For most, Hearth's Warming is a momentous occasion. For those on one train ride to the Crystal Empire, it is the worst moment of their lives.
For some, their last.
For me, it is most certainly one of my worst.
Based on the events of December 24th, 1953. This story is dedicated to the 151 passengers who lost their lives aboard the 3PM express train from Wellington to Auckland.
2022 - 1953 = 69
Nice.
The real-life story is so tragic, I can't read it any further...
Aww shit here we go again.
Not bad, I think you need to work on your transitions between characters, but otherwise it was pretty good.
It's a shame that the train didn't see/care about the guy holding the flashlight as a warning for them.
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