A Teapot for Christmas

by TheOneAJ

Chapter 1

“Deck the halls,” Sunset Shimmer hummed as she walked down the Canterlot street, red bow lidded box in hand. “Lalallal, lalalala!”

It was a snowy day in the city, fresh snowflakes falling to ground. Enough to make for a picturesque setting, but not enough where it was too much of an inconvenience for anyone other than postal workers. Children played in the park all the winter games one would in their youth, as the adults shoveled, while the teenagers gathers near store windows to gossip about the later fashion trends and drink hot chocolate. On some occasions, couples were holding hands and wore bright smiles on their faces. Sunset having passed by Lyra and Bon Bon, Flash Sentry and Derpy Hoovers, Sonata Dusk and Octavia Melody (of all couples), Wiz Kid and Curly Winds, she even thought she saw Big Mac with Ms. Cheerlie! But then realized it was a different girl from Crystal Prep. Plus, many more looking cheery and gay as their faces blushed from being closest to the ones that they loved this time of year.

Sunsets attention, however, was on her friends. This year, she would be spending most of her holiday break with her family and with Celestia back in Equestria, but not before exchanging gifts with all of her friends.

For Applejack, she had gotten her zap apple jam casserole. She had never seen the farm girls eyes widen as much as they did so from eating apples before. Which, unfortunately, as much as Sunset love to have told Applejack how to make and grow zap apples, it had to in the end be accepted that the magic apples could only harvested in Equestria.

Fluttershy was given a magic comb that would brush her animals by itself. A very handy tool for when Angel Bunny was being a bit too fussy and the poor girl had her hands full. That bunny could be very demanding, so any means to easy Fluttershy’s burden was a blessing.
For Rainbow Dash, a simple basketball that would always return to its owner made the sports star happy. Now she could play H.O.R.S.E. (once Rainbow Dash had explained the game to Sunsets dismay) and never had to fetch the ball again!
Rarity and Pinkie Pie had been a bit more difficult though.

In the end, Sunset had decided a makeup, non-magical, worked well for the fashionista. Which it didn’t poses such mystical properties, her friend was more than happy to give Sunset a big hug before the bacon haired girl went in her way.
Pinkie Pie on the other hand, was given a pack of self inflating balloons, slightly magical, that turned out was all the party girl needed.

With each present given brought a warm snug feeling to Sunset that made her ever more jolly as she made her way to her last friends house, Twilight Sparkle, the adorkable glasses wearing bookworm.

Twilight‘s house was hard to miss, with all the festive lights hung around the house, and a nativity scene out front with several animals and people huddled together around a crib. The crushed bush where Twilight’s brother, Shining Armor, had fallen into when trying to set up the lights. It had apparently been a good laugh on behalf of Twilight’s sister-in-law Cadence.

Sunset walked up the driveway, past the plastic animals, to the door, and knocked gingerly. A moment later, she was greeted by her purple friend.

“Hey, Twilight,” Sunset with a smile.

“Sunset!” Twilight smiled back, pulling Sunset into a hug. “Happy heartwarming, Sunset!”

“Happy hearthwarming to you too, twi. I thought I’d come by and get all my gifts to my friends before I head to equestria.”

“Aw, that’s so sweet,” her best friend smiled back. “Come on in, and I’ll make you some hot chocolate.”

Sunset held up a hand and smirked. “Actually, hold off on the ‘hot’ chocolate for a bit.”

Twilight titled her head. “Huh?”

“You’ll see in a minute,” Sunset teased, stepping inside.

The two friends made their way to the kitchen, where they sat down at the the table and to which Twilight opened the present.

“Oh,” Twilight said, upon removing the last of the paper, revealing a red brass kettle. “It’s a teapot!”

“Not just any teapot,” Sunset mused. “Give it here, and why don’t you set up two, empty, cups on the table along with those hot chocolate packs?”

“Okay,” Twilight said slowly, by doing so quickly to see what this was all about.

“Now, it sounds empty,” Sunset demonstrated once Twilight set the cups down, swishing around the clearly empty pot for emphasis. “But!” she then pointed to a dial under the kettle that had a scale from blue that increased to red with it being white in the middle where the switch was pointed at. “Just turn it to where you want,” she adjusted it halfway towards the red, “then, pour for endless water!”

Twilight’s eyes widened was the previously empty teapot poured warm water into the cups.

“Oh wow!” Twilight exclaimed. “I didn’t know magic could do that!”

“Yup. Abra Kadabra, alakazak!” Sunset teased. “It never runs dry. It can guarantee strawberries seven feet high.”

Twilight paused to blink at that statement.

“It’s how the can was advertised,” Sunset explained.

“Ah,” Twilight nodded. “Guess cheesy advertising exist in both worlds.”

“Yeah,” Sunset smiled as she switch the teapot to off before pouring in her coco mix, stiring clockwise six times before blowing off the steam. “At least it didn’t say it would get your kids off the computer.”

They both shared a laugh at that.

“Anyways,” Sunset continued. “I thought you might like it, both as a hot drink maker, as well the cold water feature for watering pants. Also, I figured your dorky little mind would also have fun for hours figuring out how it works.”

“You know me too well,” Twilight blushed, holding a hand to her face.

Sunset leaned over to give her best friend a hug. “Thank you, Sunset Shimmer! Happy hearths warming!”

Sunset, feeling a warm fire rise in her belly, hugged back. “Happy hearths warming to you too, Twilight Sparkle.”

❤️ 🤗

Author's Note:

Based the teapot idea on this

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Comments

[MatTheBook]

Twilight‘s house was hard to miss, with all the festive lights hung around the house, and a nativity scene out front with serval animals and people huddled together around a crib. The crushed bush where Twilight’s sister, Shining Armor, had fallen into when trying to set up the lights. It had apparently been a good laugh on behalf of Twilight’s sister in law Cadence.

Shining armor is male

[TheOneAJ]

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Indeed, he, is XD

[ScisetShimmerEvan]

It was a snowy day in the city, fresh snowflakes falling to ground. Enough to make for a picturesque setting, but not enough where it was too much of an inconvenience for anyone other than postal workers. Children played in the park all the winter games one would in their youth, as the adults shoveled, while the teenagers gathers near store windows to gossip about the later fashion trends and drink hot chocolate. On some occasions, couples were holding hands and wore bright smiles on their faces. Sunset having passed by Lyra and Bon Bon, Flash Sentry and Derpy Hoovers, Sonata Dusk and Octavia Melody (of all couples), Wiz Kid and Curly Winds, she even thought she saw Big Mac with Ms. Cheerlie! But then realized it was a different girl from Crystal Prep. Plus, many more looking cheery and gay as their faces blushed from being closest to the ones that they loved this time of year.

falling to the ground.*

For Applejack, she had gotten her zap apple jam casserole. She had never seen the farm girls eyes widen as much as they did so from eating apples before. Which, unfortunately, as much as Sunset love to have told Applejack how to make and grow zap apples, it had to in the end be accepted that the magic apples could only harvested in Equestria.

could only be harvested in Equestria.*

Fluttershy was given a magic comb that would brush her animals by itself. A very handy tool for when Angel Bunny was being a bit too fussy and the poor girl had her hands full. That bunny could be very demanding, so any means to easy Fluttershy’s burden was a blessing. For Rainbow Dash, a simple basketball that would always return to its owner made the sports star happy. Now she could play H.O.R.S.E. (once Rainbow Dash had explained the game to Sunsets dismay) and never had to fetch the ball again! Rarity and Pinkie Pie had been a bit more difficult though.

2 spaces are needed following the paragraphs.
ease, not easy.

In the end, Sunset had decided a makeup, non-magical, worked well for the fashionista. Which it didn’t poses such mystical properties, her friend was more than happy to give Sunset a big hug before the bacon haired girl went in her way. Pinkie Pie on the other hand, was given a pack of self inflating balloons, slightly magical, that turned out was all the party girl needed.

A space is needed after the first paragraph.

Twilight‘s house was hard to miss, with all the festive lights hung around the house, and a nativity scene out front with serval animals and people huddled together around a crib. The crushed bush where Twilight’s brother, Shining Armor, had fallen into when trying to set up the lights. It had apparently been a good laugh on behalf of Twilight’s sister in law Cadence.

several*
sister-in-law*

“Sunset!” Twilight smiled back, pulling

Sunset into a hug. “Happy heartwarming, Sunset!”

These are supposed to be 1 sentence, not 2.

“Okay,” Twilight said slowly, bit doing so quickly to see what this was all about.

by not bit

Sunset leaned over to give her best friend a hug. “Thank you, Sunset Shimmer! Happy hearths warming!” Sunset, feeling a warm fire rise in her belly, hugged back. “Happy hearths warming to you too, Twilight Sparkle.”

Twilight leaned over*
And this should be 2 sentences not 1.

Overall, I enjoyed this story, but it has a lot of mistakes that need fixing.

[TheOneAJ]

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Was wondering when I see your comment XD
Maybe next time I should just hire you as a proof reader, but regardless;
Thanks for the love/comment ! ❤️ 🤗

[ScisetShimmerEvan]

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or get Grammarly.