Let's start at the beginning, one last time.
My name is Peter Parker and for the last eight months, I have been the only Spider-man! Now in a new school and a new town, I have to balance homework, superheroing and friendships.
Nothing I can't handle...right?
This story begins a few months before Equestria Girls.
Second Person only applies after Prolougue.
This is a good start
Keep it up
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Sweet! I'm looking forward to where this is going.
A (seemingly) original story right out of the gate, is very compelling, especially for a crossover with one of my favorite superheros.
You pull it off though. I actually want to see more of the world you created.
There a few sentences that could be broken up, but that's small potatoes at this point.
Well I'm intrigued. Can't wait to see what comes from this. Keep it up.
This is looking to be quite promising so far! No one seems out of character, the grammar and spelling seems on point, (which can be quite rare) and overall I look forward to seeing where this heads in the future!
Update is comming. Had a writers block. Plus Zeb Wells ruined Spider-man for me for a few months