Rumble has a very normal day at school.
Written for the Anonymous contest in the Quills and Sofas group.
Preread by The Sleepless Beholder and LuckyChaosHooves
Chapters (1)
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Open for Art Commissions. I write gay romantic comedies with ponies now. Get off my back, MOM.
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Holy, this is super good!
I do not know what is happening but shit has meet fan.
If anything, I think your Pinkie conveys the creepiest vibes I've read lately. Goodness. The untold everywhere around Rumble, the ending. Yeah, this one is worth a few reads because it's one of these cases where the paranoia is warranted yet... Is the outcome that bad? What's Cherilee doing? I love the subtext and the larger world hinted. Oh, the growing unease and distrust. Good work.
the suspense hits so hard here its making my stomach hurt
Look, as much as creepy as it is, one can't deny how funny this is at the same time
Very interesting, while I'm aware that having it not explained or shown what is going on, I would have personally liked if even just a little bit more was shown what was going on. Not necessarly one that now fully explains what is going on, but giving some sort of direction, to make it a bit more unique than "something unstoppable is spreading across each pony"
But back to what we have, it took me, admittetly, a bit too long to figure out that strange things were going on, maybe because I'm not familiar with the character we see through, but once I got what was going on I was drawn in.