A pony of mystery in the darkness. Or I forgot to take the lens cap off. (They/them is fine.)
In an angry swordfight, Sunset and Adagio cut off each other's right hands.
Twilight sees this as an opportunity.
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With thanks to Carlos S. for a bit of helpful feedback about something.
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I love how there multiple forms of madness interacting here. As long as no one's getting hurt, it doesn't really matter how crazy you are.
This was beautiful.
Wait, how does Demon Sunset factor in all of this? She's in the tags
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Thanks for catching the mistagging! Now it's just regular Sunset Shimmer.
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No problem. This was quite amusing and I hope they liked it. Sunset and Adagio are some of the few that can pull off the 'lovers trying to kill each other'
Reading this story is quite interesting. While I usually don't like sci fi or stories with amputated limbs, this one is pretty sweet~ Having my own hand cut off is one of my biggest phobias, but reading this story was pretty entertaining! It aired more on the side of comedy and adventure than romance, giving us a funny look from the outside how chaotic a relationship between Sunset and Adagio can be~ It's always interesting to see stories where the other Equestria Girls react to their relationship. In this case, it was pretty comedic and I laughed multiple times while reading it~ I almost wish I could see a scene where they actually try out the hand-holding feature when one of them goes to the store or such. XD
I also want to say you perfectly set up the comedic tone of this story with Rainbow Dash's first quote explaining Sunset and Adagio's blatantly violent tendencies towards each other. A swordfight with CHAINSAWS?
You also perfectly captured Adagio's bold nature~ I love this story and you did a great job! The Emperor of Sundagio approves~ XD jkjk but I do love this~ 
Aww come on! What good is programming a hand to play keyboard if you can't do 4 and a half minute solos??
This was really fun and cute!
Aww my heart!!
Also, the candidate for the cover art is what we need in life; girls fighting girls and girls kissing girls right afterwards.
All of that and there was NO VIBRATE SETTING included in those Hands?
lolwtf XD