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Vivid Syntax

Convention Runner, Statistician, and lover of all things Soarburn


"Hey there, Pippsqueaks! Tune in this Saturday for a very special livestream. We're raising money to fix up the beach after somepony messed it all up, and we have a ton of events and performances you won't want to miss!"

Pipp helps a friend raise money for charity. It goes poorly.

A quick, random palate cleanser between projects. Enjoy!

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 21 )

This is very good. I'm giving you six stars for doing a good job. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

Thank you kindly! Glad you enjoyed it. :twilightsmile:

What's the point of the second person intro? Unless it comes back later, though given the sheer randomness of this chapter, I'm not sure.

This is perfect!! So happy for sprout love!! I want more of it!!!!

Also is there more to this, or just the one chapter??

Drunk alicorn Sunny might be my new favorite thing.

Loved it! I really want to see more!

Good question! I wanted to establish the entire story as one continuous "shot" to make it feel all the more chaotic, but with a through-line that we're watching it through a very limited lens.

Glad you enjoyed it! And my mistake, I forgot to mark it "completed." I've been away from FF for a while. :twilightsheepish:

It's alright.

I hope you do more with sprout!!

This was fun, despite the frantic pacing. In that sense, it fits the G5 source material.

This hits the perfect balance between manic off-the-walls hilarity and surprisingly serious characterization. Well done! I shall donate one Derpy to Pipp's FUN-raiser :derpytongue2:

Can you tell I watched a bunch of "Tell Your Tale" right before writing this? :rainbowlaugh:

Thank you kindly! Your donation is being matched! :derpytongue2:

This was such a fun story! I could totally see this as an episode of the show! :eeyup:

Thanks! That's what I was going for. :scootangel:

This was so good. The way you captured the chaotic energy of the whole group was genius. I was laughing out loud throughout this entire story. I can definately see this as an actual tell your tale episode. Well done! :D

Thank you so much! "Tell Your Tale" has really grown on me. Glad I captured the spirit of it. :twilightsmile:

Nice, I like it.

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