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bahatumay


Simultaneously able to type 94 wpm and still take five years to finish a story. If you're feeling generous, throw a ko-fi at me.

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Every town has its secrets, and Ponyville is no different. There are tales of a mysterious Party Pony, one who sneaks into houses and leaves cake for ponies’ birthdays. 

But nopony knows the truth.

She’s real. 

And she’s a lot friendlier than even the rumors say.


Written for the Choices contest.

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 8 )

This was very cute, feels just like the show. My boy Spike just wanted some cake, haha.

While I love the original Pinkie, I imagine many other people would have been less annoyed with her character if she only spoke in Eeees.

Ohhh. Wings, fangs, floofy ears and constant "eee"? I see how you do. This Pinkie sure is BATTY. X)

oh I am liking this

dude the ending was perfect the birthday pony(likely pinkie pie) is such a troll lol

I really love this story though! It's pretty funny, and I love the relationship between Twilight and the alleged "Birthday Pony"

Y'know, seeing Trap-light Sparkle at work, I always thought she and Pinkie would make for a good classic comedic slapstick animation duo. Something akin to Wile E Coyote hunting Bugs Bunny.

“Wait. She probably hasn’t played it before,” Spike realized. “She’s been hiding for years. She probably only watches parties, but never gets to go.”

Oh my heart! A Pinkie who's never been to a party?
That's so tragic, but it's so nice to see Twilight engaging with her :pinkiesad2:

Well, that was adorable.
I loved your presentation of Pinkie, and the fact she had such difficulty communicating, but still had the same enthusiasm and love for making ponies happy through cakes and games was truly heartwarming.
I feel like you could have done more with the confrontation with Nightmare Moon, but I could really call that the only flaw I could find. This story was a delight from start to finish, and it really feels a crime that your entry has gotten so little attention in comparison.

I'm sure she'll be Twilight too. :derpytongue2:

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