• Member Since 6th Feb, 2020
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sykko


I like violence, heavy metal and talking multicolored ponies

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So Big Mac gets cheated on (all bachelorette parties have cheating and are worse than mens) and he didn't even get to bust a nut in another mare?

Lame. Too short of a story as well. Big mac wasn't even the focus of the story. It was Anon. Thumbs down.

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Thanks for reading and commenting.

This is total shame that this was short to be honest. Is there a sequel?

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Hadn't planned on one. If enough people call for one, I might write it.

I think this could benefit from a proofreader or an editor. There's lots of little typos and issues with grammar that can make it hard for readers to stay immersed.

What the fuck did I do last night?!

Is there perhaps a sequel to this?

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Please do. Becuase I would be surprised if sugar belle is now pregnant with the strippers child.

Very nice. Thumbs up.

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