Princess Twilight Sparkle has been the sole ruler of Equestria for ten years. The nation thrived under her rule, even more so than with her predeccessors. No catastrophe in sight. Until now...
Monsters unlike Equestria has ever seen suddenly appeared. Taking control of land, air and sea, Twilight and her little ponies stand helpless before the rampage. But as fate has it, and always will, a hero always comes to the rescue.
Who is the author of the art with Twilight?
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I will take it down if they want. Otherwise it stays up for a month or two before I get my hands on a comission.
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I don't care if the artist wants it or not. I just liked the art
Thanks
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Any chance we could get a link because agree that's a amazing pic of Twilight?
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here you go
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Thanks really appreciate it.
Twilight looks hot in the picture
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Well, she is older in the story so I thought it fit perfectly.
You have Thor in here?? Or that's just what the male protagonist looks like?
And this is Monster Hunter by the tag?
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Nope, not Thor, just for reference.
It's basically the same character I have played since Morrowind, which is Skarin. I just changed his name here so I don't confuse people.
Glad to see you back in the saddle, though 5 MH games at the same time is an addiction. Get help.
Liked before I read it since I already expect to enjoy it.
Otherwise, enjoy some grammar schenanigans.
occupied
also 'sole ruler' and 'co-ruler' are mutually exclusive.
demanded be delt with.
They soon reached the new classroom, with all manner of young creatures waiting for their teacher.
The pegasus skidded to a halt, completely out of breath and barely able to speak.
That you would rather jump into the Jaws of an Anj-"
"I suppose." Starlight responded and, like nothing happened, the two continued their walk towards the classroom.
Can't you just magic up a ball of water and dump it on him?
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I don't need help! I need a hunting horn main to buff me!
Thanks, will correct the mistakes when I get home. Which will be who knows when...
Hmmm I can see the promise this story has, thus I shall watch it.
Wait Flash dump Twilight for Applejack
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Huh? Did I miss something? Again???
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Oh, I guess that wasn’t what you meant? Nothing wrong about Flash ending up with one of her friends since it would make a nice friendship lesson for Twilight to face about one of her friends taking her former boyfriend. I have seen a few stories with that idea once before years ago. Good times.
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I can't figure out where I mentioned Applejack at all xD
Also, good point on the friendship lesson. Seems like Twilight hasn't learned that one yet.
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Oh, I miss read this quote for Applejack... woops I guess I should have glasses on when reading
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Speaking of, maybe I should wear mine while writing. The amount of typos I have is too damn high!
Yep this will be one to watch! I look forward to this story great premise, sets up all these things everyone in universe takes for granted and we're all like WTF?! Lol consider me intrigued.
Plz do continue soon and don’t let it die
Thanks for the new chapter. Loved the bants between Max and Finn
Here are some corrections, but having written it on the phone all is forgiven.
bureaucracy
something of which Canterlot has no shortage of -or- something that canterlot had no shortage of
became the wise, righteous...
improvements
marked (You got it right further down the paragraph.)
make this anniversary the biggest that even Equestria had ever seen.
accomodate all the guests that would attend, which was basically everyone.
something
friend's
make-out
suddenly went quiet
from
day
blissfully
Instead of putting it in a coma-like sleep,
beast's
those
pony's
The warrior did a simple upward swipe with his sword before resting it on his hip, ready to strike.
-or-
The warrior did a simple upward swipe before resting the sword on his hip, ready to strike.
before
three-foot-tall
Namielle?" Twilight looked at the hunter. -or- Namielle?" Twilight looked to the hunter for an answer.
"It's been five years laddie! Little too late to play the pr-"
And lastly; is rathalos a proper noun or a common noun? You have presented both throughout the chapter.
Keep up the good work.
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Thanks! I'll correct the errors once I get to my laptop!
Also, I wish more people would comment
Hi sorry my comment is late was busy the past few days. Just wanted to say another great chapter I can’t wait for more! This is probably my fave mlpxmh fic so I pray this doesn’t get cancelled
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Thanks!
Also, any recommendations for a monster hunter crossover I can read?
This is my first time reading a MLP x Monster Hunter crossover as I know next to nothing about the Monster Hunter franchise but I am looking forward to reading more.
I can't wait to see Max's reaction once he learns that Twilight has encountered humans before and of course meeting Pinkie Pie, Discord, Fluttershy as well as Celestia and Luna.
she is going to burn the pancakes isn't she
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That, or make them so they look perfect but the flavor instantly induces vomiting.
as a non-MH player I would also like to know.
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As a Monster Hunter player, trust me, you do not
Great now Rathalos escape it's going to be a deviant variant next time it reveals it's going to be a Dreadking Rathalos thanks a lot Flash ruin everything.
I can still enjoy the story even if I don't know much of anything about Monster Hunter. I may ask a question or two in the comments but don't feel obligated to answer. You're correct in that if I cared enough or thought I needed context through knowledge then I can look it up at a dozen places online.
There had to be a way to end this without killing it and he was going to find it.
Flynn yelled from the sleeping rathalos
One guard had the bad luck of being struck by the rathalo's foot and was sent flying into a tree
Flynn sprinted on all fours and retrieved his katana that he had so carelessly left on the back of the cart. .... Flynn jumped up on the tail and in one swift move cut it cleanly.... Turning his head back he saw the palico out of the bag and staring at him
the grumpy old cat was running from guard to guard and checking for injuries, giving them some green liquid which seemed to lift their spirits
It was a miracle nopony died, thanks in no small part to Flynn carrying the antidote for the rathalos's poison.
To be fair, they weren't trained for this, but that still didn't excuse them for what they did.
"That crazy cat wanted us to carve it up for materials
"Oh he did?" Flash laughed. "Well, why were the two of you getting all chummy with each other while I almost died!"
"They're here to help us and I will not have your little jealous outbursts put our cooperation at risk!
After about another five minutes of running, Max finally saw the end of his journey.
Never mind all. Thought that was Thor not a Monster Hunter.
Oh, never mind. Thought this was going to be a Marvel Thor thing not a Monster Hunter one. XD
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