Spoiled Rich always had everything that she ever wanted. Some of the things she might say are, “What is more important than money.” Or “If money can’t buy it, is it worth having.” However, this all changes after a series of events. Spoiled Rich is forced to remember her past as she looks toward her future. Will she be able to deal with her past as the pony named Spoiled Milk? Or is that pony gone for good?
This story also contains alot of Randolph. But I could not find him in the character tags.
An entry in the Ancestral Tribute contest.
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Wonderful story I wonder what crystal is going to do though.
Wait, so people were still living here despite the incredibly decrepit conditions and the field full of dead crops? They just vanished in the middle of dinner?
... It was a week ago!?
Yeah, this whole thing just does not hold together. Why does Spoiled have no money? How long has her brother been in the hospital? Who thought literally calling a dairy farm "Spoiled Milk" was a good idea, and why did no one change it when the inevitable happened? Why is Chrysalis growing... marijuana trees(!?) at this dairy farm? Why is the entire thing just shy of script format?
This isn't a story so much as a chain of events that smack the reader in the face one after the other, with little to no rhyme, reason, or further consequence once the narrative is done with them. How does finding an old dog resolve the issue of Spoiled's near bankruptcy? When is Diamond getting picked up? How will the legal battle over the rights to the farm get resolved? I appreciate your entry, but I have to say that this just did not work for me.
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First I would like to say thank you for giving me the opportunity to enter into your contest. It was alot of fun. I am going to assume that you would like answers to some of your questions.
I challenge you to leave meat outside for a week and see if it is editable. At the very least it makes spoiled look picky.
I never stated that she didn't have money. In fact having spent credit cards means they are full. But she would still have to pay them off. Or I wonder did Chrysalis have something to do with them being declined. Then again I have empty cards that get declined that is called being an adult.
A week.
The farm was called the Spoiled Milk Family Farm. The product was called Spoiled Milk because her name was Spoiled Milk before she got Married. This is also show cannon.
Her brother was. She was his business partner. He grew it. She sold it. Also what the plants were was left ambiguos for two reasons. One to show how Spoiled Rich had no idea what her brother was into. Second for any fillies and colts that may be reading.
I would like to know how you feel I could change that? Do you mean script like a TV script?
Spoiled Rich has a dog now. And at the start she asked two people what is more important than money? At the end of the story it gets turned onto it's head. It is implied but not stated that the love for her brother and the promise she made was more important.
It is her brothers dog and she kept her promise to her brother. Also Spoiled is not bankrupt.
10 minutes late after School. Unless traffic is heavy.
Who said there was a legal battle. Even if Spoiled Rich loses the farm. Does that matter? She has her own house.
Sad Twilight face Well I thank you for considering my story and reading it. I had fun writing for your contest and it was an honor to be in it.
An oddball ghost happened across your fic and read it. Have a review!