In the human world,"A Crystal Prep’ student by the name of Moondancer found some notes of Twilight Sparkle’s research on Magic before her transfer to Canterlot High-School, and decide to complete them by resuming them as her own, repeating Sci-Twi’s mistakes.
Sunset Shimmer wake up with memories stopping in the middle of the fight, back in Equestria, unsure of what transpired. And if that wasn’t enough, she’s now an Alicorn, and back before Twilight moved to Ponyville.
(Story title might change in the future.)
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'In the human world,"A Crystal Prep’ student by the name of Moondancer found some notes of Twilight Sparkle’s research on Magic before her transfer to Canterlot High-School, and decide to complete them by resuming them as her own, repeating Sci-Twi’s mistakes.'
'Sunset Shimmer wake up with memories stopping in the middle of the fight, back in Equestria, unsure of what transpired. And if that wasn’t enough, she’s now an Alicorn, and back before Twilight moved to Ponyville.'
Thats not good.....
Ok, the first chapter started of WAY too fast
😳
Do not rush it
OMG i always love this plot about sunset retuning to past, thanks for the update
Groundhog Day intensifies
This is a good and interesting premise and I’m definitely looking forward to more, but the pacing is a little fast. Celestia and Sunset seem to accepted her time travel a too fast. I’d recommend exploring characters reactions to things, both big (like Sunser being an alicorn) and small (a small detail here is Sunset shows no reaction to Celestia asking if she’s been to Equestria before. A question Celestia should know the answer to.) These are just two examples that I hope will give you some inspiration to improve your craft.
Pacing is extremely rushed.
So Sunset’s world, where her friends and wife are, is now in the clutches of a Midnight Moondancer without the elements. How is getting back to save them not Sunset’s number one priority?
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Thanks, and sorry I accidentally posted the second chapter far too early. It’s nowhere near finished.
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I would have (and will) explain it latter.
As I said earlier in this message, I made the error of posting an unfinished chapter.
But, if you don’t have anything about spoilers: She has theorized she will need a full set of active elements of harmony to have any hope of returning home. (Does it mean the equestrian 6, all 7 with her own, she don’t know yet.) Of the elements from the human world, only her own is still active. And nobody reactivated the Equestrian ones yet, so…
This needs spelling and grammar checking.
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Will have to rework and prolong it.
Thanks for your advices. Might revisit the first chapter using them. As for this one, I fear I posted it far, FAR too soon.
Good start of the story. Very intriguing.
8,7/10
Any chance this will be continued?
No offense, but something like this already exists. "Sunset Reset" is called history.
How could this happened?
Hope to see it continued.
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There's always room for more. Sunset Reset kinda gets lost in the whole teen drama relationships stuff and doesn't progress time much.
By throwing Sunset in at this juncture, it's probable that the author wants to focus on Sunset's impact on season 1.
I.m personally looking forward to reading more.
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While Sunset Reset was alright, it was overly edgy and the sequels didn't so much as jump the shark as they did backflips over the entire ocean.
Besides, taking a similar concept in a new direction is perfectly fine.
11429515 You forgot the word, 'Unfortunately'. It started out so well, then went down a sinkhole of teen drama and angst. Plus the Twilight hate. So much Twilight hate.
I'm sorry to see this stalled.