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The Rarispy


I'm just a guy who loves Pepsi and Time Lords in funny hats.

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This story is a sequel to The Sweetest Gem


The second episode of The Gems Trilogy. Rated Teen for strong language and sexual implications.

Rarity becomes desperate to find her special somepony once and for all as an air of romance in Ponyville continually surrounds her. But little does she know that her own best friend has been secretly harboring a crush on her for a very long time.

This story is told from the perspectives of both Rarity and Fluttershy, and will alternate between their POV's by chapter, with occasional third-party narration and multi-POV chapters to extend the story further.

Chapters (24)
Comments ( 865 )

You know what,m I'll wait till it get's approved by the site. Mostly because I need sleep, and the whole couple more chapters thing. So I will wait, and this story is going to be gold anyway. I'd say it will be in the featured box within an hour of release, maybe quicker. Anyways I need sleep.

Ah Rarishy, it's like catnip to me.

Very good start. I'll defintely keep my eye on this. :pinkiehappy:

“Bon-Bon has found somepony! Daisy has found somepony! My friends! My own sister, for the love of Celestia! She’s found someone before I have! And even Applejack! APPLEJACK, of all ponies!”

Somepony not someone.... :ajbemused:

Um. It's a good start, but some of the phrasing you've used is a bit odd.

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Spike's a pony? :rainbowderp:

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I haven't written in third-person narrative for a while, so I suppose I'm a little rusty.

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In pony language they always use pony in everything! :applejackunsure:

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But if I change it to 'somepony', people will start correcting me saying Spike's not technically a pony!

I CAN'T WIN! :raritycry:

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Just tell them that its a pony thing! Besides..... spike also says somepony too doood :ajsmug:

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Dont look at me like that its true! :ajbemused:

I have to agree with Rarispy on this one, even in the show they refer to groups as "everyone" or individuals as "someone" on occasion, (check out the CMC episode where they're interviewing the mane 6 and Pinkie Pie pops out of the cart "where's everyone going?").

Also, wow, I look like a colossal nerd in this post... fair enough. :pinkiehappy:

Corrections!

"the magical sights I think I’ve ever experienced.”
Probably meant "the most".
"up in her chock."
Presumably "shock".
"you all know that turned out.”
"how" between "know" and "that".
"clearly long-winded."
This would mean that the individual in question is obviously capable of speaking at great length. If Applejack is out of breath, then just "winded" would do.

That is all.
Now then, loving it! The part with Sweetie Belle and Spike in the library... :facehoof:
I knew what it was, knew precisely what was actually going on, and still, Sweetie Belle described how I felt exactly.

Please keep writing, I'll keep reading!

Are you fucking kidding me? Dammit... I was about to go to sleep, and then YOU of all writers have to post something? The guy who with his last fic: ripped my heart from my chest, diced it up into thin lines, sprinkled pheromones, honey, d'aaaww, and paprika into the mix, before forcing me to snort the intensity directly just posted up another story? Well, goodbye good sleeping habits, hello RariShy shipping.

Edit after reading: Fuckin' yup. Just, yup. Waitin' on that next chapter.

Awesome start to the long awaited sequel. Also, I knew they'd be giving massages, I think I may have even said it in your blog post.

:raritystarry:I can't wait. Dear, if this doesn't turn out well; I will be very very disappointed:raritywink:

AHMAHGAWD

Edit: That was good. Can't wait to see how the band, the butterfly, and Rarity's situation will all tie into this story. Also curious to see what Rainbow's secret is.

When I first spotted this story...At first I was:pinkiegasp:...and then I was:raritystarry:...and now I'm:yay:
For that have a:twilightsmile::raritywink::pinkiehappy::ajsmug::rainbowkiss:

PS
My sleep is now:flutterrage:

I approve of this shipping. :twilightsmile:

can't wait to read more

However, I must say that I’m feeling rather nourished.

I will never say "I'm full" again, this is just too good!
:raritydespair:Don't cry Rarity, there's a special somepony out there for you, in fact she's closer than you think.
Implied TwiPie:pinkiegasp::twilightsheepish: DO WANT!
One small thing, Caramel is AJ's cousin in my head canon so that part was awkward, but I will be able to put it aside for this story. Do continue!

Oh Celestia! Another story from you! :yay:
Rarishy? Yes! :yay::heart::raritywink:
Also I laughed at the scene of Spike and Sweetiebelle. :rainbowlaugh: She feels dirty after a claw massage. :rainbowlaugh:
Good one.

Bronydragon:moustache:

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Rainbow's secret is that she is the butterfly, in order to have the best flying abilities in all of Equestria she must periodically become a mere butterfly to regain her strength. I thought that was obvious, but I guess some people can't see what's right in front of them. :rainbowhuh::pinkiecrazy::derpytongue2::ajbemused::facehoof::duck::unsuresweetie::fluttershysad: Why's everypony looking at me like that?

Ok, two things really bugged me this chapter. The first is the spectacled butterfly, does the butterfly wear glasses or I am thinking of the wrong word. The second is Applejack's dialogue, using words like "swell," "by-golly," and not to mention "boy-and-howdy." Nobody talks like that anymore, especially not Applejack, that kind of dialogue belongs to 50's PSA's, not a modern cowgirl pony

The ponies don't seem very surprised for just seeing a butterfly wearing glasses! :unsuresweetie:

If you were trying to say it had spots on it, the word is "speckled".

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Yes, you can!
In the show one of the characters once said, "Someone"
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Seems readable. It is readable.

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Read TSG to find out what her secret is. Chapter 3, I believe.

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Damn it, my vocabulary has failed me again.

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HUZZAH!

Oh dear. This won't end well. Keep going.

*settles into comfortable position and waits patiently*

I knew that Cloudchaser was r63 Nikki Sixx as a pony!

“Oh. … Oh, I see. Goodness, Twilight. I never took you as one to be interested in mares.”

“Really? Because I was hoping you would be!” said Pinkie.

“Why?” asked Twilight, tilting her head.

“Mmm, I dunno!” she replied, shrugging.

We're already a Chapter in and we get more TwiPie shiptease! I am astounded good sir :pinkiegasp:

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Aaaaand Rarity's gone Twilight-style-bonkers. Head for the shelters and put on your hard-hats all, this is gonna be a bumpy ride!

Also, Butterfly!Discord, kindly stop trying to target the sapphire like its a MacGuffin needing immediate destruction!

Don't really like Rarishy, but this is still going to be amazing.:twilightsheepish:

1308087 Ah..... Good 'ol Steel Resolve. What would Equestria do without you?

1315883 Rarishy is best dramatic ship.

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*looks at your profile*

Oh, wow. You weren't kidding. :rainbowderp:

Hell yes! The sequel is here! It's nice to see other pairings be included in this story, including my favorite Applejack shipping, CaramelJack. I know Fluttershy can do it and she will.

1316680 You've delved directly into the area most relevant to my interests here my friend. I can't wait to see where you go with it.

So....10 bits rarity dies by the end of the week:trollestia:

TWIPIE...All of my want! :yay:

Rairshy is cool, but TWIPIE! :twilightblush::heart::pinkiegasp:

I thought you were setting up AppleDash with that dialogue :pinkiesad2:
oh well, it still has other shippings I like, like RariShy and TwiPie(possibly):pinkiehappy:

"A great sewer" Has nothing to do with fabric. As it tends to be full of crap.
I believe you mean a seamstress or a tailor.

So much LOL's espcially that 'It's not what you think it is scene' with Spike and Sweetie Belle. :rainbowlaugh:

One question though Rainbow Dash can become a butterfly, how in Equestria is that even possible? :applejackconfused: I'd expect that from Pinkie Pie or maybe even Fluttershy but certainly not Rainbow Dash and don't you dare pull Discord's "What fun is there in making sense?" line on me! :flutterrage: Wait a minute, please don't tell me that butterfly was Discord, cause if it is I'm afraid Equestria is doomed! :twilightoops:

1320587 If it was that easy this fic would already be over. :trollestia:

1308621 *Sighs* How do people STILL not know this? Some/no/anyone -> Some/no/anyone. Some/no/anybody -> Some/no/anypony. You only change it to pony when it would have been body normally. Someone stays someone, always. It's only when it would be anybody, or somebody, etc, that it would change to pony. The More You Know!

Do I sense TwilightxPinkie Pie in the future? And what was up with that butterfly? I have a feeling Rarity is going to crash n burn before somepony (:fluttershysad: ) gets the courage to finally say how she feels.

That is no ordinary butterfly.:duck:

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