can find something to eat around this town and that is cheap!” She exclaimed.

Rarity decides to go to a diner and order a soda, cheeseburger, and French fries.

She eats the burger and fries first, then chugs down a soda and then does a really loud burp which she then blushes from it.

“That was a good one whoever did that!” Rarity heard Snowflake call out.

Rarity feels proud of her belch, she decides to order a sundae and then calls Trixie while she is at the dinner. “Hey Trixie wanna hang out at your place and play video games?” She asked

“Okay Rarity, but I want to show you what I am practicing for the talent show.”

This got rarity’s attention. “Nice! see you soon Trixie.” Rarity hang up.
“So Trixie is entering the talent show huh?”

Rarity finishes her food and starts to walk to Trixie’s house and is humming a song.
She really likes humming to herself while she walks. She soon reached Trixie’s home and rings the door bell.

JackPot answered the door, who is Trixie’s dad and is the most successful magician in all of Canterlot and his daughter Trixie wants to follow in his footsteps.

“Hi there Rarity, are you looking for?” Jackpot asked.

“I am, she said she wanted to show me something.” Rarity replied, smiling.

“Trixie she is in her room right now getting ready.” Jackpot explains. “Do you want me to call her?”

“No, I’ll walk up and see her.” Rarity said, entering the house. She walks up the stairs and heads towards Trixie’s room, she knocked on the door.

“Who knocks on Trixie’s door?” Trixie called from the other side.

Rarity smiled. “Pizza guy!” She called back.

The door opened and Trixie stood on the other side, wearing a magician’s outfit.

"That is a wonderful magician hat and cape.” Rarity decided. “who made it for you?"

"My mom did" said Trixie "she is not alive anymore she died a couple of years ago."

"Oh yeah,” rarity forgot about that. “I am very sorry for your loss," She said.

“Yeah, I still really miss her a lot, and she was the one who gave me this outfit. Taught me everything about magician stuff.” Trixie explains, sounding Nostalgic “So I’m going to dedicate my performance at the school talent show to my mom.” Said Trixie.

Rarity hugs Trixie, who hugs back. “Thanks Rarity.”

“Any time Trix.” Rarity said, Finishing the hug.

“Here sit, and I’ll show you my act.” Trixie said, to Rarity who sat on the bed.

Trixie shows Rarity her act. “What a great show Trix. But it looks like you’re having some problems at times.” Rarity commented, giving her criticism.

Trixie sighes, “True, I definitely need an assistant to help me with my performance.” She admitted, then she got an idea. “Hey Rarity, why don’t you help me?”

Rarity looks at Trixie, with a raised eyebrow. “You want me to be your assistant?”

“Yes.” Trixie nodded. “You saw my act, and I trust with all my magician’s secrets. Plus,” Trixie pulled out a magician assistant outfit, the bottom half was a leotard with fish-net stockings, and the top half was a tuxedo like. “This would definitely suit you.” She explains smiling like a giddy school girl.

Rarity looks at the outfit, then looks at Trixie, she would never wear this kind of outfit, but this act of Trixie is for her deceased mother. She smiled at her friend. “I would be honored to be your assistant.” Rarity said, accepting to be Trixie’s assistant for her act.

Trixie threw her arms around Rarity. “Thank you Rarity!” She hugs the tomboy like a stress ball.

“You-” Rarity gasped. “Welcome.” She pats Trixie’s head.

“Okay, Rarity, let's get started with our act.” Trixie said, with stars in her eyes.

Rarity and Trixie practice act for the talent show.

Comments ( 13 )

Tomboy Rarity?

I approve of this idea.

Yeah thanks it is my very first fanfic that was approved and this other guy is helping me out with it too.

I like this idea.

11472646
Yeah thanks I came up with it and had help too.

This is a really great idea. I can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work.

11473373
Yeah thanks it is a good story so far but got to come up with what is going to happen in the next chapter.

I remember this idea being talked about. It is a different twist on Sparity.

11473518
Yeah it definitely is and a great idea too.

This is a very good story, good job on your part.

11485759
Yeah thanks very much still trying to think of what is going to happen in Chapter 2 though.

Rarity The Tomboy

Here's the story title done correctly.

Rarity is the most popular girl at Canterlot High but she has a secret. She is a tomboy, and she also has a crush on Spike.

Once he discovers it, however, he doesn't mind.

And there's your description fixed. It's a mess as you have it now. When it's this bad up front, I can't even imagine what needs fixing in the story itself.

11558920
There’s plenty of ways you could have said that without coming across as a dick

Does anyone want to help me with this fanfic?

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