Not so Friendly Prank

by chaos2012

Letter to Ponyville

Dear Rainbow Dash,

I have something that I would like to have help with here at Canterlot. it requires your set of skills, and I am sure you can handle it. Also, tell Pinkie Pie to come along as well, i need her help too.

Come quick. And tell Pinkie i need alot of chocolate.

From your Friend, Twilight.

Comments

[Tatsurou]

And tell Pinkie I need a lot of chocolate.

Oh boy, I'm looking forward to what happens next.

[SuperPinkBrony12]

Come quick. And tell Pinkie i need alot of chocolate.

Chocolate? Did you say chocolate?

[chaos2012]

3007081 yes sir. with or with out nuts?

3007062 lets see

[SuperPinkBrony12]

3007160 Chocolate, chocolate! CHOCOLATE! CHOCOLATE!

[Smirkythread]

Are the grammar mistakes just that or they a hint this isn't from Twilight?

[KingOfTheMuffins]

Any prank involving chocolate never works out. The only good ideas are tempting the target with chocolate or by causing severe weight gain with chocolate, and both are easily remedied...

And let's get real: it's worth it for chocolate.

[Noodle Cadoodle]

3007222 Well, unless you stick Half Melted dark chocolate on their seat right before they sit down.

[KingOfTheMuffins]

3007390

That's just diabolical and a terrible waste of chocolate. It'd probably end up like those Axe body spray commercials...

[Revelry]

It seems twilight is bringing in the big guns

[steampvnc1880]

Ah, the alot of chocolate. This rare and elusive beast was hunted nearly to extinction due to being made entirely of the confectionery. If anyone knows where to find one it's Pinkie Pie.

[Smirkythread]

3007762
To Twilight? All of it.

[Michael Ramsey]

Luna, Celestia, Discord, Twilight, Pinkie Pie, and Rainbow Dash?

I'm curious to see how big this prank war is going to get...

[Roarbox]

Oh my, this is certainly going to be interesting, and crazy, and a lot of other things.................
Looking forward to where this is headed.

[Ytak]

*cackles* This is promising.

[Gammer14]

YES! I was really hoping Twilight would bring Rainbow and Pinkie in on the prank war. After all, what better way to spice up your pranks then to join with your two best friends/ prankster and team up.

[Super-Brony12]

This story has been hilarious ever since I started reading it! And I can't wait to see what prank Twilight has planned that requires Rainbow Dash's and Pinkie Pie's help.

~ Super-Brony12

[sugarush13]

You should make scootaloo sneak along and get in the prank war with them

[A Madman With a Box]

Enlisting Rainbow and[iI] Pinkie? This can only end well...

[Farseer]

Oh dear. This isn't going to end well...

[fferror]

"it" at the start of a sentence, and two instances of "I", need capitals.

[StormyVenture]

I don't know, they could just encase Luna in it... Or just disguise a solid block of it as chocolate cake.

[19jburner]

3128847 I didnt know, im never on that part of YouTube...

[Inferno demon Dash]

Some errors I honestly doubt Twilight would make when writing but I can ignore it because it's such a short chapter

[Diamond264]

And so begins the hunt for an alot of chocolate. Will they find the common milk chocolate breed? Maybe its natural enemy, the chocolate milk? Possibly even little white chocolate alotlets? If they are lucky, they might find the rare, elusive rocky road with rainbow sprinkles and, the breed it has a natural balance with, the hot fudge alot. Ahh, the joys of alot hunting.

[Sluncuts]

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Dis Gon B Gud

[Thi Fernandes]

Ugh, here's another problem. You think you could have expanded this document a little bit? It's almost too lifeless. Maybe add a little dash of Spike giving the letter to Pinkie Pie and Rainbow Dash? Just a little bit of substance, not just 59 words.

[Kaffeina]

Luna and Discord pranking together is better than Discord and Twilight.

[Majk]

Welp, Twilights pranks may suck, but she sure knows how to pick right ponies for the right job.