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Twilight Sparkle is a young and normal unicorn... Except for one fact: She can see the spirits of dead ponies since she was a filly.
She and her brother moved to a small town called "Ponyville", hoping to live a new life away from the city. But her life changes drastically when a mysterious dragon clad in a black samurai costume appear, claiming that he is a "Soul Reaper" and a ghost from her past come back to haunt her yet again.

WARNING: This is not a MLP meets Bleach crossover. It's a total retake on both franchises with alterations on both Bleach storyline and on the characters from My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic with the intention of creating a entire new story.

Special thanks to Vexy for proofreading and editing, turning this story into something worth reading.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 124 )

Had a similar idea a few days ago, I'll add it to my read later list and get back to you then :pinkiesmile:

I like the concept! Gonna put this on my Read Later list. :pinkiesmile:

welllllll.........If you do it right, this should be interesting and good in its own right. Thing of it is,........what the hell is right?!?!

I don't have time to read right now, but I'll add this to read later. If I'm right, this will be awesome.

Going to add to the top of my new stories list... Gonna have to I'm afraid. So far since reading your description I have thought out over a thousand words worth of comments so... how could I NOT read this next?

EDIT:
Orihime=Fluttershy
Uryū=Rarity
Chad= I dunno, Big Mac maybe?
Keigo= Pinkie Pie perhaps
Tatsuki= oh this has GOT to be Rainbow Dash!
Renji= Applejack?

Just some character comparisons and predictions. The 'list' is the summary of several paragraphs. What?! I'm lazy! I'm not really going to type a thousand plus word comment!

1390953 Hey mate! If you want, send me some ideas, I can put them on my story if them don't conflict with the plot! :pinkiehappy:

1391245 I will do my best for this to be a great story!

1391257 Thank you for looking forward to read my crazy idea. About the "who is going to be who", hold on tight on your chair, you will be surprised!

Hmmm, looks good. Going on my favorite list

1391257 hmm, good list. Have to find other good choices too.

Celestia = urahara

Luna = Yourichi

Discord = Aizen or grimmjow :trixieshiftleft:

Just ideas

Aru

1391815 Discord more likely Aizen...you now why.... basically I ended watching anime when Ichigo and rest end up in Hueco Mundo.

1392030 haha, I actually have only watched like 30 episodes. The rest of the series I watched just the good fights in youtube

Aru

1392133 Good enough :P Only thing from manga and anime I'm really loyal is "Berserk". I wonder when finally someone do fanfick(good one :P) crossover with this amazing manga...

1392166 never seen that, so I don't know:derpytongue2: I am Doing my own crossover of alien vs predator. Should be up by 7 tonight

1392349 I already did it! In fact, Word and Google Translator are being my editors for the time being. :twilightblush:

I will try to keep the minimal amount of errors, so please, if you see anything too grotesque, tell me and I will correct it fast as possible. :rainbowlaugh:

I prefer the fusing of two series over the x meets x crossovers :twilightsmile::twilightsmile:
been waiting for a Bleach one

1393644 Don't worry, just ending the first volume, I plan to write the entire series! :rainbowlaugh:

1391815 after seeing Yamamoto fight in the manga, I would say Celestia = Yamamoto
he even said it, his bankai is the heat of the SUN

1395009 i was thinking that, but i figured it would be better to have her as someone who helped her out through the series.

either way, we will have to wait to see what the author does:trixieshiftright:

not bad. Question; who is going to be Kon? :rainbowhuh: perhaps Angel the bunny? hahaha

1401024I think it should either be tank, Tom, or her owl.

Aru

1401323 Or Snips or Snail ;D Or lil version of Discord? Dunno!

1404341 Alright mate! So how we are going to do this? Do I have to send you the history in a Word documment?

No problem on oc characters. Curious though, will other main characters be played by oc's or my little pony characters?

Aru

Nice chapter. And good thing that you are going something else than just conversion of mlp world into Bleach. I like it! And I can wait for characters from mlp showed here. Spike and Twilight are good for now(and Trixie)

Edit: One question. Chain thingie on ghosts chests is going to be in this story too? I remember that this thing was slowly eating itself and final effect was hollow.

1421981
I have arranged the cast to be entirely played by the official characters, background ponies or protagonists/major characters. I will try to make she the only OC casting a major character from Bleach. Let's see if I can, because Bleach has much more cast than MLP :pinkiehappy:

1423142
I was going to cover that on the next chapter! :rainbowlaugh:

Thanks to both of you and to everypony else for enjoying the history, and for the questions. And if I didn't answers a comment, that's because I keeping you guys out of the spoilers. :pinkiesmile:

1423295 haha, true. There is like 40 soul reapers or something to cover haha. Good luck. Also, are you going to skip the filler arcs and stick to the main story?

1423360
I trying to focus the fic more on the manga than in the anime, but there two filler arcs that I like. The first one is the bont arc, because it shows Ichigo's unstable condition after his fight in the S.S. and the second is the Zanpakuto rebellion arc, because was damn interesting to see the other spirits. Maybe I will make some chapters dedicated to them, I still deciding. :pinkiehappy:

1441953
I'm so beat! :derpytongue2:
Writing two chapters on the same day is hard, but I wanted to end the volume this weekend, to have the week for work on the next volume...
Going to sleep like a log today. :rainbowlaugh:

Haha I know what you mean. I did three updates for three stories in two days :ajsleepy: need a break

Are you going to be having the rest of the mane 6 take the palce of Ichigo's friends?

1445931
Well... I can't give you spoilers! :rainbowlaugh:
But don't worry, the mane six are in the history, but I can't tell who they are casting for now. :pinkiehappy:

I didn't want spoilers, I was just asking if they were. And hoping that they will start appearing soon.

A short chapter, but a lot of characters appeared! :raritystarry:
What about a little list of our cast until now? :pinkiehappy:

Ichigo Kurosaki = Twilight Sparkle
Rukia Kuchiki = Spike
Orihime Inoue = Heterochrome
Yasutora Sado = Big MacIntosh
Kisuke Urahara = Doctor Whooves
Jinta = Sweet Belle
Ururu = Scootaloo

I personally thinks that no other pony could cast Chad. It had to be Big Mac! :eeyup:
Anypony surprised with who is casting Urahara? :rainbowlaugh:

Doctor whooves? Smart idea actually. I was going to say Celestia, but this works better actually.

Don't forget about shining armor as Isshan kurosaki :rainbowwild:

1474705
Good thing that you noticed that! :rainbowlaugh:

He's doing the same job as Isshin in fact, altough he's not giving Twilight wrestling classes everytime they see each other! :rainbowlaugh:

He is more oriented to represent Shining Armor as he is with Twilight in MLP than Isshin is with Ichigo in Bleach.

Aru

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Just something what have popped in my mind...now I'm going to proceed in reading of this new chapter
Edit: Holy buck, kinda big this picutre is...sorry.
Edit2: Well.. Doctor Whooves. Great Idea! And Big Mac...not suprising, but good choice.

1474676

I would have liked to see Applejack as Chad, but atleast they are doing one of hte older APple Siblings, I doubt Chrome will be Orihime though. Fluttershy is my bet.

1475032
It's alright, don't worry with the size of the pic by the way. I like it a lot! Imagine these two together. :pinkiegasp:
Did you made it Aru?

1477697
What is your guess Fireeaters? :pinkiehappy:

Aru

1479415 No, no It's not me! I'm more than terrible in drawing..even if I have the ability like on this picture I'm not drawing porn (picture is from reaaaaly nsfw tumblr :P)

This is literally riddled with misuse of tenses, clunky sentence structuring and the story feels too fast paced for my tastes - it is, after all, only 2000 words per chapter. Don't take any of this as negative, though. I'm really chuffed with what you've done here. It does, however, need a serious run through with an editor. Since you're using Google Translate, the editor will probably want to clarify the meaning/context of several sentences too.

However I will continue reading for the sake of an awesome idea :rainbowkiss:

Edit: Oh and you are a huge fan of elipses, aren't you! :rainbowlaugh:

1500826
Oh! Thank you, I would never take any comment or criticism as a bad thing. I am very aware of my limitations as a english writter and speaker, but the urge to write in a nice and good community as this one have compelled me to keep trying against all the odds.

I hope to improve chapter after chapter. The first time I published it, it was very bad. :applecry:

About the editors, well, they are running from me. :rainbowlaugh:
I will continue in the search for one.

Thank you for the feedback, and stay tunned, I going to publish the next chapter between today and tomarrow. :pinkiehappy:

How much of the series are you gonna do? If you need any help, I'm sure me and alot of the other commentors could help.

1504496
I will cover the entire series! :rainbowlaugh:

Pretty greed project don't you think? :rainbowlaugh:

And yes please! All of you that are reading the fic, feel free to give ideas on the comments, it helps a million! :twilightsmile:

1504507
Ok here are some of my ideas:

Pinkie Pie - Kon or Yachiru
Rainbow Dash: Renji
Fluttershy: Momo or Unohana
Celestia: Yoruichi
Luna: Yoruichi or, if Celestia is Yoruichi, Soi Fon
AppleJack: Kenpachi or Ikkaku (Pinkie Pie should be Yachiru if AJ is Kenpachi)
Discord: Aizen
Rarity: Uryu

That's all I can think of right now. Also, you don't have to do the filliers if you don't want to.

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