Taro returns to Equestria as additional aid in what Celestia fears could happen. He leaves Thatch to train the new dragon, and Isron to train the new rider. Taro is excited to see his friends again, and they, him. One pony, though, more happy than others. Taro's stay brings him more than just a fight.
Part 2 of a Trilogy
Note: This is a sequel. If you didn't read the first one, it can be found here: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/47990/The-Legacy-of-the-Rider
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one First and why didn't you tell me you made this seriously mon didn't I critique the first one you should've messaged me but if you don't want me critiquing this tell me I'll wait for your responce
..... PERVERT lolz
Discord you got me howling at the moon and sleeping in the middle of a summer afternoon
1392402 You picked an awful time to wait for a response. My laptop lost internet. I did, btw, tell you about it. Go back to Legacy of the Rider I. I told you about my typos in this one.
1392402 And check the description. I'm working on a third one.
1392402 In case you didn't get that, critique!
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My exact thoughts
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sorry I died for a while I'll start critiquing this
alright sorry for my weeks of inactivity I've been really busy with the leaders of the Chess Game of the Gods and it took time since I only work on weekends and I am starting to write my own story for them if they accept what I write that is... anyway I will do a few chapters of this all at once to make up for it. ONWARD TO THE RATING!!!!
pinkiegasp for the obvious Pinkie defying all a.k.a her knowing right where he would show up twilightsmile is a simple way of showing of being pleased of course of course (yes there was supposed to be two) rainbowlaugh for obvious scenes of laughter which all types of humor can enjoy (thats pretty hard to do) rainbowwild for anticipation of a great story and last but certaily not least rainbowdetermined2 ( my highest rating is all 5 of these) for the obvious implication that if Taro is there there will be chaos if not the explodey chocolate milk kind
well there was plenty of vodka for I had turned all the water supply into vodka and made it taste and not burn like water with using my magical magic magicly but of course
no no its fine the more the merrier. Despite my ability to take everything to far I am going to rate this now with a simple yet efficient
(yes there is a sixth my add-ins counted 
)but seriosly you got 5 rainbow laughs for the entire chapter practicly being one of akward yet hilarious discomfort at the exsspence of the protaganist
once again my magic vodka and before I forget 1325813electrokami.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/07/extra-life-blue-shell-mario-kart.jpg muahaha and jsut cause I can I shall improve on my last comment with
that and here is your rating Mr.Awesome
awwwww yeah seems to eplain that chapter rainbowhuh for the obvous initial confusion rainbowkiss for what happened afterward rainbowlaugh for Taro's inability to say no untill 10 at night and rainbowwild and rainbowdetermined for the not elaborate but actually explained fight (unlike others that just go yaay this is what happened) I think I might be done for the moment we shall see
Dun dun duuuun danger danger in this here area we all know whats going to happen next or do we
here is thou rating 
its a great chapter dear writer I just love how Taro is ignored throughout his responces