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Mockingbirb


A pony of mystery in the darkness. Or I forgot to take the lens cap off. (They/them is fine.)

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Spike's dog went missing for three years. The night after she came home, she helped him with his homework instead of eating it.

There's a story behind that.


Species Change AU: What if the unicorn Twilight Sparkle had been born a dog, in the human world? How would Princess Celestia cope?

There's some kind of "Species Change" event or something like that going on right now, idk. They're only allowing one story per author, so whatever.

(Art source: I edited a detail of an official MLP:FiM comic page that 'pencils' originally drew and 'SigmasonicX' uploaded to derpibooru.org.)

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 8 )

Wait.
So Cadence... and Sparky the dragon... who was actually a dog....

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I have no idea if this is bestiality or not...
And what happened to Cadence?

Aw, Sparky didn’t mean to squish Luna! She’s a good girl!

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I think the Harkness rules apply: as long as Sparky is an adult, intelligent, and consenting, then it’s kosher.

A friendly reminder that stories need to be submitted to the species change group page in order to be considered as an entry. :twilightsmile:

This story is hard to follow, or care about what's going on, with the very sudden turns in what's going on. A little bit of buildup to and elaboration on the spicier parts (Cadance and Luna), and callbacks to them in later scenes, could really help give a feeling of momentum.
Also, as is far too common nowadays, this story has a case of excessively-warning-based tagging; both the warning tags are unnecessary, and I'm even pretty sure this could actually be rated E!

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There are 2 other problems with this story qualifying...as far as I understand it, the species-swapped characters need to be recognizable in their personality, and them being a different species needs to result in a significant choice being made. Sparky to me is unrecognizable as Twilight, and I'm not sure that Celestia sending Sparky back counts choicewise.

need to know more

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