Clearance Level: 4.
Penalty for Unauthorised Viewership: Forced Amnestic Treatment.
Disciplinary Hearing 4851062-B
Location: Site-81.
Date: ██-██-████
Defendant: Senior Researcher [REDACTED] Grey.
Plaintiff: Chief Security Officer [REDACTED] Davidson.
Heard By: [REDACTED]
Prosecution: Commander Mark Johnson.
Defence: N/A.
Offense Charged: Disorderly, and borderline aggressive conduct towards a superior.
Final Verdict: Guilty As Charged.Appeal: Ethics Committee. Denied.
Sentence: Reassignment to Anomalous Monitoring Station #42.
Does Discord appear in this story?
He'll appear in season two. To avoid a chapter overload, each season will be it's own story. Just sit tight. He'll show up and screw with regulations soon enough.
Definitely seems loyal to the scp source materials. I’m excited to see where this goes.
A bit rushed, like you said. I feel that there’s a distinct lack of surprise in the introductions that could be addressed in the future; it would help flesh out the connections and personalities a bit more. Still, I like the direction that you’re going in and am excited to see where this all leads.
Grey hasnt met Gummi yet, has he? Or seen The Full Pinkie?
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No, not yet. Soon.
At least one of the air extraction methods should be a cryogenically cooled storage vessel of enough thermal capacity that it cant appreciably warm up before the air being pulled into it by the vaccuum of liquification reches whatever level is required? This means it can be tuned to Everest level Death height or just very hard to breath, right down to hard vaccuum level? It can also work as the vacccuum isolation layre, and the cryogenics suppiort the superconducting faraday cage, but theres a trick SCO doesnt seem to use which has been common over the years. Form a Bose Einstein Condensate shell arund an object. Consider theres high temperature milikelvin possible? Or theres Negative temperature plasma, as what appeasrs to be used in teleportation, and the shell appears to be the method the Telepod woks in The Fly, except badly there.
Stasis field.
As stated in Red Dwarf, A stasis field turns the object inside into something isolated from the universe and flow of time with a quantum probability of zero. Because absolutely no time flows inside, normal reality based objects have no time to do anything, and if anything can do something, they are higher dimentional.
Discord verses the Scranton Reality Anchor?
Or Pinkie? I mean, she can cut and paste. Dont have to affect the anchor.
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Special Containment Procedures update approved. If I misunderstood your suggestion, please clarify, and I will correct it immediately.
Actually, funny you mention that. The reality anchor was intended to stop Discord but it was too little, too late.
Woah. I am amazed by the positive reception. To be honest with everyone, I was seriously considering just doing this season, but after all of you showing interest in the story, I have decided to continue to all seasons of MLP, including Equestria Girls, the movie, and maybe a few of the comics. (If you don't like a comic, you don't have to read it to get the full story, but it is a nice extra piece.)
I can't thank you all enough for your support. I thought I would just get 10-30 views. 80 at best. I hope I can satisfy your expectations. The next chapter should be up shortly. Thank you all for everything. Let's work together to do what the foundation was made to do.
Secure. Contain. Protect.
Next chapter very soon. This one's a lot bigger, because it's a full episode, not divided into parts. Also, I should have clarified, I won't be covering any episodes that wouldn't present a significant development to the foundation. To qualify for a chapter, the episode must meet at least one of these criteria.
Any episode that doesn't meet these criteria will have a chapter eventually, but only once I've finished the main chapters throughout the series, or if enough people demand it.
Thanks for reading. Every episode will have a chapter in the end, so don't worry about your favourite episode not being included.
Secure. Contain. Protect.
The rise of EqG-SCP-crossover shall begin!
First of all, a good readable text, and looks like an interesting premise. However, I would have a few suggestions:
Show somehow that it's a file. Use either cursive letter, have the file be as a "quote" so fimfic shows it like
or use " ". It has to be shown, because the reader is thrown into the file. Same applies to any file written out.
Second, whenever a new direct speech starts, make a new paragraph. You did it with whenever a new person was speaking, but the direct speech as the end of the paragraph should be a new one.
And now about the censoring:
I never knew that one gets [REDACTED] even when you talk
Point being: While SCP files are recognisable through being all with [REDACTED] and blacked out texts, inside your story several wouldn't make sense in-universe. Censorships are done in files, but not when someone introduces themselves or especially when someone writes a report. The report is a report, you don't redact the date or anything. The censoring is only later on done when added on the file to be shared.
Why don't they contain them all? It's clearly worth researching if that is unnormal and needs to be investigated.
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Thank you for your feedback.
They didn't attempt to contain the other students because the team was only sent to investigate two anomalies. The other students were just flagged for monitoring.
So, just clarify that I got all your suggestions right. You suggested:
Putting quotation marks around the text in the files, or making them italic.
Adding a paragraph between direct speech, changing "You heard the mare. Get clear." The team vacated the area,
to:
"You heard the mare. Get clear."
The team vacated the area.
Can you clarify that I got all those right?
In all honesty, I put Grey's name as [REDACTED] because I couldn't think of a good first name. Actually, you know what, why don't you pick his name? Consider it a thank you for the feedback.
Unfortunately, personal tragedy has struck me, and I'm taking a hiatus to mourn. I'm going to try and push Interference out quickly, but after that, no new chapters until 2023. Sorry :(
Don't worry if Interference is low quality. It will be revised in 2023. Until then, goodbye.
Good news, just in the last couple days, two more pieces of technology advancements have been announced that really demonstrate how Twilight. IBMs Optical logic circuitry, and Quantum Entanglement coomunication through simulated wormhole. Turns out information is negative energy, but only if you rotate it in the correct direction.
So the Foundation has access to some Very nice stuff indeed, as the first optical logic gate at that construction can easily be demonstrated by Isaac Newton,a nd theoretically goes back to mineral and metal manipulation at the beginning of humanity, one off?
Pensé que era en la primera película, pero no, esto es cuando Sunset escapo a la otra dimensión.
I thought it was in the first movie, but no, this is when Sunset escaped to the other dimension.
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A esté capitulo y el anterior le faltan detalles sobre las situaciones, como ¿Porqué se impaciento Grey? ¿Porqué pensó que irrumpir destruyendo una ventana sería buena idea? ¿Qué convenció a Twilight para que confiara en Grey? Tampoco se explica la falta de movimiento por parte de la Fundación cuando un solo guardia y Grey siguen a Twilight y Spike en lo que sería casi todo el capitulo 1 de la temporada 1, a eso hay que agregar la falta de reacción por parte de los ponis cuando siguen a Grey (Por alguna razón) a la instalación de la fundación, entre muchos otros detalles.
La idea es muy buena, pero le falta algo más de trabajo y si lo que afirma al final de este capitulo es cierto, tomate tu tiempo para sacarlo, es mejor sacar un capitulo bien y completo que un capitulo a medias, calidad sobre cantidad, también recordar que no está en obligación de publicar capítulos (o no, no conozco su vida personal), toma el tiempo que requiera para realizarlo y luego publicarlo.
his chapter and the previous one lack details about the situations, such as why was Gray impatient? Why did she think that breaking in by destroying a window would be a good idea? What convinced Twilight to trust Grey? The lack of movement on the part of the Foundation is also not explained when a single guard and Gray follow Twilight and Spike in what would be almost the entire episode 1 of season 1, to that we must add the lack of reaction on the part of the ponies when they follow Gray (For some reason) to the foundation facility, among many other details.
The idea is very good, but it needs a little more work and if what is stated at the end of this chapter is true, take your time to get it out, it is better to get a good and complete chapter than a half chapter, quality over quantity, also remember that you are not obliged to publish chapters (or no, I don't know your personal life), take the time you need to do it and then publish it.
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Un punto a tener en cuenta es que no deberías tener miedo a modificar el canon original, desde el momento en que la Fundación SCP hizo contacto con Equestria debería haber cambios significativos con respecto al material original para que las interacciones e intervenciones de la Fundación tengan sentido, hacer un copia y pega con ligeras modificaciones de los capítulos a la larga no será buena idea.
One point to keep in mind is that you shouldn't be afraid to modify the original canon, from the moment the SCP Foundation made contact with Equestria there should be significant changes from the original material for Foundation interactions and interventions to make sense. , making a copy and paste with slight modifications of the chapters in the long run will not be a good idea.
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Demasiado apega al formato original, hay que utilizar la creatividad y el ambiente ya establecido para que este material sea más original y no solo original sino que también concuerde con la situación ya que te estas limitando mucho apegándote a un guion ya establecido.
Too much adherence to the original format, you have to use creativity and the already established environment so that this material is more original and not only original but also matches the situation since you are limiting yourself a lot by sticking to an already established script.
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Doesn’t feel like an SCP story it’s too scripted you need imagination you need fear you need steaks
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Okay, I'll take that to heart.
Season 1 will be going on hiatus while I start up a spin-off series. Introducing...
Containment Is Magic: Dark Ops
This spinoff will contain non-canon media, including the comics, popular AUs (Such as Past Sins or Adapting To Night), and few of my own fabrication. It will follow the ponies operating in a Special Mission Unit known as Shadow. The exclusion from the canon timeline refers to these events being erased from the memories of most ponies, whether from debunking, censorship, or mass amnestic programs. This is a low priority series, and will be developed when I have Writer's Block on this one, as a way to (hopefully) break the monotony and give me some fresh ideas when I return. I'm only stopping to publish the 1st chapter, about The Return Of Queen Chrysalis, so that submission is out of the way. Sorry if you don't like this, but I think it's a good idea. Thanks for understanding.
The hiatus will begin right after I publish Speculation.
Welcome to Shadow.
Grey goes off his trolly with this problem.
Curses to the left of him, mutations to the right, here he is stuck in the middle with you.
Can SCP Reality Anchors prevent the text of the story of the person writing the story being altered on the page? Cos if it cant, thats a Higher Pinkie?
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I don't understand that last part. Can you clarify?
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Ah, very sorry. Thats gonna be, a little tricky.
Closest I could put it, is that the current 3D intersection of That Damn Lizert with the SCP universe, is about the same to Pinkie, as Gummy. That is why I at least consider the possibility that Gummy is the guy on holiday.
Or, think about Pinkie playing with the marble off the cats collar in MIB that contains the Galaxy.
Or MIB2 worlds in locker cabinets?
Search has been temporarily unpublished while I make some changes to improve its quality. This will only take a bit.