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I am a big fan of Starlight Glimmer most of my stories center around her. I do crossovers as well.

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After Starlight Glimmer and Trixie are able to escape the invasion from the Storm King they are able to find and join the Mane 6 and Spike on their Journey Outside Equestria,

Will Twilight be able to handle Trixie’s antics and Starlight being too easygoing? Find out on Escaping The Invasion.

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Comments ( 61 )
Comment posted by RomaTsarenko deleted Oct 3rd, 2022

Finally.

An alternate remake of the movie

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I’m shocked there’s so much elation for this.

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Hello! Cool chapter! Will be new chapter?

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There will be a new chapter. Not sure when, but most likely sooner than later.

Poor Twilight will be needing a few days at the Ponyville spa or better yet a short vacation after all this is over.

Keep up the awesome work!

Another good chapter!
Keep up the awesome work!!

Lol another good chapter. Keep up the great work!

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Thanks. Thoughts on the argument scene between Twilight and Starlight?

Comment posted by RomaTsarenko deleted Oct 6th, 2022

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Surprising. And Twilight was being brutally selfish when trying to steal the pearl, so its no surprise that she would be upset at her selfishness.

I liked the moment Trixie had with rebuilding Starlight's spirit and looking forward to the next chapter.

Aw Trixie being a good friend to Starlight. Shows how much she went from a boastful show off (from a greater extent) to a caring mare

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I wanted to make sure Trixie wasn’t doing nothing throughout the fic so I had her comfort Starlight.

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I would assume Trixie would do that

Twilight and Starlight apologizing to each other makes the story end on a sweet note. Good work

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Thanks. Thoughts on Starlight’s characterization?

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It was good. However I'm a little confused by where it said that Starlight had given up her free will when she became Twilight's student. I never thought of it that way

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No she didn’t give up her free will. She just stopped her time travel plot on her own volition so Celestia was less likely to punish her than Tempest even if the punishment I gave Tempest was very short.

I definitely disagreed with the whole Tempest and Grubber are imprisoned for a few weeks in the Canterlot Dungeons thing. Like it was established on why Tempest did what she did because she wanted to get her horn back just wanting to have that loyalty and trust all those years of her life having one of MLP most tragic backstories I've ever seen, Twilight establishes what a friend would do and at the end of the day Tempest sacrificed herself for the wellbeing of everyone else, saving their lives in fact including the Princesses.

I love the character development and interactions here between Twilight, Starlight and Trixie but the way Princess Celestia sentenced Tempest to a few weeks in the Canterlot Dungeons..? I wasn't rocking with that, and it kind of shows Celestia's hidden hatred and grudge against Tempest for what happened even though she's saved her life and everyone else in the end, Celestia here kind of thing that no, Revenge is worth it and I will do it? Ehhh... Most of the time I would be agreeing with the messages that you have in this story, The sentencing Tempest to the dungeon? I didn't agree with this one..

Like we need this little rulebook of Celestia's Canterlot Elitism and ways of punishment, Like everyone doesn't follow the harsh punishment just because he or she did something to a noble, an elite or a royal. Not everyone in Equestria doesn't follow that. I'm pretty sure Fluttershy don't follow it, Pinkie Pie don't follow it. Everyone else don't follow that code. Its kind of Celestia following her personal religion and I think that's very strange compared to the ending of the original movie and the comics where Tempest was off to her travels and see the world. This is not just for me and I think its kind of weird.. Twilight is a Princess, she has that power, I don't see why she doesn't just say to Celestia that she's going to look after Tempest and give her a new life in the Castle of Friendship, If Spike was able to save Thorax by singing to Change a Changeling then I don't see why Twilight and her friends would all completely vouch for Tempest to be taught more about Friendship and live in Twilight's castle.

I was wondering if this is going to have a sequel chapter and what happens to Tempest but since this is the last chapter.. Yeah I feel so sorry for Tempest and why Celestia would do this.. Jails in the GTA Games are a lot more humane than this and I think everyone knows medieval dungeons are just so messed up, Its like the Hole or Solitary Confinement in prison. And since these are just some random guards, I would say Tempest and her little friend are going to get abused in the dungeon a lot since its left to speculation and Celestia is a tyrant for doing this. I love the direction of the story and I'm going to give this a 4 out of 5 Stars. Its Very Good but its not Excellent. I love Starlight, I love Trixie, I love Twilight and I love the interactions between the characters. Tempest's fate was just a very bitter pill for me to swallow.

All of this journey, Starlight never truly felt at ease, she hardly felt a feeling of warmth or safety.

Soon she felt her torso being grabbed by Twilight as she softly smiled in her sleep.

Starlight knew she was only doing it platonically as a way of comfort, but it still made Starlight smile fondly, it was proof that Twilight did care about her, and still valued their friendship and Starlight now knew she could always count on that.

She finally felt warm and safe.

Oh boy.. All of that is resolved but what about her other friend though..? Starlight is well and all good but is how can Tempest sleep easy at night in her current state and where she is? There is a big difference between where Starlight sleeps compared to where Tempest is sleeping right now and the fact that Starlight didn't talk to Twilight about it even back at the Castle is very strange since Canterlot Dungeons is not different from Tartarus.

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Uh… you do realize Tempest will eventually be let free in the future right?

Either way, how come you loved Twilight, Starlight, and Trixie so much?

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Okay, reading this more. I did not know that Midevail Dungeons were as bad as you described them when I first wrote this. Rest assured, Tempest and Grubber do NOT get abused. Depending if I give this a Season 8 sequel with Tempest in it or not, she will be set free regardless by the time School Daze begins.

I said it before and I'll defend it to the death, Rainbow Rocks was a better movie than the theatrical pony movie.

RR gave us reformed Sunset, the Dazzlings, Under our Spell, and Welcome to the show.

Pony movie gave us... Tempest? (HAHAHAHAHA)

Anyway adding Starlight and Trixie to the mix should at least make the story more interesting. Let's see where you take this.

Your Starlight writing is strange to me. Like she's... I don't know lol, hard to explain.

I find I feel sorry for Starlight in a lot of your stories.

Your Trixie is really spot on in my mind though.

Continuing.

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She’s so easy to feel sympathy for, so I’m doing my job. How come you feel bad for her this time?

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Because she always seems to get the short end of the stick. Like she has very specific options and she gets guff no matter what shd chooses.

Yep so this was the scene that made me give the movie a 0/10 and never revisit it. It isn't Twilight. Such a destruction of her character.

Somehow you've made the scene even more infuriating. Seriously, such an annoying plot point to create artificial conflict in the second act.

GOD I HATE THE MOVIE SO MUCH.

I just gotta breathe. Interesting twist with Starlight doing the fight, but it just makes me dislike her here.

Reading on.

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Nothing. It's all just wrong. Twilight wouldn't have done these things so by proxy Starlight wouldn't have done what she did. At least in my eyes.

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Twilight was desperate and as such, she felt she needed to do whatever it took to save Equestria. Starlight doing what she did felt in-character though, given Twilight just emotionally broke her.

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I know why Twilight was explained to do it. I don't believe it. That's not who Twilight is. She's a genius that panics sometimes. She wouldn't resort to evil to fix a problem, especially not that many years into her story.

It's contrived conflict to get a sad scene that didn't have to be there.

Wait that was shining for Trixie? Man it really must just be me seeing the awfulness of the movie cause I didn't get that.

God the Storm King is such a laughably bad villain. I hate him so much.

You did stir my curiosity. I wonder really after Starlight fought with Twilight how she'd feel if Twilight was killed by the Storm King. If she never got the chance to make up with her. That sounds delightfully devastating.

Reading on.

This chapter pissed me off for one reason. This line right here...

I know you messed up but I should’ve been more…”

You do not apologize or make amends with someone by telling them they messed up. What a terrible thing for Starlight to say. I'm sorry Twilight but you really did screw up. That's not an apology at all.

I don't really remember Tempest's redemption in the movie, it really doesn't work here. She only became good because the Storm King is an absolute moron. Give her horn and she stays on your side.

This is literally the opposite of Starlight's redemption. Starlight had complete control and she gave it up. Tempest got betrayed by evil while being evil and it's like okay you can be a good guy now. Blech.

Reading on.

Tempest should've been pinned to the wall. She turned 3 princesses to stone and would've gladly done it to the 4th if the Storm King wasn't an idiot plot convenient villain.

I think you did a good job working in Starlight and Trixie, but the movie's storyline is such a mess I just think it's impossible to make coherent.

I even feel like because Twilight was so ooc in the movie you were forced to make Starlight do the same.

A noble effort, but the movie is just bad in my eyes. On the more positive side I didn't hate this.

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Well Starlight’s not wrong is she? Starlight was also going to acknowledge how she was wrong too before Rainbow Dash interrupted.

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Because she just talked to Starlight. A bold action of selflessness or Love is shining imo.

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It doesn't matter if she's wrong. Have you ever had someone apologize to you while telling you it's your fault. It's enraging.

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That you put so much effort into writing something that you obviously cared about. That's quite admirable.

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If I may ask, how was the ending with TwiStar?

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I liked it okay, but it was bitter. I'm still very much mad at Starlight for telling Twilight that.

She should've understood. I don't know if this takes place before or after she blasted Discord, but I feel it's quite similar.

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Before she blasted Discord and what’s the problem with Starlight saying she “should have understood”?

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No you misunderstand. Starlight saying...

I know you messed up but I should’ve been more…”

I am saying Starlight should've understood. If this is before Discord blast then she did essentially the same thing Twilight did to Discord. She blew him up because he was being a pain. She had a problem that wouldn't go away and she solved it whatever way she could when everything else didn't work.

Discord was being completely unreasonable and annoying that episode and he even tricked the mane 6 into leaving he was completely at fault.

Now I'm not endorsing thievery (it was a stupid plot point to begin with Twilight wouldn't have done it) but literally all of Equestria was at stake. Novo was being stupid. She ran like a coward and didn't want to help.

It's just a mess made due to the movie and I don't like that Starlight didn't stick by Twilight. Feels like she stabbed her in the back.

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