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Mystic Mind


The greatest storyteller of our time, or just another smuck pony fan on the internet? YOU decide! (Also I do episode analysis sometimes.)

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This story is a sequel to Transitioning Love


It had to happen eventually. After finally confessing his long-standing crush on Rarity, Spike was inevitably rejected. With Twilight away, he had every intention of hiding himself away in the castle to brood, until a surprise visit from Ocellus offers him an alternative.

Smoulder is part of the Ponyville Miniature Railway Club, and could use an extra pair of claws to help out with locomotive maintenance. What this means for Spike's relationship woes, however, remains to be seen.


This story is a spin-off from one of my other stories, Transitioning Love. That story isn't required to understand this tale, but it will help to explain some later details.

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 13 )

What...What is she planning?

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Read the next chapter and find out :P.

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Alright...🕵‍♂️

Lovely chapters, I'm really enjoying this story not just for some of my favorite characters but also an interest I've had since I was small. Also learning things I didn't know about. Can't wait for more!:heart:

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More will be coming very soon! Everything has been edited for the second draft, and the second half of this story just needs to go through my proof reader =3.

Will the ponies, and the Princess’s take notice of the miniature railway?

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Twilight will, yes. For Celestia and Luna, they won't need to be informed because it's not all that important.

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All I’m saying is that the word of the miniature railway will spread across Equestria and the nations allied.

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Who's to say there aren't others in Equestria?

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The railroad system operates all over Equestria and outside its borders.

Ah such a wonderful story! I'm so glad I was able to see this ride to the end! Lovely story:heart:

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Thank you so much! This whole story is a big passion project. I may even return to this pairing at a later date, as I did for Yona X Sandbar.

We hope there will be more to come.

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