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SkarinOfAtmora


You think my weapons make me dangerous? Good, keep thinking that.

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Princess Twilight Sparkle has been the sole ruler of Equestria for ten years. The nation thrived under her rule, even more so than with her predeccessors. No catastrophe in sight. Until now...

Monsters unlike Equestria has ever seen suddenly appeared. Taking control of land, air and sea, Twilight and her little ponies stand helpless before the rampage. But as fate has it, and always will, a hero always comes to the rescue.

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Who is the author of the art with Twilight?

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dacsy

I will take it down if they want. Otherwise it stays up for a month or two before I get my hands on a comission.

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I don't care if the artist wants it or not. I just liked the art
Thanks

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Any chance we could get a link because agree that's a amazing pic of Twilight?

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Thanks really appreciate it. :pinkiehappy:

Twilight looks hot in the picture

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Well, she is older in the story so I thought it fit perfectly.

You have Thor in here?? Or that's just what the male protagonist looks like?

And this is Monster Hunter by the tag?

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Nope, not Thor, just for reference.

It's basically the same character I have played since Morrowind, which is Skarin. I just changed his name here so I don't confuse people.

Glad to see you back in the saddle, though 5 MH games at the same time is an addiction. Get help.

Liked before I read it since I already expect to enjoy it.

Otherwise, enjoy some grammar schenanigans.

The sole ruler of Equestria occupated the room of her former mentor, and co-ruler for that matter

occupied
also 'sole ruler' and 'co-ruler' are mutually exclusive.

Something about a blue monster in the Everfree river that the resident sea serpent, Steven Magnet, demanded it be dealt with.

demanded be delt with.

They soon reached the new classroom all manner of young creatures were waiting for their teacher.

They soon reached the new classroom, with all manner of young creatures waiting for their teacher.

the pegasus skidded to a halt, completely oiut of breath and barely able to speak.

The pegasus skidded to a halt, completely out of breath and barely able to speak.

That you would rather jump int the Jaws of an Anj-"

That you would rather jump into the Jaws of an Anj-"

"I suppose." Starlight responded and like nothing happened, the two continued their walk towards the classroom.

"I suppose." Starlight responded and, like nothing happened, the two continued their walk towards the classroom.

Can't you just magic up a ball of water in dump it on him?

Can't you just magic up a ball of water and dump it on him?

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I don't need help! I need a hunting horn main to buff me! :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh:

Thanks, will correct the mistakes when I get home. Which will be who knows when...

Hmmm I can see the promise this story has, thus I shall watch it.

Wait Flash dump Twilight for Applejack :pinkiegasp:

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Huh? Did I miss something? Again??? :rainbowlaugh:

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Oh, I guess that wasn’t what you meant? :twilightblush: Nothing wrong about Flash ending up with one of her friends since it would make a nice friendship lesson for Twilight to face about one of her friends taking her former boyfriend. :derpytongue2: I have seen a few stories with that idea once before years ago. Good times.

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I can't figure out where I mentioned Applejack at all xD
Also, good point on the friendship lesson. Seems like Twilight hasn't learned that one yet.

"That you would rather jump into the jaws of an Anj-"

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Oh, I miss read this quote for Applejack... woops :twilightblush: I guess I should have glasses on when reading :derpytongue2:

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Speaking of, maybe I should wear mine while writing. The amount of typos I have is too damn high!

Yep this will be one to watch! I look forward to this story great premise, sets up all these things everyone in universe takes for granted and we're all like WTF?! Lol consider me intrigued.

Plz do continue soon and don’t let it die

Thanks for the new chapter. Loved the bants between Max and Finn

Here are some corrections, but having written it on the phone all is forgiven.

The first two years were the hardest, trying to catch up on bureocracy, politics, economics, culture and everything else a princess is supposed to know.

bureaucracy

The worst were the greed driven nobles, something which Canterlot has no shortage of, as they tried to push their one-sided agendas by lies and deceit.

something of which Canterlot has no shortage of -or- something that canterlot had no shortage of

swing of things and quickly became a wise, righteous and noble ruler that Celestia hoped she would be.

became the wise, righteous...

took a big step forward and brought imporvements to lives of ponies or any other creature in Equestria.

improvements

Today also marks ten years to the day of her rule over Equestria.

marked (You got it right further down the paragraph.)

make this anniversary the biggest even Equestria has ever seen.

make this anniversary the biggest that even Equestria had ever seen.

Hotels, motels, inns and even some rooms were booked months in adavance to accomodate all the guests that would attend which was basically everyone.

accomodate all the guests that would attend, which was basically everyone.

Some argued that her beauty exceeded that of Celestia and Luna, somethin that Twilight dismissed every time it was brought up

something

the lavander alicorn smiled warmly at her friends antics.

friend's

"NO! I was going to say that I would consider a make out session on my bed!"

make-out

Everycreature suddenly got quiet and the music died down as Twilight rose frok her seat.

suddenly went quiet
from

The love and dedication you show every dsy is what drives Equestria to be the great nation that it is."

day

The crowd was bkisfully unaware of their incoming visitor.

blissfully

Instead of putting in a coma-like sleep,

Instead of putting it in a coma-like sleep,

none of which even grazed the beasts thick hide. "Thoes fliers from earlier stood no chance either-"

beast's
those

His legs weren't like a ponies at all.

pony's

The warrior did a simple upward swipe before resting it on his hip, ready to strike

The warrior did a simple upward swipe with his sword before resting it on his hip, ready to strike.
-or-
The warrior did a simple upward swipe before resting the sword on his hip, ready to strike.

Rathalos got tossed side to side by each one bofore finally toppling down, it's head landing inches from Twilight.

before

when she looked down she saw a three feet tall gray cat with armor that matched the hunter's.

three-foot-tall

Namielle?" Twilight looked to the hunter.

Namielle?" Twilight looked at the hunter. -or- Namielle?" Twilight looked to the hunter for an answer.

"It's been five years laddie! Little to late to play the pr-"

"It's been five years laddie! Little too late to play the pr-"

And lastly; is rathalos a proper noun or a common noun? You have presented both throughout the chapter.

Keep up the good work.

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Thanks! I'll correct the errors once I get to my laptop!

Also, I wish more people would comment :fluttercry:

Hi sorry my comment is late was busy the past few days. Just wanted to say another great chapter I can’t wait for more! This is probably my fave mlpxmh fic so I pray this doesn’t get cancelled

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Thanks!

Also, any recommendations for a monster hunter crossover I can read?

This is my first time reading a MLP x Monster Hunter crossover as I know next to nothing about the Monster Hunter franchise but I am looking forward to reading more. :twilightsmile:

I can't wait to see Max's reaction once he learns that Twilight has encountered humans before and of course meeting Pinkie Pie, Discord, Fluttershy as well as Celestia and Luna.

she is going to burn the pancakes isn't she

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That, or make them so they look perfect but the flavor instantly induces vomiting.

"Hey." Twilight turned the open notebook to Max who flinched. "Why does it only say FUCK IT in red letters for Rajang?"

as a non-MH player I would also like to know.

. Then he felt a pleasant warmth wash over his hand. Once the feling was gone, Twilight removed her hands and Max stared at his hand in disbelief. /quote]

Once the feeling was gone.

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As a Monster Hunter player, trust me, you do not :rainbowlaugh:

Great now Rathalos escape it's going to be a deviant variant next time it reveals it's going to be a Dreadking Rathalos thanks a lot Flash ruin everything.

I can still enjoy the story even if I don't know much of anything about Monster Hunter. I may ask a question or two in the comments but don't feel obligated to answer. You're correct in that if I cared enough or thought I needed context through knowledge then I can look it up at a dozen places online.

There must be a way to end this without killing it and he's going to find it.

There had to be a way to end this without killing it and he was going to find it.

"Oy! Put some back into it!" Flynn yelld from the sleeping rathalos's back as the guards were pushing the heavy cart it was sleeping on.

Flynn yelled from the sleeping rathalos

One guard had the bad luck of being struck by the rathalo's foot and sent flying into a tree

One guard had the bad luck of being struck by the rathalo's foot and was sent flying into a tree

Flynn sprinted on all fours and retrieved his katana that he co carelessly left on the back of the cart. .... Flynn jumped up on the tail and in one swift moce cut it cleanly.... Turning it's head back he saw the palico out of the bag and staring at him

Flynn sprinted on all fours and retrieved his katana that he had so carelessly left on the back of the cart. .... Flynn jumped up on the tail and in one swift move cut it cleanly.... Turning his head back he saw the palico out of the bag and staring at him

the grumpy old cat was running from guard to guard and checking for injuries, givng them some green liquid which seemed to lift their spirits

the grumpy old cat was running from guard to guard and checking for injuries, giving them some green liquid which seemed to lift their spirits

It was a miracle nopony died, thanks in no small part to Flynn carrying antidote for the rathalos's poison.

It was a miracle nopony died, thanks in no small part to Flynn carrying the antidote for the rathalos's poison.

To be fair, they weren't trained for this, but that still didn't exuse them for what they did.

To be fair, they weren't trained for this, but that still didn't excuse them for what they did.

"That crazy cat wanted us to carve it for materials

"That crazy cat wanted us to carve it up for materials

"Oh he did?" Flash laughed. "Well, why the two of you were getting all chummy with eachother while I almost died!"

"Oh he did?" Flash laughed. "Well, why were the two of you getting all chummy with each other while I almost died!"

"They're here to help us and I will not have your little jealousy outbursts put our cooperation at risk!

"They're here to help us and I will not have your little jealous outbursts put our cooperation at risk!

Sfter about another five minutes of running, Max finally saw the end of his journey.

After about another five minutes of running, Max finally saw the end of his journey.

Never mind all. Thought that was Thor not a Monster Hunter.

Oh, never mind. Thought this was going to be a Marvel Thor thing not a Monster Hunter one. XD

"I am a captain!" Flash shouted back.

I am a surgeon

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