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Cackling Moron


"Fluff" in the same way what collects under the sofa is fluff.

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Peter and Sponge Pudding are friends. They've been friends for basically their whole lives. Buds. Pals. Inseparable. Gone from simply hanging around one another as kids to now living together as young persons.

Their individual weekends plans have been scuppered, however, and now they have to make the most of things.

With predictable results.

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Comments ( 30 )

Absolutely wonderful.

It's nice. Too fast paced for me, though.

This Peter hadn’t seen coming. Few rarely saw food poisoning coming. The world’s worst surprise party, where you were the party popper. So to speak.

I thought this said "party pooper", and now I'm dissapointed

Thanks for this! I was just wondering the other day when you'd post something.

“Because I’m a pony?” Pudding asked, pouncing, eyes flashing at him.

I mean, if he wanted kids that might be a concern.:unsuresweetie:

What do human/pony hybrids look like in your universe anyhow?:rainbowhuh:

Soon after they’d started this, Peter’s phone started to buzz in his pocket so, without looking, he took it out and tossed it (gently) across the room so it could buzz somewhere less distracting.

They could leave a message, whoever they were.

Ouch.:applecry:

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Didn't want to overlabour it, but it's a fine line I'll admit.

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The pooping is implied. It's euphemistic poopery.

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I think it's probably best we don't dwell too much on the specific biological consequences of any of this.

And then the Spanish Inquisition kicked the door in! :pinkiegasp:

But they were the Alt Universe Rule 34 Spanish Inquisition! WHO ALSO HAD TENTACLES!! :fluttershbad:

Things got weird... :rainbowhuh: REALLY weird... :applejackconfused: Like, Doujin Central Weird... :twilightoops:

Afterward, everyone blamed Discord, and they were right! :trollestia:

I found two overt Simpsons references. Was I meant to find more?

Aww, this was cute. I like your style, by the way.

I, too, share your weakness for longtime relationships developing romantic, reciprocal affections, and happy endings.

Thank you for delivering.

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I mean, there's probably gonna be a bit of that, too.

> “I tidied it up first, I sweat,” Peter said, heading for the television.

Perhaps he meant “swear”?

Nice fluffy adorable story, like a fluffy blanket for the winter days. I've been finding a new weakness of myself, and that is ponies wriggling or worming their selves into places or away from them, depending of the situation.

Great stuff, cute and sweet and heartwarming in all the right ways.

they did live a gnat’s whisker away from a Tesco (who didn’t in this day and age?).

The most British line I've ever read

ROBCakeran53
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Fantastic little story. Wonderful job, now get back to Johns!

ROBCakeran53
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If I can wait this long for Half Life 3 then I'm sure I can manage that.

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I blame the beer and that Playstation main menu...

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Very much the narrative purpose of the beer.

In vino, uh, fluffitas

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for what it's worth, I think it's a good length. Shows a short and sweet snippet of friendship coming to a head and transforming into love. It would, of course, be good as a longer story, but I don't think it's too short either

I cannot stress enough how much I love your writing style. I can always count on one of your stories to lift my spirits

A rematch occurred though results were much the same, and conversation by turns moved beyond Pudding’s (obvious) cheating, through a brief discussion on what year the game came out in, thence to the sort of things that had been going on in their lives at the time, back when they’d been young and innocent and footloose (hoofloose?) and fancy-free.

Wonder where ive heard those same words said before?? About a pretty pony princess retiring maybe?? Nah im just reaching probably.

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