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Forgetful


Remember That One Story I Wrote? Me Neither. / October Do Be Approaching... 🐈‍⬛ 🎃 🍫

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Twilight's life path is splintered by a temporal disturbance from a near future.


Random story written long ago out of boredom.

Featured on 9/20/22.

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Comments ( 16 )

Happy to see your creativity flourishing again! :heart:

Praying for your success. Stay you, bestie! 🤗

Comment posted by sjones17515 deleted September 21st

As an outspoken Future Twilight fan, I hated most of this, but I really loved the ending!

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Lol, just fun scribbling, I actually don't have a problem with Future Twilight, the fact she followed in Celestia's hoofsteps is beyond beautiful.

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Thank Mew, I had this written but unedited just hanging about, decided to edit and put out officially.

"Who?" Twilight scrunched her muzzle confused as the light faded back into the abyss, leaving only a gangly long version of herself standing before her.

"Sweet Celestia, when did I become anorexic!?" Twilight gasped at such a horrid glimpse into her future.

What a wholesome message about body image!

A light blue unicorn passing by underneath couldn't help but be pelted atop the head by the falling tome, she rubbed her hoof through a frazzled snow white mane in defeat. She wasn't the most popular of ponies with hardly any real friends, but things just seemed to never work out for one Trixie Lulamoon.

"Traveling isn't all it's cracked up to be," Trixie mumbled just knowing that tome was going to leave a bump, her eyes falling over the book with a thin raised brow.

"The Mare In The Moon?" Trixie felt an odd shiver run down her lower back, the night slowly engulfing the day around her as everything grew dim.

Arching her eyes upward to the sky, she could make out the ominous silhouette of a dark creature stretched across the moon.

"Oh my!" Trixie bit her lower lip and gathered up the book.

Celestia must be warned.

I'd like to see this storyline.

Poor S1!Twilight, she thought she could escape destiny, be her own person, but (like a river) it runs along the path of least resistance. I suspect if Trixie wasn't nearby the book would of conked a passing Starlight or Moondancer leading Twi to decide "Well, I can't be an all powerful Mary Sue if I'm a cult leader or shut-in!"

A very funny light-hearted story. Loved it.

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poor S1Twilight doomed to become a Celestia recolour and upstaged by the worst of her knock offs

Wait, hold up. Does that mean that this will cause Trixie to become Alicorn Trixie, causing Alicorn Trixie to do this exact thing to her, resetting it back to Twilight so she'll become an alicorn and do this to her causing Alicorn Trixie to do this exact thing to her, resetting it back to Twilight so she'll become an alicorn and do this to her causing Alicorn Trixie to do this exact thing to her, resetting it back to Twilight so she'll become an alicorn and do this to her causing Alicorn Trixie to do this exact thing to her, resetting it back to Twilight so she'll become an alicorn and do this to her causing Alicorn Trixie to do this exact thing to her, resetting it back to Twilight so she'll become an alicorn and do this to her causing Alicorn Trixie to do this exact thing to her, resetting it back to Twilight so she'll become an alicorn and do this to her causing and OH NO I'VE GONE DERPY-EYED

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future twilight really messed up she put the future into trixie hoofs, celestia save us

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Hee, how's that for a metaphysical paradox. :rainbowlaugh:

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Thanks, happy to share a giggle or two.


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:rainbowlaugh:


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Every universe full of reflections of our best and worst. Though Cult Leader Twilight sounds like a lark.


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Hoofs of fabulous showmanship, she'll do fine....just a bit more flashy....

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Why do I get the feeling "Flashier Twilight" (aka Trixie) will just be a Jojo character effectively. Monologues, posing, showy magic use (albeit not to the level of canon)

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:rainbowlaugh:I can totally picture the posing.

This made me laugh.

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