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"When the buckled girder lets down the grinding span, the blame of loss, or murder, is laid upon the man." - Julia Ecklar & Leslie Fish

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For most, Hearth's Warming is a momentous occasion. For those on one train ride to the Crystal Empire, it is the worst moment of their lives.

For some, their last.

For me, it is most certainly one of my worst.


Based on the events of December 24th, 1953. This story is dedicated to the 151 passengers who lost their lives aboard the 3PM express train from Wellington to Auckland.

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Comments ( 6 )

Time slows as the engine leaves the rails. It soars across the river and plows into the embankment on the other side, burying itself in water and snow.

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The real-life story is so tragic, I can't read it any further...

Not bad, I think you need to work on your transitions between characters, but otherwise it was pretty good.

Una

It's a shame that the train didn't see/care about the guy holding the flashlight as a warning for them.

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