Blue faith

Earth was gone.

Humanity was gone.

Now all there was is color

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Fear · 15th Nov 2022 · 1,093 words
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Leave us alone · 16th Nov 2022 · 1,137 words
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Save me · 17th Nov 2022 · 1,018 words
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Lost hope · 18th Nov 2022 · 1,005 words
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Why? · 20th Nov 2022 · 906 words
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Resident. · 1st Apr 2023 · 1,025 words
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Share · 2nd Apr 2023 · 818 words
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FanOfSun

FanOfSun #1 · Nov 15th, 2022 · · · Fear ·

Damn...That's dark

Babycord

Babycord #2 · Nov 15th, 2022 · · 1 · Fear ·

I try lol

Sorentis Stars

Sorentis Stars #3 · Nov 16th, 2022 · · · Fear ·

Well…I’m looking forward to reading more I suppose even though it’s one of those DARK books.

MatTheBook

MatTheBook #4 · Nov 17th, 2022 · · · Fear ·

11423962
Let me quess

Conversion bureau?

MatTheBook

MatTheBook #5 · Nov 17th, 2022 · 2 · · Leave us alone ·

"Those dumb animals I killed the younger ones, making sure to break every bone in their tiny little bodies. I even went so far as to use my magic to slowly twist their spine until it snapped".

YOU MONSTER!!!

MatTheBook

MatTheBook #6 · Nov 17th, 2022 · 2 · · Leave us alone ·

"Unfortunately my lovely daughter didn't like that. No, not at all. Imagine my shock when she turned her blade against me while I was performing a sacred duty!"

WELL SHE MADE THE RIGHT CHOICE! WHAT YOU DID IS UNACCEPTABLE!

"I had no choice such an act of foolishness is punished by death!" So while she was hesitating I slammed my blade into her throat, and as she lays there dying in a pool of her blood I gifted her the blessing of a father's love".

"She died screaming".

You killed your own daughter with no remorse.

Babycord

Babycord #7 · Nov 17th, 2022 · · · Save me ·

I just took inspiration from stories I listened to awhile back lol

MatTheBook

MatTheBook #8 · Nov 19th, 2022 · · · Lost hope ·

And then all hell broke loose.

Equestria has truly fallen

MatTheBook

MatTheBook #9 · Nov 19th, 2022 · · · Lost hope ·

Olmon was munch the same but hid it well.

much

"Your wound should be alright, now all that's left is to gather otr things and leav as soon as possible".

leave

PLZ check for any errors before publishing

MatTheBook

MatTheBook #10 · Nov 19th, 2022 · · · Lost hope ·

In a world like there's there weren't many places a human can hide. Munch less two ponies who are clearly being closely watched by those who follow the crown. As such the only thing that came to mind was a few places that Flitter long forgotten.

theirs, much

Babycord

Babycord #11 · Nov 19th, 2022 · · · Lost hope ·

Thx

Rain_Flick3r

Rain_Flick3r #12 · Nov 19th, 2022 · · · Lost hope ·

So far so good. ^^

I like how the story is going. I can't wait to read more and see what happens and find out what happened.

I will admit there have been points from the second chapter to this one where I would be confused about who was talking.

Keep up the good work.

MatTheBook

MatTheBook #13 · Nov 20th, 2022 · · · Why? ·

Humanity may be gone, but there is a chance to fight back and reclaim planet Earth. If not then those left behind can leave a mark that can never be forgotten. One that seeps into this world's history like a bug crawling through your shirt.

There will always be light that will shine over the darkness

Glitched Grim

Glitched Grim #14 · Jan 17th, 2023 · · · Why? ·

As someone who isn’t patient in the slightest, I request MOOOORRREEE.

Glitched Grim

Glitched Grim #15 · Apr 1st, 2023 · · 1 · Resident. ·

Glad to see this story is alive, i really like the premise of it.

PirateLord93

PirateLord93 #16 · Apr 2nd, 2023 · · · Resident. ·

It wasn't long before something large wrapped its hands around her throat pushing her up against the wall and leaving her hooves dangling in the air.
"what do you want?"
Maud blinked locking eyes with the human. As well as noticing the two
pegasi in the background.
Ah, from what she's feeling it seems that her life might be on the line.
Maud smiles.
"Hello."

So what is this like a secret handshake or something? He was clearly expecting her.

Babycord

Babycord #17 · Apr 2nd, 2023 · · · Share ·

This one was kinda short due to me running out of ideas lol but overall I think it's decent enough

PirateLord93

PirateLord93 #18 · Apr 2nd, 2023 · · · Share ·

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