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Bit-By-Bit Studio


"If there's a book that you want to read, but it hasn't been written yet, then you must write it." --Toni Morrison

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Once an annoyance to the changeling queen, soon became a tolerance when her friend Alan comes by to visit her every single day. Sometimes for chats, gifts, and inviting them to hang out. This time though was both different and unexpected…


Written by Bit-By-Bit Studio

Audio reading by Fire Hearth Studios

A/N: So I thought about Chrysalis and this idea popped in my head, so I decided to write it down.


Featured: 8/10/2022 Wow! First featured, thank you very much! :pinkiegasp: :raritystarry: :pinkiehappy: :twilightsmile:

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Comments ( 15 )

D’awwwwwwww!

that was nice

Echoing the 'D'awwwwwwww!' whole-heartedly.

If only my Chrysalis could say the same

This is incredibly generic. There's none of Chrysalis's actual personality, no detail of what happened to shape her new one, no detail of her actual villain activity, no detail of what she almost but apparently didn't do to the guy she's wet for, no detail of why she's so attached to him, and no perspective of or even reference at all to her species which kinda happens to carry a lot of baggage in being involved in a romance because it's a full on food source? The words "changeling", "queen", and "hive" do not even appear, and random loverboy is only even mentioned as human in the first sentence.

And the reason why makes sense when I read it yesterday and had this comment only half typed out, because at the time you randomly called Chrysalis "Nocturne" partway through and it was only corrected when I reloaded today before posting the finished comment. I suspect you wrote a generic OC then changed it before publishing for shipper clicks.

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Yeah, lol, I was re-reading a story that had a character named "Nocturne," at the time I was writing this I was a bit sleepy and accidentally put his name there. :twilightsheepish:

Aww, this was super cute! Definitely made my day brighter. :raritywink:

This works as a great teaser to that series if you plan on writing it.

Thank you for including me in your fic description! It really means alot! :yay:

This is a cute story, if a bit rushed into. I would have loved to see the "prequel" to this and the build up. It would have been a lot more impactful to see the full change. However, still adorable.

This is absolutely prefect. I think the problem with my own stories is that I want them to be long and drawn out and reach this epic conclusion but this... under 2,000 words... prefect.

Very cute! I love stories like this!

D'awwww, that was sweet.

I would definitely be OK with a more fleshed out version of the story and/or a sequel, yes.

very nice story but it feels like a continuation of some other story.

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