This story is a sequel to All that twinkles
a not so normal crossbreed has met friends and foes but is now, with his two best friends, ready for anything. but be prepared for not so normal things to happen!
Every star that can been seen in the night sky is brought there by me. so enjoy the night as much as the day.
This story is a sequel to All that twinkles
a not so normal crossbreed has met friends and foes but is now, with his two best friends, ready for anything. but be prepared for not so normal things to happen!
Capital letters.
Punctuation.
Start with learning those and your writing will improve immensely. Happy writing!
okay thank you!