Dark Chapter 4: Attack on Kindness
Luster tried desperately to stop the bleeding of her Aunt Trixie with her magic. Then there was a knock on the door far away that echoed through the castle halls. That had to be her four friends! She couldn’t leave her aunt! But- maybe with the magic of friendship she could heal Trixie!
Struggling to use the first aid spell she’d been taught while also teleporting herself and Trixie to the door. She opened the door and her friends, River Song the Kirin, Yelena the Yak, Georgia the Griffon, and Gallop J. Fry the Earth Pony and her coltfriend, entered. They looked happy seeing her for a split second, but it vanished as they saw Trixie in her current state.
“Luster, what happened to Trixie?” River Song screamed.
“Cozy Glow escaped from Tartarus and did this!” Luster said. “Quick we need to use the magic of friendship!”
All her friends nodded and stood beside her. Luster called upon the magic of their bond, the one that had taken a little time to create and grow confidence in. Grogar had given her a spark that finally allowed her to use it years ago when she’d defeated him. But now she could call upon it at will. Rainbow magic flew from them into Trixie, they urged it to heal her. The stab wound vanished, though there was still a small mark. But the bleeding stopped and Trixie was still breathing. She might need a blood transfusion!
“We need to get her to the hospital!” Luster said. “I’ll take her, can you guys alert my mom?”
They nodded again and Gallop, being the fastest of them, ran off. Luster then teleported off with her aunt to make sure she received any help she needed.
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Cozy Glow grinned. Trixie was down, now she needed to get someone close to Discord.
“You see that Chrysalis! I destroyed Starlight Glimmer’s best friend!” she yelled.
“I’m so proud of you!” Chrysalis spoke through her.
“Now I’m gonna go get revenge for you Tirek!” Cozy promised.
“It’s Lord Tirek! But you better!”
“Oh, I’m gonna!” Cozy said.
She found the place she was bound for next. Fluttershy’s animal sanctuary. It was filled with deer, rabbits, birds and others.
“First, I’m gonna cause Fluttershy some pain! By hurting her animals! Then I’m gonna hurt her!” Cozy yelled as she swooped down at the sanctuary spear ready.
Evil laughter filled the air and spooked many of the animals who began running around. Cozy thrusted her spear at a baby rabbit who just barely hopped away in time. The critters ran and she chased after them, throwing her spear at a deer. It struck and injured but didn’t kill. Cozy grinned, her bloody eyes lighting up.
“What is happening?” A familiar voice asked in surprise nearby.
Cozy turned, her psychotic grin intensifying. Fluttershy’s mouth fell open in in terror.
“Cozy Glow?” she asked.
“That’s right!” Cozy said as she pulled her spear out of the wounded deer.
The animal cry caused Fluttershy to tear up. “Why are you doing this?”
Cozy’s only response to was to point the tip of her weapon at the former Element of Kindness. Or was she still an element? It was hard to say since the elements had been destroyed, yet she’d been able to do without one. Ah well didn’t matter, cause when Cozy was done with her she’d be a dead pony.
Fluttershy looked at the spear and realization hit her as to what Cozy Glow wanted. The younger pegasus flew while the more middle aged one did as well. Fluttershy tried to flee in order to save her own life, but just as Cozy had told her in the battle of the bell, she was not the fast one. Cozy easily caught up with her, her spear thrusting into her former professor’s wing. Fluttershy screamed in pain and fell to the ground only a few feet below. Cozy grinned as she saw her next intended victim.
“You’ve always been the timid one, haven’t you?” She asked, knowing it to be true. “Always staying low to the ground unless you had absolutely no choice. Well, it looks like you’re going to be one of the few Pegasi to ever fall to their demise!”
She put her spear on the ground and then seized Fluttershy, hoisting the older mare up with her well-developed muscles that she’d acquired in prison. Flapping upward, she ascended high into the sky as Fluttershy struggled, blood coming out her wounded wing that could no longer support her. Cozy easily held on, and Fluttershy shook in fear as she looked down.
“This looks like a good spot to let you off at! Sayonara!” Cozy screamed in delightful vengeance.
And she released Fluttershy who screamed as she plummeted toward the ground to her inevitable demise.
Or what should have been inevitable.
Out of nowhere, two creatures appeared. Ocellus and Silverstream! The changeling and hippogriff caught the pegasus before she could collide with the ground.
“We’ve got you Fluttershy!” Silverstream said.
“Don’t worry!” Ocellus said.
They set her down the grass safely.
“Oh, thank you,” she said to her former students.
Cozy growled and flew off, living to fight another day and cause more suffering to her enemies. She vanished into the Everfree as the Young 5 looked after her.
"I think we're gonna need Gallus to come and help us out!" Silverstream said.
"This time Yona and friends defeat Cozy Glow for good!" Yona said.
Ocellus looked down. "I hate to have to take some creature's life. But from what we heard from Luster and saw just now we might have no choice. Cozy is much more dangerous now. That look in her eyes!"
"She's gone madder than a dragon who had his gem horde robbed!" Smolder said.
We got to stop her before she hurts any creature else. Come on, Starlight can contact Twilight and have her send Gallus!"
The Young 5 flew back to the Castle of Friendship to pass the news onto Starlight.
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Ocellus
Well apparently cozy glow did not figure this thing out knowing that she will get overpowered and despite they tried to stop her they had no choice to put her down and that's always a tough call but when they threaten and kill it's either her or the innocent lives and she went down and it was nice to see the young six to fight her off I got to say I still like the lighter version of the stories of the villains actually have a chance to redeem themselves but other than that this was a good story keep up the good work
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Oh thanks for that wasn't sure entirely how to spell it.
A bit sad that you changed your mind. I mean he way you made Cozy Glow stronger in the years she spend in her cell, I thought she be a bit stronger than Bulk Biceps, strong enough to stop a Yak from crashing on her and use Yona as a living club against her friends but its your decision. I thought you would make Cozy's final words will be this "I'm doing this because of friendship! You used it to kill my family and I'll never stop until all of you pay!!!"
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Oh she wasn't quite that strong. Sorry if it disappointed you but it would have been too short I think.
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Though maybe I should consider splitting them up and trying to expand. Yona crushing her was the death for Cozy I planned though.
welp, that happened. the dark version feel too short and rushed. It would be poor compared to the Light version.
.. Noone knows and even ask themself why Cozy go stab people, why she do that? Why a Mare using mind and trick now just go for brute force, without planning, thinking,...
the story can be summarized like this:
>Cozy escape prison
>Cozy go to a house
>Cozy stab someone
>Cozy go to another house
>Cozy stab animals
>Cozy fight Young Six
>Cozy dies
Even the light version has Epilogue and shows us what happened after everything, but the dark only has, well, darkness
I feel like the dark version just exists so we can call the other version "Light"
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Well I don't have other main characters to use like Chrysalis and Tirek to draw it out as much in the dark. I'm lucky to have made for chapters instead of just three like I originally planned. Cozy is mainly just pulling off a one mare show here. Also she has gone insane now and is just out to cause as much pain as she can. I think based on reviews for both this and other stories I'm just a fast paced writer. Looks like the dark version is disappointing quite a few people. Ah well what can I do?
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Well there's gonna be a rewrite and expansion for this. I don't think I'll be able to get more then 2 or 3 chapters at most. I've updated this chapter to have Cozy escape, which is what I first thought of but my instincts told me to do otherwise. Guess they were wrong.