This story is a sequel to Rain, Feelings, and Sleepovers
Hitch and Pipp, after getting to his apartment to stay out of a brutal flash thunderstorm, reveal their feelings for each other. While Pipp knew that Hitch liked her, he himself was surprised that she felt the same.
Now it's the morning after the storm and boy did it hurt Maretime Bay.
The two of them knew that they had to let the others know what has happened.
While they did already know about Hitch liking Pipp, they needed to hear it to believe that it finally happened.
Professional Audio Reading done here: https://youtu.be/ZL5YDGWm8fY
Just a fair warning, it isn't bad, but the story does briefly mention a form of online sexual harassment. While it doesn't describe anything sexual, I figured I'd just put this disclaimer here just in case!
You did it again; new speaker means new paragraph
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Ahh you gotta be shitting me 😂
Fixed!
Edit: Apparently in my Doc it's correct, but when importing it to FIM, it must've thought something else... Ehh, oh well!
you doing just one chapter stories?
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For now, they're more of a one tell type stories.
The reason for this is because they don't really weave together when put in chapters in my opinion. While this one could have been incorporated into the first story, any future ones would have to be separate.
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Alright, btw is it me or does it seem like Sunny is being tease about Hitch and Pipp together? Seems like that would make Sunny sad… like Hitch said she was the mostly beautiful mare before Pipp so… unless Sunny liked Sprout 🌱
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The way I personally developed Sunny was how the movie ran. Obviously throughout the film, we see multiple times that Sunny and Hitch are close, but to me, I feel that it is due to Hitch's long-term loyalty to her, being one of her only friends in the beginning. They are more siblings, rather than friends.
As for Hitch saying Sunny was the most beautiful mare he had ever seen, well, that can be argued because as we know, Hitch did not like the other pony races at all. He had negative views towards them, saying that they were Earth Pony's enemies. So, the attractiveness part was definitely out the window at first. You can also argue that while Hitch may think that Sunny is a pretty mare, that doesn't mean that he likes her, but rather recognizes his friend's natural beauty.
That's how I developed these versions of G5.
I hope that clears up any confusion for you. :)
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Ah I see that’s understandable.
Charming little story, but why is it tagged "Second Person"?
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Thanks for your feedback.
I see the error, my apologies, I must have accidentally clicked on that option.
Yeah that's always such a problem with social media and I don't understand why they do that what's the point
Lastly, who was this stallion! Hitch knew that he would gladly break the law and dishonor his badge to teach whoever that colt thought he was a serious lesson. Not just because it was Pipp, but because it was in a way sexual harassment, to which the law had zero tolerance for.
I'm sure hitch will because that's just despicable
Or at least put a password on it so nobody can't see your phone
This is a pretty nice story and seeing how the relationship go so it looks like hitch and pipp waking up and looks like they decided to go back to the Bright House to meet up with the other after they had to take shelter from the rain storm once they got there their friends were waiting for them and they were pretty happy for them about being a couple and zipp wanting to give hitch about some of the history why pipp deciding to do this because apparently social media can be a scary place to be especially with people doing something inappropriate which why I don't know and she never wanted to open up until hitch came along and of course zipp wanted to make sure he is a good guy once that was done the others talk about a couple of few things then decide to head out to do their activities leaving hitch and pipp alone this is a pretty cute story I really like it keep up the good work
This is a really sweet series. But, while their friends are all good with Hitch and Pipp being together, I'm growing more curious what Queen Haven will think when she finds out.
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Thanks for the feedback!
That is a good question my friend :)
They should be thankful that’s all he asked for since this can probably be considered a less harmful form of sexual harassment compared to what he could have done.
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Correct. It could be much worse.
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So much worse and finally the dark side of the internet.
Wait what is the pony equivalent of the FBI.
The FPI or the Pegasus capital version
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Also you probably should let people know this is a sequel to the previous one.
Now we just have to wait for the next sequel to this to see everyone else’s reaction to this news
*hitch just pulling an uno reverse card out of somewhere.
Someone should make a full image meme of this.
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FPI would actually work as a ponified version of the Federal Bureau of Investigation!
You could call it 'FPIP' as in, 'Federal Pony Investigations Program' if you wanted. Pretty fire! lol
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I'll get that taken care of! 😂
Prequel means a story that was written after that takes place before the main story
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Thanks for your feedback.
Sorry, my apologies. I will correct that.
I really liked, but in my opinion...the part where some dude asked Pipp for pictures..... That really sucks, I mean I search for this kind of stories (romance, cute and happy moments) to scape from the real world for as long as the story is, (we all know that the real world sucks some times😅)
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Now I ju want a meme of just them breaking into the the fans house yelling
“Freeze this is the FPI!” Put your hooves up now!”
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Thank you for the feedback.
Yes, reality can sometimes be tough to face. It’s not always fun.
I’m sure you read the first story, to which was a very sweet and innocent one.
If you stick around, the next story will be a really good one, and much less negative.
For now, take care! :)
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Of course I'm gonna stick around, despite the negative moments everything it's great!!!
Thank you and take care you too💪✌️
Dawwwwwwwww this is goooood tooooo!!!!! 😆😆